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house rules...10-14..due 2 hours afta check in.
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where u at man?
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aiight dogg im here i'll spit in a few
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Cannabarz is a mad-savage, that'll attack like I-pods an black-eds
So if this geeks gets infront of my sword I'll pop his squad of black-heads!
An that's your pasty-face, your losses against wins is resembling-mines
aint' gettin-to-can like sodas in Covieniant stores on assembly-lines!
ten 10X the worse emcee by looking at my record and then straight-at-yours
Your a vacant-whore when i put my caps-into-black backwards like his avi-ator!
oh my lord! his swords are not victorious enough to stop my jive-tries
I mean, I beatin black guy on the spot like racist officer drive-bys
Go ahead, an check-the-polls, I'll wreck-your-tolls and im ripping-with-murder
and put the teflon to Black guys bird-chest, without flipping-the-burgers!
word...like lepracy wards in basketball theirs none ya skills we feel-on-the-net!
Blackguys off of sesame street, he's the cast that was stealing-the-set!
..a quick key..sorry for not coming hard
AIIGHT IM CHANGIN MY STYLE UP A BIT:
{ITS Like YOUR ON A_DIET CAUSE YOUR RHYMES_ARE DEPRIVED AND_YOUR GETTING [SqUashEd]}
{EVEN WITH A MICROSCOPE AND TWEEZERZ U COULDNT FIND YOUR COCK TO JERK [OFF]}
{LIKE A CRACKED OUT FAG IM [A_[DICK_TED] TO [BEATIN] U}
{[Cum][IN] HARD MY PUNCHES R DIRECT U FALL DOWN IN DEFEAT, AS I SCREAM [FUCK YOU]
{U THIKIN YOU COULD STEP TO BLACKGUY MAKES YOU LOOK LIKE A [DUMB FUCK]}
{I'LL GIVE YOU 1 CLUE ITS YOUR MOMMAS PUSSY IM GON [PLUCK]}
U PROBABLY GONNA COME HARD BUT I'LL LEAVE YOUR ASS [CURRUPT]}
{IF YOU COME WIT PLAYED OUT GAY SHIT THEN YOU SHOULD OF THOUGHT TWICE ABOUT [SHOWIN UP]}
{YOUR JUST LIKE THE REST U DONT KNOW WHEN TO GIVE [UP]}
YOU KNOW IT NOT CONSIDERED A PROFFESSION WHEN YOUR CAREER REVOLVES AROUND GETTING YOUR BUTT[PLUGGED]}
THEFINISHER
MY PUNCHES KLOK YOUR DOME CAUSE THEY PACK NO [RESPECT]}
THIS BATTLE WAS JUST FOR FUN I HAVE NOTHING BETTER TO THEN KEEP BITCHES LIKE YOU IN [CHECK]}
KINDA WEAK OH WELL
change your style^^again....
punches- canna-alot harder, better content overall in his
flo- canna-went together nicely....black guy?
meti4's- canna- alot witty'er.....creative
multi's- canna-well put together multi's...not overdone-
overall- canna.....he was way better here....black was outta his league
drop an honest vote here thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&pagenumber=1
Well firstly lets state the obvious. blackguy, your structure is stuffed.
Other than that Canna took this with better flow and punches. Just different class really.
Please vote honestly on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103864
correction
last line
MY PUNCHES KLOK YOUR DOME CAUSE THEY PACK NO [RESPECT]}
THIS BATTLE WAS JUST FOR FUN I HAVE NOTHING BETTER TO do THEN KEEP BITCHES LIKE YOU IN [CHECK]}
UPPIN(1)
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I thought cannabrk took this battle
his punches an metas took it
ugot alot of wins kid
damn...one loss u wanna battle me
Vote- cannabrz..just a better verses
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104049
^^^^^^^^ PEEP ME AN CARSON ITS HEAT>>>1
blackguy, listen to these people, change your style. It looks like a drunk retarded 5th grader wrote it.
Can had better punches, flow, wordplay etc. Every category.
"Your a vacant-whore when i put my caps-into-black backwards like his avi-ator!"
ha!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103069
Cannabars wins in a big way.
Black guy you have to go to the whackness Emergency Center and work your issues out there.
Canna, quit battling weak ass noobs like this guy. He has no right to be in the same THREAD as you.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103997
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uppin (2)
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cannabarz obviously merks him. takes all categorys. punched harder...and fuck man. black guy....that new style/structure is wack. it makes it hard to read and makes it look like a hacker instead of an emcee wrote it. lose it fast. [][]//[][\[][ isnt helpin ur rhymess, its just hurting my eyes stressing to read.
i agree with aragorn....
vote: C
hit this up both of you please since i took the time to vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104090
uppin...
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pretty one sided battle here i think, canna came much harder with the punches, and the verse was put together with much more skill, and better wordplay..... better in all catagories....vote=cannabarz.....pZ