give me yo guidlines and itll be whatever
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give me yo guidlines and itll be whatever
No Feeding/Biting/Recycling
5 bars=10 lines MAX
and checkin in, i'll post something later, im off
PiZ
Aight D. Silver, ya lil ol sliver of envy/
me who you wishin' you could be//1
Auckland?...it's more like Wakland-Fagland on our hand/
dawg, you think ya shit grand but ya sound like a boy band//2
You born cursed in '87, what I need to pull a 1-8-7?/
Naw dawg, you too good to go to hell, you'a go to heaven//3
See, when you anialate you just injure tha victim/
unlike me, I anialate and kill tha piece of septim//4
D.Silver, ya fag, on hags like you I gag, no white flag/
you had no chance ta drop it, now you in a body bag//5
Five barz for ya man, now hit yoo shit up as soon as ya get on.
Oh boy...
Believe you can murder me, you got no skill
Cause your lyrics tha only thang you can kill
Hell if you dropped cds you won't sale
You'll fall off faster then Fat Joe grinding rails
Rhyming and you don't mix well, give it up now
I thought you onli sung, being from Chers town
Throw in tha towel like new US Muslim recruits
Cause i ain't your uncle kid, check your DNA for proof
blah keyed... votes
CMON YALL VOTE....
Shit, i wanna move on to tha elevated section yo.... cmon
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idk its close but i think that silver took dis 1 his jus flowed better, and had better wordplay.......................................... ..............
could u plz hit up these ones
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104859
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104412
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Yall straight up killin me....
VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE!!!
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d.silver prolly gets this one, cause he actually had punches. other guys was VERY wack. check this out lil Nephew.
Nephew, Check This Out
no hate. just instigatin ya to elevate...
Silver...came with a more complex
verse... although the lines were shorter
than J's it had better wordplay...flow...
and structure.....so
v/D.
Nookie vs Profit
Nook vs Castrol
need these closed peeps. many thanks...
Dayum once I reach tha posts required I'll drop a fair vote in yall bouts also... it'll be a while...
UPPIN #3
VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
sliver does get this one,
he had a better structure,
better punches, an he stayed on topic,
nephew J, you didnt seem to saty on topic, your first lines were usually good, but your second was jus somethin to make it ryhme!!!
peace
SOMEONE VOTE ON THE 730 VS KRAKKA T BATTLE
CMON
OH YEAH
IT WAS A CLOSE BATTLE BUT ITHINK WITH BETTER PUNCHLINES
THE WINNER IS D SILVER
VOTE: SILVER
4th UP
Cmon yall
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d.silver gets this not a good battle but his verse actually punched man.both of ur structure was off, and flow was dodgey but d got this.
return the favor plz now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105857 thx........pz
wtf, that shit was wack as hell, ok enough with the small talk
flow-j
punches-d
struct-d
personals-d
vote=d
Upping 5,
I will return the favour
word, no need to explain shit really lol.....
vote - silver.
hands down..