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No Feeding
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R Votes
No Hate Votes
You spit first.
I'll spit when I have time.
Good Luck.
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token-
Token's scared^^ notice the sig switch from dis bitch
Tryna be slick?Ima make his Future Bright..jus like Chrits
Fuk what fits, Ima quad lip on this *coin-n-watch him spend
I get the kinda message he sends...
Cool he's a mod look^^he can even post a 100 less chek in
He's only force'in rules because of his anal freind The End
Who What and When?...Please..Token, It's only L's i lend.....
Toke'is like nintendo..He's a classic but can be broke by dust
Come on..look at this git,He kisse's so much ass his lips look rust
merk'd from dawn till dusk...dis token suck'd more than tummy tucks
Carson-
You couldn't spit fresh facts if you were a backwards tactic
Said you'd win but..
..You had to lay face up on the keyboard just to back it
Fucka chance of winning... Your odds make evens look bad
It's sad.. The only time you could son is by becoming a dad
I won't just KO you.. I'll abc.. and 123 you as well
And Laugh my ass off cuz..
..Fucka dell... Dude, you're getting an L!
And there's no reversing it, kid.. Bitch all you want
Cuz you won't just need a style switch..
..You'll need a change of font!
Nothin will help you, kid.. You're beyond assistance
Sure you're noticed.. I hope this verse intrigued your exit-sense (existance)
shud be hot shit.........................ill vote 2moz if its still up got no time............good luck..............................pz
Thanks but No freeposting please. -Token
Good battle....
punches....token came hard with punchlines..they had me laughing
...........carson... came with tha personals... but they didnt compare
flow.... about even.. i was feeling them both
creativity....token definately took this....tha titac.... and laying on tha keyboard......very original
so
vote-Token
Hit this up with an honest vote....thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104705
Decent battle, quality for Fl. Here's the breakdown hoes. .
Token's scared^^ notice the sig switch from dis bitch
Tryna be slick?Ima make his Future Bright..jus like Chrits
Filler
Fuk what fits, Ima quad lip on this *coin-n-watch him spend
I get the kinda message he sends...
Cool he's a mod look^^he can even post a 100 less chek in
Thats supposed to be a punch?
He's only force'in rules because of his anal freind The End
Who What and When?...Please..Token, It's only L's i lend.....
No.
Toke'is like nintendo..He's a classic but can be broke by dust
Come on..look at this git,He kisse's so much ass his lips look rust
merk'd from dawn till dusk...dis token suck'd more than tummy tucks
Blah, focus on punches more than multis.
You couldn't spit fresh facts if you were a backwards tactic
Said you'd win but..
..You had to lay face up on the keyboard just to back it
NO
Fucka chance of winning... Your odds make evens look bad
It's sad.. The only time you could son is by becoming a dad
Played
I won't just KO you.. I'll abc.. and 123 you as well
And Laugh my ass off cuz..
..Fucka dell... Dude, you're getting an L!
LOL.. good punch and flip.
And there's no reversing it, kid.. Bitch all you want
Cuz you won't just need a style switch..
..You'll need a change of font!
Haha nice.
Nothin will help you, kid.. You're beyond assistance
Sure you're noticed.. I hope this verse intrigued your exit-sense (existance)
Nope.
Carsons verse was blah, Tokens was blah for most, but he had two good lines and thats why he gets my vote.
ya token's was some hott shit......carsons was good too but token had some clever ass lines.......so i gotta give it to Token (the dell was hot shit)........
i was feelin yours........so vote for me
Opener:CarsonJetX2
Closer:CarsonJetX2
Flow:CarsonJetX2
Entertainment:CarsonJetX2
Enjoyment:CarsonJetX2
Vote:CarsonJetX2
This is an obvious d/r vote. Plus it's invalid. I won't bitch. But I'll be watching you. Vote gone -Token
i gotta say i think tokens was better in every cat but flow so my vote goes to token
return the favor and vote on my battle wit jab
Nice retarded vote......UPPIN(1)...u'd figure u'd vote right on a mod's battle.....
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Didnt drop my link- Vote on this Honestly please!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...#post1062883..
I agree wiv Carson alot of people seem 2be D/R bcus a Mod is battlin!No beef wiv Ne1!
dissagree with some of these votes man.....
Carson came very nice, but Token was pure jokes..
Flow:Both
Multis:Carson
Punches:Token
Metaz/Wordplay:Token
Humour:Token
Structure: Carson
srry heres a "proper" vote
token:had aight flow,nice punches and good humor the personals werent to bad either stucture was good too
carson: lacked good orig punches and humorous lines flow was great tho structure was good no dif between your and tokens
vote:token
heres the link to my battle plz vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103958
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104588
vote for this illest battle
Warned! No posting links without voting -Token
carsonjet took the win i like the nintendo line
anybody gonna battle me im stuck dont know how to start a battle but i willl rip threw anybody
Post a callout in Bitch Slapped located in Front Lines. -Token
Carsonjet
Token's scared^^ notice the sig switch from dis bitch
Tryna be slick?Ima make his Future Bright..jus like Chrits
^^^4/10.... y are u talkin bout chrit?..ok personal
Fuk what fits, Ima quad lip on this *coin-n-watch him spend
I get the kinda message he sends...
Cool he's a mod look^^he can even post a 100 less chek in
^^4/10...made no sense and who cares bout the check-in
He's only force'in rules because of his anal freind The End
Who What and When?...Please..Token, It's only L's i lend.....
^^ 7/10 nice.......
Toke'is like nintendo..He's a classic but can be broke by dust
Come on..look at this git,He kisse's so much ass his lips look rust
^^5/10 first line was dope second was whack
merk'd from dawn till dusk...dis token suck'd more than tummy tucks
^^4/10 didnt really make much sense
Token-20/50......
Token
You couldn't spit fresh facts if you were a backwards tactic
Said you'd win but..
..You had to lay face up on the keyboard just to back it
^^ 5/10 nice......
Fucka chance of winning... Your odds make evens look bad
It's sad.. The only time you could son is by becoming a dad
^^7/10 nice shit
I won't just KO you.. I'll abc.. and 123 you as well
And Laugh my ass off cuz..
..Fucka dell... Dude, you're getting an L!
^^6.5/10 dope
And there's no reversing it, kid.. Bitch all you want
Cuz you won't just need a style switch..
..You'll need a change of font!
^^ 4/10 wasnt feelin it much
Nothin will help you, kid.. You're beyond assistance
Sure you're noticed.. I hope this verse intrigued your exit-sense (existance)
^^ 7.5/10 dope shit props...
Carson- 30/50.....
Token took this battle. He had harder punches and was very creative. Carson took the personals catergory but it was not enough. Toke jus came harder and was mor eoriginal. Nice drops by both
PLease take the time to drop an honest vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103729
Thanks for the votes everyone..
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ok heres the breakdown....No hate please.....
Flow:Carsonjet....His shit was easily readable....none of that but this or but that to let the flow off....u gotta read fast on Tokens to get the flow going.
Structure:carsonJet....Same as i said...The strucutre is small and nice to read. Not to hard on tokens either
Punches:Token...He had some Majorly hard hitting punches like this line.omg....And there's no reversing it, kid.. Bitch all you want
Cuz you won't just need a style switch..
..You'll need a change of font!
Personals:Token...Hard hitting and very strong ...Carson had some majorly hard hitting punches to...But i was feeling more from token.
Multis:Token...Many were seen in his pauses...Like the buts and shitl....who cares the I read fast so yeah.
Overall:goes to token...yeah thats about it ...No hate .....Alright then my vote goes to token...hit my battles up plz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104513
Thanks peace