10 lines max
1 hr to spit
no feedin
no hate
check in b4
good luck pz
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10 lines max
1 hr to spit
no feedin
no hate
check in b4
good luck pz
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erased....because BID's a herb an erased his......
Verse Retracted becoz CarsonJet is a Pussy & deleted his
sig coz i dissed his ass about it
Feu-Xion was the only person to see
the real full battle..therefore he voted
fairly
so this battle does not stand pz
SO DONT VOTE
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BI Most Definitely Got This With Wittier And Better Punches......Carson Had Some Good Lines, Here Is A Quotable From You Both Though
First Line Was Tight, Good Shit ActuallyQuote:
Originally Posted by CarsonJetX2:
guaranteed..I merk him a third time and change my name to JetX-3
I mean please...what do u expect from him...he reps the peasantry(avatar)
LoL, Almost Missed The CrashinJet Thing Funny, Finders Fee Line Was Tight TooQuote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained:
thats a Small Dig..see ya Sig and ya Skills are Matched Quality..
if Rappin Defined Wealth..then this CrashinJet wud be in Poverty
Opener - Carson
Closer - BI
Punches - BI
Wordplay - BI
Personals - Carson
Vocab - Carson
Enjoyment - BI
Vote - BI
Honest Vote, Can You Two Peep Either My Battle With X Ecution Or Kaos
can't vote i'm in carson's crew but this was definitely a good battle....creative for both.....nice spits...
ite gr8 battle and versus from each props,
b.i- you had nice punches but lacked in flow and personals man, also better wordplay,
carson-good flow and good personals man, good structure and wity but hard punches.
overall- close shit but carson cus hit shit made me laugh and rolled of your tounge with consistensy,
plz hit this both of you with an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105059 .thx...........pz
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hmmmmmmmm very, very close battle.
BI Detained- as usual very nice, very creative an an very good drop.
made me laugh,Quote:
it dunt Bother me..that Carson beat ma old alias..its his best Win!!
but Carson not being Pre-Written is like havin Tonic w/out the Gin
the crashinjet line has been used before,
carsonjetx2- ONG i never seen you come as ill as this yet, nearly every line was witty an personal!!!
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Well..let the spit commense..ur about to see how BI.Dents
Face the facts,I can rip u in present,past,or future tense
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another Hardcore agent-got it inverse tho..the agents = nothing(sig)
Left chalk traced-no blood erased...I got him 3-d Blushing...
my vote carson he had everythin better, an his verse was on of those that you actually want to read, an not jus skim through!!!
ill battle props to both
Thanx 4 the votes
uppin 3rd
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plz man return the favor honest vote needed thx dogg http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105059 ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,thx..............pz
ok, here it is:
Carson -
your opener was weak... leaning on a win from his unelevated past, yes, it's a personal, but almost everyone that battled him as Brix could say somethin like that (sorry Brix lol)
your punches were more bragging about yourself than hurting him... not too bad, but nothin great or dope
closer = sucked
B.I.Detained - weaker than I have seen lately, as a matter of fact, after reading it a second time... I think it stank. The punches were played and weak, the personals (if you call them that) were like flickin a booger instead of throwing a punch... all round just below what you are capable of. No offense, just honesty, I have to say vote = Carson.... maybe you will take this as an incentive to stay sharp and not let this happen again... show me one decent punch and prove me wrong.
sorry bro, you know I respect your skill but I have to be honest
vote = carson
Ight i want peeps to know CarsonjetX2 removed his sig so
half of my punches dont count nomore
dont know if he did it purposely but now the battle will be closed pz
fuckin sore loser whiner ass mufucka LOL
WE ALL REMEMBER THE LAST TIME ME AND YOU BEEFED... so save us the time and get to walkin now lol
vvv
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creates beef w/ yet more peeps
k!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sigh*
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this kids a dope.....me or BID would rip him...............
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^^ you talkin to me? lol
I was defending your win here.... but that's OK, I guess you jumped on the hate $pit bandwagon
Ive seen u spit............................
u have no room to critisize either spit...............
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I AIM'd u what happen'd.....the link went down and the image wasnt made by me.....Quote:
Originally posted by B.I.Detained
Ight i want peeps to know CarsonjetX2 removed his sig so
half of my punches dont count nomore
dont know if he did it purposely but now the battle will be closed pz
^^ shit... that's just the voting rules (criticism). don't fuckin be a whiner.... and read my shit and tell me that again...
man I swear yall act like "it's just the net" but then someone critiques your verse and you get all pissy about it... grow up
ok i read them again.....
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Originally posted by CarsonJetX2
Ive seen u spit............................
u have no room to critisize either spit...............
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uppin....(?) I've lost count.............
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Unless Ya Puttin Ya Sig Bk In This Battle Then Dont Up It
Or You'll Jus Be Dq'd.............................................. .........
Feu-xion Is The Only Peep That Saw Ya Sig N Voted
The Rest Jus Dint Get Ma Punches...ver Very Very Unfair
what a baby....
i thought u weren't a herb.....
theres nothing i can do about the sig...I didnt make it...
also....were even because u changed all ur avatar garbage.....
the voting will continue...regardless of what u think...
naw it will be closed
pz
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Only a herb wud carry a battle where the punches make no sense
it won't..........but keep thinkin that
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