ayo check in dawg
Rules:
u spit first
10 line minimum
1 day time limit
check in dawg, pz out, Se7eN ~1~
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ayo check in dawg
Rules:
u spit first
10 line minimum
1 day time limit
check in dawg, pz out, Se7eN ~1~
chekin in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .............
yo ur shit is rancid/
nobody can help dis kid so dont bother/
these r ur last hours on top/
jus like a sandle ur gonna flip, flop/
top 2 bottom in 1 day flat/
its a 1 way track u aint comin back/
im pickin up da slack, cause ur shit is wack/
even hewie, dewey, an loius could out quack ur ass/
jus like a cupcake, all sof an chewy/
everytime u spit its nasty and gooey/
ima stop dis kid b4 he makes another mistake/
thinkin he can take on da king, u cant take dis/
y am i even battlin ya, u's an incest, rapest.......
Ayo,
I hate 2 be mean, but your style came a little clean
Especially from a pussy like you, who rides a broke dick-machine
Guy's so into rap music, that I consider him illeterate and stupid
You must be love struck 4 losing, so you aimed and shot cupid
King Crunch, I felt the name,so I'll take you out 2 lunch
Your skills left this battle,cause your period interrupted your punch
So up 2day, this kids style juss got literally and physically ate
This kid likes getting beat, so dawg let's set another battle date
I got you, you hating and well dawg mothafuck you too
My style has more kick and sole, then the bottom of your shoes
Ayo,
I hate 2 be mean, but your style came a little clean
Especially from a pussy like you, who rides a broke dick-machine
Guy's so into rap music, that I consider him illeterate and stupid
You must be love struck 4 losing, so you aimed and shot cupid
King Crunch, I felt the name,so I'll take you out 2 lunch
Your skills left this battle,cause your period interrupted your punch
So up 2day, this kids style juss got literally and physically ate
This kid likes getting beat, so dawg let's set another battle date
I got you, you hating and well dawg mothafuck you too
My style has more kick and sole, then the bottom of your shoes
Ayo,
I hate 2 be mean, but your style came a little clean
Especially from a pussy like you, who rides a broke dick-machine
Guy's so into rap music, that I consider him illeterate and stupid
You must be love struck 4 losing, so you aimed and shot cupid
King Crunch, I felt the name,so I'll take you out 2 lunch
Your skills left this battle,cause your period interrupted your punch
So up 2day, this kids style juss got literally and physically ate
This kid likes getting beat, so dawg let's set another battle date
I got you, you hating and well dawg mothafuck you too
My style has more kick and sole, then the bottom of your shoes
welp Uppin' x1************************************************ ***********************************************
Sorry comp fucked up the battle post and I posted the battle 2x and I am still uppin' x1 it was a mistake the uppin'
yo nice verse se7en but why did u post the shit 3 times???
king crunch....man......try collect'n yugioh cards or sumthin leave rap alone ur not do'n urself any favors
both spits were kinda simple but se7en comes away with this one
vote: 7
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uppin # 22222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222 22222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222 2
uppin #3 .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........
uppin' x2 come on people******************************************** ************************************************** *****
uppin #4
come on peeps vote .................................................. ......................
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last uppin come on i need 2 start another battle peeps vote..........
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L's breakdown;
punches - se7en
personals - none
flow - se7en
opener - se7en
closer - king
creativity - se7en
OVERALL - se7en
no idea what dat three posts wa bout but da win goes to seven
harder punches , better flow and jus overall better
any body please drop an honest vote here, i'll return da favour
peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...60#post1069260
uppin' votes x3 ************************************************** ************************************************** ****
The king is dead, Long live the king.............................................. .............King Seven
Breakdown...
Punches- 7
Flow- 7
Creativity- 7
Multis- Couldn' see any...
Opener- 7
Closer- KC
Enjoyment- 7
Overall- 7
Nice battle...sorta one sided....but a'ight....
Hit this up with an honest vote...except for KC cause he already did
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...95#post1069395
Uppin' x4************************************************ ************************************************** ****
uppin' x5, last time please vote people don't sleep on it,*************************** *********** *******
well what to say. not a great battle. Krunch you came was to simple and you didnt even throw punches at 7. Hes shit was oright.. good enough to win... and thats all that counts. So 7 gets my vote
plz return a honest fev
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105253
king crunch - weak strucutre, flow fell off a lil, vocab is basic, no multis, no wordplay, punches didnt hit hard at all, weak personals
seven - structure is good, flow is pretty good, vocab is good, no multis, ok wordplay, some of the punches hit pretty hard, personals were ok
conclusion - seven takes this in structure, flow, punches, and wordplay, so therefore, he gets my vote
VOTE - SE7EN
can u poll that vote dawg********************************************** ************************************************** ****
ok so se7ven....whatever the crazy spellin is there easily took this krunck your ryhmes were way too simplistic up the vocab and work on punches that aren't sexual anyway this was not a fair battle in my opinon krunch hit up the whackness e,ergency center ...one..