..First 7 votes to win...
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..First 7 votes to win...
The longevity of your words beckons a "short-coming" like brevity/
exceptionally, I make "readers laugh" like "stand up comedy"/
because I insult you phonically/
like I got "chris farley standin next to me", and I be/
usin his punchlines to "keel you over" like "flipping ships"/
"rippin your face off", illustrates how "impossible this mission is"/
attrition hits, equal detrimental blasts like fists/
you couldn't give me "half your mind"/ because then I'd have "all of it"/
initiate keratectomies on the readers of this ish/
then they'd be "seein darkness", exactly the color that my soul is/
I'm in control now/
like tyranny I take your typographical script/
and formulate hypothetical myths/
about how your ass got ripped/
some proclaim "a gay man did it!"/
but how could that be when you "don't get out" like "life convicts"/
for one you aint secular or religious, possibly promiscuous, and yeah, your rhymes "aint tight" like a "virgin" is!/
so it could have been a battle gone wrong against "Penskills"/
I "lit your expression" up like "carvings in a pumpkins"/
committed seven counts of "prostate stabbin", like "knockin out your emissions"/
killin people by the "numbers in your house", like "long division"/
with "precision like dentists", I "drill you for the crown"/
astound onlookers when they realize "that you're going down"/
"propounded like applications", your crew will replace you with "lyrical intoxication"/
drunken defeated ya, repleted and conceded ya/
"wasted you like oxygen", you're lucky to be "breathin", brah!/
yo...
you sound real brainy-but bitch i wonder do you give brain?//
coz as soft as your lyrics are-my torturous flow is insane//
took 1 look at my school book an was frozen straight shook//
penskills rather nofrills, baby help me, teach this nigga how 2cook//
bitches like you watse time-trying to rhyme, girl you'll neva shine//
lyrics sound so shitty an elementary, sounds like u cant rhyme or u blind//
is it an offence 2 mention tha big wart in your soul//
this will explain the lack of talent in yo skit, now bitch reveal that mole//
show everybody yo real beauty,h.i.v- and a flow like mace//
chomp chomp-feeding yo fat ass stomach-nofrills what i tel ya bout chomping wit out saying grace//
feeling down so low-everybody see's u as a waste of space//
like the ugly duckling in the pond, u aint earned yo place//
Gods mistake, you fucked up, how long b4 u break//
i eat yo wack lyrics breakfast-and wipe the crumbz of my plate//
you fake-1 of them gothic bitches who slit thier wrist//
aint no mercy-shit trick-ready 4 me to slit yo lip//
penskillz got dis one. his shit jus was better all the way around.
but my vote doesnt count............................................. ......................
..Penskills[1]
..80shots[0].............................
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explain ur votes....Or it will be deleted.....anyhow explain like this.Quote:
Originally posted by ~King~cruncH~
penskillz got dis one. his shit jus was better all the way around.
but my vote doesnt count............................................. ......................
Ok this is what i thought.
penskillz: structure VERY VERY VERY long...and to much to read.....Punches:came good and tough keep them coming...Personals:welll well well. same as the punches but there could be better ways u can express them.complex was bad. so was the flow.
Overall percentage: 5/10
88shots:Stucture^same as i said the other...To much to read hurts my eyes...narrow it down...U both lose on this...next thing punches were ill...but not enough....Personals came weak...u need to make ur structures smaller and the personals and punches will be easy to catch. Flow was off a little bit...
overall percentage: 4.5/10
u see the overalls...u do the math
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Originally posted by Tirhc
explain ur votes....Or it will be deleted.....anyhow explain like this.
Ok this is what i thought.
penskillz: structure VERY VERY VERY long...and to much to read.....Punches:came good and tough keep them coming...Personals:welll well well. same as the punches but there could be better ways u can express them.complex was bad. so was the flow.
Overall percentage: 5/10
88shots:Stucture^same as i said the other...To much to read hurts my eyes...narrow it down...U both lose on this...next thing punches were ill...but not enough....Personals came weak...u need to make ur structures smaller and the personals and punches will be easy to catch. Flow was off a little bit...
overall percentage: 4.5/10
u see the overalls...u do the math
..Penskills[2]..
..80shots[0]..
