10 lines
you drop first.
no hate, crew or d/r votes
good luck
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10 lines
you drop first.
no hate, crew or d/r votes
good luck
Check Check
U sittin der on the computer wit no clue wat imma bout to do/
My rhymes are hurtful and painful,when i bring it to u i bring it wit pain/Dat gives me a signal dat Im defeatin this game/
Ur mom and dad are cryin cuz u such a damn shame/
When i first heard of you I knew you was so damn lame/
U a sucka at rappin,in real life u a fucka dat aint happenin/
Im an unstoppable force.....also corrosive.....................
But u jus a big gas bubble dat gets explosive/
When i say u need to practice,well its critical/i listen to ur rhymes and der histerical/U think u so smart u sound political.
DONE
Iight you go,you mofo.......U betta start before i use ur mom as a hoe/Imma fuck her then she gon blow/Once we done im gonna get the dough/Man ur so slow to know dat im betta den yo/Fuck that.......ur mom and me can have sex in da snow/Everyone disappointed in u cuz u didnt show/Imma tell u again,u betta flow cuz imma fuck my fuckin hoe
U gonna go???????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????
you were only sposed to drop once!!
Dictate the battles outcome like a young saddam husseien,
You couldnt elevate above me, if u were aboard a plane,
You need to check check your rhymescheme & punches,
Got people following u round,cus we no d/rs hang in bunches,
This kid meek, cant compete or keep up the pace,
No chance of winnin,like migets in a hurdle race,
Im dope, face facts your this sites wackness defined,
Like low watt lightbulbs,you stay permenantly outshined,
Yo my second thing i posted was jus a little that i was doin while i was waitin for u to spit...................Iight ppla vote!@!!!
up.....
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unkwon skills u punches were played, ur ryme scheme was off, the other geeza came a lot harder, and the flow was better and easier to read so my vote has to go to
posiedon
now i tok time to vote, u take time to reply on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103051
hahahahahahahaha....was UNKOWN a joke?......wow my vote goes to POSEIDON right away...actually Unkown had some good punches....haha im j/p POSIEDON.....
VOTE-POSIEDON
can we get some poll votes now
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Originally posted by Poseidon
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My vote goes to posiedon, wow unknown, that was the poorest excuse for a verse I've ever seen
Vote- Posiedon
pose... fucking murdered him..... his structure.... and his flow.... opener...and closer was ill....so
vote-posedian
Thanks, only one poll vote so far.
1-0 to me
up.....
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METAPHORES - ...
VOCABULARY - ...
PUNCHLINES - Poseidon
STRUCTURE - Poseidon
CREATIVITY - Poseidon
PERSONALS - ...
OPENING - Poseidon
CLOSING - Poseidon
MULTIES - ...
FLOW - Poseidon
OVERALL – Poseidon
yo poseidon dat shit was tight if i could vote it would be for u nugga. unknown skillz dat was ok but poseidon ripped u up.
2-0 to me
cant we have some votes to finish this plz :)
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The Sea God takes this with a better, sharper format...
Harder punches.
That utilized wordplay.
And some nice metas.
Kinda played in some spots...
But flipped around well.
Skillz had tha vocab, that was about it.
Direct shots, no creativity or wordplay used.
No personals either...
From anyone really.
Pos with tha better overall attack.
Peace
Poseidon - yo you've got to take this one:
PUNCHLINES - Poseidon
STRUCTURE - Poseidon
CREATIVITY - Poseidon
overall - Poseidon
First person to get my name. Well done :thumbup:Quote:
Originally posted by Born To Kill
The Sea God takes this with a better, sharper format...
Yo thas right......I suck......but yo i cant battle you gotta admit that it was good for my first time.....
yo your right ya shit wuz strait for a first time but u still need to elavate it .........................................
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Yeah ok for you first time, i was worse my first battle
last up..........................
4-0 to me
last vote plz.................
Vote Pos
Reason: He had a more complex and original verse. US had an okie verse just needed to be fixed on flow...punches and some personals. Pos started off good middle was alright and finished fairly well. Over all he jusdt had a more creative and wittier verse
Peace.