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No b/s
Aragorn wins by DQ. Warren Piece banned for biting this line:
Berate this cat quick...and before he gets over it,
He'll break down in saabs like poor Swedish motorists
from http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=615435
-Cprogress
12 line eh?
fuck you, stupid bitch...i get gully when recitin these curses,
i think youre a faggot...but frodo's gayer for writin ya verses,
Aragorn I am the paragon of blazin' raps, my blade'll hack bits,
Of ya mug cause my aim is ta rearrange the face of wackness,
Berate this cat quick...and before he gets over it,
He'll break down in saabs like poor Swedish motorists,
You in poverty yo--you ain't a menacin' thug, ya saggin,
A pair of Lees...old as the original Double Dragons,
But, you're a star waiting to happen as well as a brilliant genius,
That needs to cut his demo... into a-fuckin million pieces,
I guess your nervous battling me.. ya sig spoke your death,
You can make a million mardi gras necklaces with your beads of sweat.
Thank you for participating.
oh and if it'll make you feel better,
check'd in.
Happy?
You can't warrant Warren with Piece
^you'll probably use that in your verse and do it all wrong. Pop guns in your verse too. Make sure you do that and add something gay like my custom text or something similar. Don't forget to make up atleast 3 personals on me. I'm fat, uh ugly and errr I was lookin in Elite to find out how you spit. Yea that's good. Have fun homo.
Damn Wp dat shit was nice but ino u hav got alot beta than that.unless d otha dude is awesome u win!!!!!
Drop ur votes on this aswell please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101986
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Nice drop.
You wanted a fresh start, but you rhymes boring still..
No wonder you tarnished your record... back when you was OriginIll (his old squad, under his alias)
A nice disguise... you NEED disguise for your rhymes
Dress up those played lines... Hide your old record.. 0-9
Looking at you roam these forums posing as a newb...
Makes me sicker..quicker than watching Davinity pose in the nude!
You couldn't throw a punch with rocket launchers for shoulders
You could show me how to stunt...If the topic was "Pussy Soldiers"
Your an herbish vet.. can't find yourself or your purpose yet
A change of name.. not intellect.. that's why you rhymes is simple yet..
Talking shit to K... but never been in war in elevate kid (Elevated Bitch Slapped...)
Stupid bitch with rowboat ass and battleship lips
Last line clarification
A battleship mouth and a rowboat ass= talks big but don't back it up................................................ .................................................. .
I'll break this one down:
fuck you, stupid bitch...i get gully when recitin these curses,
i think youre a faggot...but frodo's gayer for writin ya verses,
nah
Aragorn I am the paragon of blazin' raps, my blade'll hack bits,
Of ya mug cause my aim is ta rearrange the face of wackness,
ok
Berate this cat quick...and before he gets over it,
He'll break down in saabs like poor Swedish motorists,
ha, nice wordplay, good stuff
You in poverty yo--you ain't a menacin' thug, ya saggin,
A pair of Lees...old as the original Double Dragons,
nice, double dragon!
But, you're a star waiting to happen as well as a brilliant genius,
That needs to cut his demo... into a-fuckin million pieces,
wasn't really feeling it
I guess your nervous battling me.. ya sig spoke your death,
You can make a million mardi gras necklaces with your beads of sweat.
tight closer
You wanted a fresh start, but you rhymes boring still..
No wonder you tarnished your record... back when you was OriginIll (his old squad, under his alias)
ok, good to start w/ a person
A nice disguise... you NEED disguise for your rhymes
Dress up those played lines... Hide your old record.. 0-9
good personal again
Looking at you roam these forums posing as a newb...
Makes me sicker..quicker than watching Davinity pose in the nude!
nah
You couldn't throw a punch with rocket launchers for shoulders
You could show me how to stunt...If the topic was "Pussy Soldiers"
uh... ok I guess
Your an herbish vet.. can't find yourself or your purpose yet
A change of name.. not intellect.. that's why you rhymes is simple yet..
ok
Talking shit to K... but never been in war in elevate kid (Elevated Bitch Slapped...)
Stupid bitch with rowboat ass and battleship lips
weak closer... didn't feel it
Overall Warren Peace had it. Aragon had too many weak or questionable punches.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103093
nice battle
lets break this down
Warren
fuck you, stupid bitch...i get gully when recitin these curses,
i think youre a faggot...but frodo's gayer for writin ya verses,
^^^^^Herb.
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LMFAO. I was never in Original Ill. You are sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooo fuckin far off with that one.
boy are you a fuckin idiot.
Quit swaying.....