Penskills
The longevity of your words beckons a "short-coming" like brevity/
exceptionally, I make "readers laugh" like "stand up comedy"/
because I insult you phonically/
like I got "chris farley standin next to me", and I be/
Good vocabulary but bad structure
usin his punchlines to "keel you over" like "flipping ships"/
"rippin your face off", illustrates how "impossible this mission is"/
attrition hits, equal detrimental blasts like fists/
you couldn't give me "half your mind"/ because then I'd have "all of it"/ Some good metaz.. but u might wanna re-word
initiate keratectomies on the readers of this ish/
then they'd be "seein darkness", exactly the color that my soul is/
Sounds like a poem lol
I'm in control now/
like tyranny I take your typographical script/
and formulate hypothetical myths/
about how your ass got ripped/
some proclaim "a gay man did it!"/
but how could that be when you "don't get out" like "life convicts"/
Get Rid of the /< - - ppl here dont like em lol
for one you aint secular or religious, possibly promiscuous, and yeah, your rhymes "aint tight" like a "virgin" is!/
so it could have been a battle gone wrong against "Penskills"/
I "lit your expression" up like "carvings in a pumpkins"/
committed seven counts of "prostate stabbin", like "knockin out your emissions"/
killin people by the "numbers in your house", like "long division"/
Umm.... 1st to 7 voteS? around here its 5 lol
with "precision like dentists", I "drill you for the crown"/
astound onlookers when they realize "that you're going down"/
"propounded like applications", your crew will replace you with "lyrical intoxication"/
drunken defeated ya, repleted and conceded ya/
"wasted you like oxygen", you're lucky to be "breathin", brah!/
Wow.. u need some work.. and r u a girl or guy? lol
80Shots
you sound real brainy-but bitch i wonder do you give brain?//
coz as soft as your lyrics are-my torturous flow is insane//
So much easier to read.. but get rid of the //<- -
took 1 look at my school book an was frozen straight shook//
penskills rather nofrills, baby help me, teach this nigga how 2cook//
Wack... lol wtf?
bitches like you watse time-trying to rhyme, girl you'll neva shine//
lyrics sound so shitty an elementary, sounds like u cant rhyme or u blind//
LMAOOO nice last line
is it an offence 2 mention tha big wart in your soul//
this will explain the lack of talent in yo skit, now bitch reveal that mole//
LMAOOOOOOo... wow funny
show everybody yo real beauty,h.i.v- and a flow like mace//
chomp chomp-feeding yo fat ass stomach-nofrills what i tel ya bout chomping wit out saying grace//
That dont rhyme to me
feeling down so low-everybody see's u as a waste of space//
like the ugly duckling in the pond, u aint earned yo place//
LMAO... hillarious.. i like humor
Gods mistake, you fucked up, how long b4 u break//
i eat yo wack lyrics breakfast-and wipe the crumbz of my plate//
Dont ever diss God like that... seriously
you fake-1 of them gothic bitches who slit thier wrist//
aint no mercy-shit trick-ready 4 me to slit yo lip//
Nice stereotype
Although 80shots had good structure... penskills had good vocab and both of yall had humor...
vote-penskills..
..Penskills[3]Quote:
Originally posted by Dimez
Penskills
The longevity of your words beckons a "short-coming" like brevity/
exceptionally, I make "readers laugh" like "stand up comedy"/
because I insult you phonically/
like I got "chris farley standin next to me", and I be/
Good vocabulary but bad structure
usin his punchlines to "keel you over" like "flipping ships"/
"rippin your face off", illustrates how "impossible this mission is"/
attrition hits, equal detrimental blasts like fists/
you couldn't give me "half your mind"/ because then I'd have "all of it"/ Some good metaz.. but u might wanna re-word
initiate keratectomies on the readers of this ish/
then they'd be "seein darkness", exactly the color that my soul is/
Sounds like a poem lol
I'm in control now/
like tyranny I take your typographical script/
and formulate hypothetical myths/
about how your ass got ripped/
some proclaim "a gay man did it!"/
but how could that be when you "don't get out" like "life convicts"/
Get Rid of the /< - - ppl here dont like em lol
for one you aint secular or religious, possibly promiscuous, and yeah, your rhymes "aint tight" like a "virgin" is!/
so it could have been a battle gone wrong against "Penskills"/
I "lit your expression" up like "carvings in a pumpkins"/
committed seven counts of "prostate stabbin", like "knockin out your emissions"/
killin people by the "numbers in your house", like "long division"/
Umm.... 1st to 7 voteS? around here its 5 lol
with "precision like dentists", I "drill you for the crown"/
astound onlookers when they realize "that you're going down"/
"propounded like applications", your crew will replace you with "lyrical intoxication"/
drunken defeated ya, repleted and conceded ya/
"wasted you like oxygen", you're lucky to be "breathin", brah!/
Wow.. u need some work.. and r u a girl or guy? lol
80Shots
you sound real brainy-but bitch i wonder do you give brain?//
coz as soft as your lyrics are-my torturous flow is insane//
So much easier to read.. but get rid of the //<- -
took 1 look at my school book an was frozen straight shook//
penskills rather nofrills, baby help me, teach this nigga how 2cook//
Wack... lol wtf?
