aight rules are as follows
no hate d/r or crew votes
no biting feeding or freeposting
verses due 30min after checkin
you must check in before you post
10line min
15line max
goodluck
get at me
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aight rules are as follows
no hate d/r or crew votes
no biting feeding or freeposting
verses due 30min after checkin
you must check in before you post
10line min
15line max
goodluck
get at me
checkin in i'll drop b4 5*********************************
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evrytime this boi flows he gets off topic
he'll prolly read my verse and decide not ta drop his/
battlin me kid results in a 5-0, thats me knockin him out
you couldnt spit hard shit rappin wit rocks in ya mouth/
if i approch the mic that means bombs are comin
i be on such gangsta shit you hear it and ya mom starts thuggin/
this bitch aint black but claims it, i think he white
he aint keystyle what he post i call a pre-write/
nows ya start and the same shit for ya end my friend
*flow* ull crash you down so hard youll never *surf* the web again/
this bitch is, and imbread, spawned by insest
note ta ghost you suck at rappin find a different intrest/
you fuckin wit me it seems you a dumb ghost
cuz i been ridin this before you rplyed ta dis you only has one post/
see bitch you cant hit me cuz im hard ta spot
i leave you danglin from the cielin like that avatar you got/
im so hot last time i grabbed the mic it started smokin,
but you went ta pick it up and instently it was frozen/
not chance ta beat me for you not wit ya best hopin,
i verbaly murder and then you realy be floatin/(ghost float duh)
get at me
^^ nice drop..
il peep this battle when other kid drops
holla back
PEEP ME AN XTREME DAIGNOSISI SHITS TITE..
hes a fag tho
but ..wuteva
PEE Pit ill be back..
late honestly tho...
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uppin so ghost sees the forum hopes thats ok
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uppin cuz ghost cant find the forum srry
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u steppin 2 me, its really not an issue,
cuz i'll blow a hole in ya like u was made of cheap tissue/
my flow is high climatic and it's really intelligent,
the shit u be spittin is just straight up irrelevant/
when you see a black coupe slowly ridin' on ya side hide,
cuz i'll roll the windows down and now it's a drive-by/
i walk down ya block niggaz scatter like leaves,
i'll pop more holes in ya than swiss cheese/
i ain't Jay-Z but i got 99 problems,
pop 99 shot and your lives i robbed em'/
my rhymes strike lkie lightning and clap like thunder,
u soft like white bread so i'll call you wonder/
this shit is way too hot for u to handle,
u like cake..... but i blew out ya candles/
u spittin against me well i'm certain you'll lose,
cuz my wordplay even got Bill Gates confused dude/
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Dialect got this
battlin me kid results in a 5-0, thats me knockin him out
you couldnt spit hard shit rappin wit rocks in ya mouth/
was quite nice and i feel even tho he didnt have alot of wordplay in general his punches were stronger
but for the 2nd guy he had a nice versefor his first battle...i liked the cheese line lol....
but nice battle
v/Dialect
uppin for votes #2
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yo dialect if my vote would count it would b 4 u. cause everything was better and u destroyed him ..............
vote dialect otyp
heres the breakdown....
Flow=Dialect....His was smaller and simple
Strcuture=Dialect...simple...
complex=dialect....again...
Punches=very weak punches....dialect though
personal=no comment....
overall=dialect....
yup he got this.....
hit my battles up Peace...i spent time on this....return the favor honestly.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104513
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103792
Dialect
Pretty mediocre overall..
But then again u didnt need much to beat this kid..
You basically edged every catagory..
Better punches basically, include some more,
personals though. ok
Overall ok
Blackghost
..to simple.
add more complexity.
Your structure was ok..u just need to work on punches etc..
You'll get better. nice try.
Overall below average.
vote: Dialect
uppin #3 uppin #3 Uppin#3
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also hit me up for votes at
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103757
ayo, plain and simple dialect merked that cat and left his ass on the side of the road.... better flow, puncher(thought not to hard, you can do better), and structure( even though i thought some lines were kinda off)
vote dialect
yo get at these
audio:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102425
text:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104688
votin dialect, once again he shows personal disses n good flow n structure very similar to tha way he beat my ass lol lol
any chance u can vote on mine please???
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104452