......................................Don't make me prove.................................
my bad on that i hit enter by accident
breakdown
warren
fuck you, stupid bitch...i get gully when recitin these curses,
i think youre a faggot...but frodo's gayer for writin ya verses,
7/10
Aragorn I am the paragon of blazin' raps, my blade'll hack bits,
Of ya mug cause my aim is ta rearrange the face of wackness,
8/10
Berate this cat quick...and before he gets over it,
He'll break down in saabs like poor Swedish motorists
5/10
You in poverty yo--you ain't a menacin' thug, ya saggin,
A pair of Lees...old as the original Double Dragons,
8/10
But, you're a star waiting to happen as well as a brilliant genius,
That needs to cut his demo... into a-fuckin million pieces,
8/10
I guess your nervous battling me.. ya sig spoke your death,
You can make a million mardi gras necklaces with your beads of sweat.
8/10
overall- 44/60
aragorn
You wanted a fresh start, but you rhymes boring still..
No wonder you tarnished your record... back when you was OriginIll (his old squad, under his alias)
8/10
A nice disguise... you NEED disguise for your rhymes
Dress up those played lines... Hide your old record.. 0-9
hahaha 9/10
Looking at you roam these forums posing as a newb...
Makes me sicker..quicker than watching Davinity pose in the nude!
7/10
You couldn't throw a punch with rocket launchers for shoulders
You could show me how to stunt...If the topic was "Pussy Soldiers
7/10
Your an herbish vet.. can't find yourself or your purpose yet
A change of name.. not intellect.. that's why you rhymes is simple yet..
8/10
Talking shit to K... but never been in war in elevate kid (Elevated Bitch Slapped...)
Stupid bitch with rowboat ass and battleship lips
hahaha 9/10
overall- 48/60
aragorn wins it because of better personals and punches in my opinion
and i think aragorn was sayin that brendan was a herb lol
yo hit this up with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103305
i took the time on this so please return the favor on mine
OK.
This wasnt even close.
Warren killed it with some nice witty punches.
Arragorn had more personals.
However, those personals were mostly made up.
Warren isnt Cam by the way.
As I said, Warren came much better with witty, hard hitting punches and a consistent flow.
Arragorn came decent but he did just as Warren predicted and did not come very well with wittiness in the punches.
Vote- Warren
Thanx Chrit^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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LMFAO Prove what? That you have NO FUCKING clue who I am? Ok I'll tell you what if you know who I am bring it out it's not like I really care this isn't an alias just tired of the other name. So here's your change be the first.
good battle...
tough to say. warren had good wordplay, clever punches too. a pretty good verse.
aragorn's verse was good too, good punches, and wordplay. but his punches were a bit stronger, better personals.
vote: aragorn
i spend time on your battle, spend time on mine.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...did=102139--vs 730
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...eadid=101943-- vs prophacyz
Another sad instance of post count winning a battle.
I pity frontlines.
Why you swaying for him?^^^^^^^^
............................................This battle Stinks of Pussy...................
............................................Get off the D/R Shit..............................
ite here is how it went down...
Warren:
not a bad verse... had some nice idea's, good creative stuff, some lacked a hard direct punch line or witty comment to finish it off, but ya wordplay did help you out, multi's were good, some of ya rhymes did seem out of place, but ya flow was good thru the piece...
Aragorn
not a bad verse either, came with a different approach, using personals to your advantage, if the personals are true then it did well in this battle... some lines still lacked an edge, like could of had a punch or little wordplay to finish off the line, but you got your point across, some okay idea's... put up a good battle...
quite an even battle, close call, so ill have to break it down...
Warren/Aragorn: out of 10:
Punches- 8/6: warren had some witty punches that stood out over aragorns...
Personals- 4/6: aragorn had some good personals and used them well to his advantage, warren didnt have much...
Wordplay- 7/5: again warren had some really tight idea's, and creative stuff that really worked well for him...
Multi's/Flow- 7/7: this was a close call, both had nice multi's and a consitant flow, so i had to call you a tie on this...
Creativity- 8/6: Warren just had the better and more original idea's, really stood out in his battle verse...
Overall:
Warren = 34
Aragorn = 30
a good battle from both, but warren's creative idea's and witty punches stood out in the battle and gave him the edge...
props to both emcee's...
VOTE = WARREN PIECE
flow-warren
personals-aragorn
punches-warren
consistancy-warren
disses-aragorn
warren had a real clean verse alot of multis some good punches and pretty consistant, aragorn followed up nicely, lacking a little in flow, but mad mad personals.. fell off towards the end.. personals weigh heavier in a battle but warren had such a clean flow with witty punches that is sorta leveled that off and through consistancy and heavy hitter i think he edged it, good battle
vote-warren
yeah my computer lagged and sorta by accident i sorta kinda clicked the wrong name and voted for aragorn.. so i dont know how you sort that out figured i'd let u know tho so it can be changed or something, my bad..