bitches like you watse time-trying to rhyme, girl you'll neva shine//
lyrics sound so shitty an elementary, sounds like u cant rhyme or u blind//
LMAOOO nice last line
is it an offence 2 mention tha big wart in your soul//
this will explain the lack of talent in yo skit, now bitch reveal that mole//
LMAOOOOOOo... wow funny
show everybody yo real beauty,h.i.v- and a flow like mace//
chomp chomp-feeding yo fat ass stomach-nofrills what i tel ya bout chomping wit out saying grace//
That dont rhyme to me
feeling down so low-everybody see's u as a waste of space//
like the ugly duckling in the pond, u aint earned yo place//
LMAO... hillarious.. i like humor
Gods mistake, you fucked up, how long b4 u break//
i eat yo wack lyrics breakfast-and wipe the crumbz of my plate//
Dont ever diss God like that... seriously
you fake-1 of them gothic bitches who slit thier wrist//
aint no mercy-shit trick-ready 4 me to slit yo lip//
Nice stereotype
Although 80shots had good structure... penskills had good vocab and both of yall had humor...
vote-penskills..
..80shots[0]
Breakdown:
Punches: Penskills
Flow: Definetly 80Shots
Creativity: Penskills
Vocab: Penskilsl
Opener: Neither
Closer: Niether
Enjoyment: Penskills
Overall: Penskills
Ya both need ta elevate a lot, but decent battle all aroun'...but Penskils took it by a lilbit...an Pen r ya a guy or a girl?
..Penskills[4]Quote:
Originally posted by Gangsta One
Breakdown:
Punches: Penskills
Flow: Definetly 80Shots
Creativity: Penskills
Vocab: Penskilsl
Opener: Neither
Closer: Niether
Enjoyment: Penskills
Overall: Penskills
Ya both need ta elevate a lot, but decent battle all aroun'...but Penskils took it by a lilbit...an Pen r ya a guy or a girl?
..80shots[0]
looks like u got this penskills, lookz like i gotta elevate, well thats what ima do-good battle-in ya, and yo thanks to all the replies! keep them commin
the current vote score is:
Penskills: 2
80Shots: 0
so how come penskills saying she got 5.
u need more than a hundred post to vote on a pole, only the votes on the pole count!
so the current score is:
Penskills: 2
80Shots: 0
Punches: Penskills
Flow: Definetly 80Shots
Creativity: Penskills
Vocab: Penskilsl
Opener: Neither
Closer: Niether
Enjoyment: Penskills
Overall: Penskills
Soz 80shot but pen was better
Damn this was long and painful to read!
Penskills has the vocab, mulit's, complexity, the wordplay and the punches.
By far...
80 Shots takes the format easily (though both you cats need ta shorten ya shit way the fuck up)...
And perhaps the metas...
But neither one came personal at all...
Points off for both of you.
Anyway, better punches and some good attempts at flow win this for Penskills, the way I see it.
Peace
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Punches:Penskills
Flow:80Shots
Creativity:Penskills
Vocab: Penskilsl
Opener:tie
Closer:tie
vote=Penskills
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pplz vote on this its being slept on...
Nice battle...
Penskills.. structure was wack.. the good thing about it was the use of multies that helped the flow along.. nice punches metas throughout.. some creative bars..
80Shots.. I thought you had it after reading the first bar or so then realised that most of your vocab, punches etc.. were real basic.. hardly made impact.. with some creative witty punches you mighta took it, but otherwise its an easy win for Penskills..
Vote - Penskills
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penskills had more basically...80 shots definatlely had a better flow...pens ' was a lil awkward but a lotta the disses hit, althoguh some were awkward, they were intelligent and insulting..80shots' disses were pretty generic...i mean they were good...educated...but penskills took it..80shots jsut didnt do enough, if he had doubled the length o his verse and kept that flow he woulda got it..but its penskills by a shear strength in numbers (of words)
wow this battle was very one sided.. the way i see it penskills came harder
with punchlines.. flow. and metas.. 80 shots had a better structure his shit was easier to read.. however i vote based on punchlines and disses.. therefore my vote goes to penskills