Spekta VS The Deception

10-14 lines (5-7 Bars)
No D/R
No Feeding, biting, pre-writtens...etc
All that shit.
first to 5 votes wins
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there is a new 10 line max for the battles now I jus read so I'll drop 10 lines and so do you....Check In I'll drop in 15 minutes no doubt....

aight, check'n in. g'luck. I'll post within 15 mins.


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its 10 line minimum dog. so u can post however many lines u guys decide on posting. sorry for the free-post. just explaining rules

~Opener~
I'll smash that damn gash that you use for a mouth
Thought it was a pussy the way shit just 'oozes' out
~Warm-Upz~
I'm smashin ya spine, killin' ya life 'support'
doin' what your mom should have done wit' you -abort
`n shorten ya life span into non-existence
the way you swallow tha cock, you need no assistance
resistance to pain from my words can't happen
Don't you hear everyone beggin' you "PLEASE, stop rappin'!!"
I slapped ya little pussy- ya mouth fulla nut
these lines filled you up like dick to 'little-teen-sluts'
~Skull Crusha (Finisher)~
You lost control in this battle like I snatched tha remote
Got treated like inmates -you just dropped tha soap...

blah blah -just a quick keystyle. oh, there's 12 lines, so go 'head and hit 12 too.

I spit-scripts, to RIP-kids, and your jus a new ASS-HOLE...
RELIGIOUS?Wit my SHOE ON YOUR CHEST,your jus the LAST SOLE
UP LIFT this kid, fuck his avy he still can't be FLY...
1-3? Joined in NOV? Damn I'm still wonderin why.
Slap you WIT MY DICK, get a SENSE OF MAN HOOD...
Like BLIND BOXERS, your punches don't LAND GOOD...
Keystyles? How?Morbid minds I'm the Locksmith...
Like Math?Well I can predict your battle record,soon to be 1 fith(5)
U Rap?It's hard to take you serious like B Rad...
Best respect YOUR ELDERS, even if I'm NOT ROCKIN PLAID.

Yea jus a keystyl good luck fam

both had rite idea but...
BREAKDOWN-
structure-Spek
flow-......
punches-spek
personals-....
wordplay-Deception
sustainment-None
enjoyment-both
overall-Spekta

both----dont use capitals to highlight shit
and dont use shit like Warm Up...n Finisher etc
to signal beginnings and harder punches

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102236

1-0 still uppin this battle thanks for the votin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......

Ayo, hit this up wit' an honest vote, and I'll return tha favor on any links posted.

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spekta got this wit better punches abnd flow but yea dont use trhat warm-up stuff juss spi ur verse.Deception u verse was ight but your punches didnt hit hard and u need to quit usin capitals and boldi your words,u also need to work on rhymuin better.

Vote:spekta

Thanx for tha vote.........................................
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UPPIN!!!!

Spekta get this one cause he came way stronger than deception
He had a desent opener and stayed strong and the finish was
funny as hell I liked that one
Over all Speckta's punches were more creative
I just wasent fealing ya verse deception
I would vote if I could but just giving feedback so you dont
get slept on

Do me the samn in my battle with $treet Thug thanks

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Hit this up and I'll drop an honest vote on any links left.

Spekta took this one in my opinion.

Punches - close but Septka is a little ahead. Some of Deceptions shit was weak..like that thing about math.

Creativity - tie

wordplay... Deception edged out in this category but there wasn't that much in this battle anyway

overall impact - spekta verse just seemed a little harder to me overall when looking at it as a whole

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103093

---spektas verse

~Opener~
I'll smash that damn gash that you use for a mouth
Thought it was a pussy the way shit just 'oozes' out

lol...good pounch funny opener

~Warm-Upz~
I'm smashin ya spine, killin' ya life 'support'
doin' what your mom should have done wit' you -abort
`n shorten ya life span into non-existence
the way you swallow tha cock, you need no assistance
resistance to pain from my words can't happen
Don't you hear everyone beggin' you "PLEASE, stop rappin'!!"
I slapped ya little pussy- ya mouth fulla nut
these lines filled you up like dick to 'little-teen-sluts'

pounches, metas, wordplay overall a very stronge verse

~Skull Crusha (Finisher)~
You lost control in this battle like I snatched tha remote
Got treated like inmates -you just dropped tha soap...

still laughing strong pounchs wordplay
good structure itt flowed right


---the deception verse

I spit-scripts, to RIP-kids, and your jus a new ASS-HOLE...
RELIGIOUS?Wit my SHOE ON YOUR CHEST,your jus the LAST SOLE

good wordplay

UP LIFT this kid, fuck his avy he still can't be FLY...
1-3? Joined in NOV? Damn I'm still wonderin why.
Slap you WIT MY DICK, get a SENSE OF MAN HOOD...
Like BLIND BOXERS, your punches don't LAND GOOD...
Keystyles? How?Morbid minds I'm the Locksmith...
Like Math?Well I can predict your battle record,soon to be 1 fith(5)

pretty weak verse nuthing really stood out you came pretty soft

U Rap?It's hard to take you serious like B Rad...
Best respect YOUR ELDERS, even if I'm NOT ROCKIN PLAID.

weak closer

-----------my vote--
spekta
for better verse,pouches, metas, wordplay,structure,floe,opener,and closer

vote on my battle in sig

i took the time
--------deception lol delete that win your sig dawg lol----

no hate jus a honest vote

peace

"1-3? Joined in NOV? Damn I'm still wonderin why."
how can u use this punch...ur 0-2

ima put a new category into work..cus i keep seen stuff like this-
Logic- Spek(deception was punch'in in places he couldnt back up himself)
punches-Spek(alot harder more to the point...nice delivery)
flo- Spek(deception was tryin to multi too much...choppy)
multi- Deception(its all he really had)
meti4- Spek(his were way more originall and funny)

overall......spek......ok battle....just think more before u contradict yourself

3-0, me -uppin!!!

I'll hit any links left wit an honest vote....

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3-0, me -vote this shit up and I'll return tha favor.

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I'll hit any links left wit an honest vote....

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Deception, that was an ILL verse. ice wordplay and vocab. Spekta did a good job too. Deception just was a little better. You both did an awsome job.

vote - deception

spekta hit harder with the punches.... the flow was better and the structure.... thought deception had the better wordplay tho... spekta's opener and closer were harder.... overall spekta was more creative... and most important.. harder with the punches...so..vote=spekta

Thanks for tha votez. 4-1 me -hit this battle up and I'll poll an honest vote on any links dropped. Tryin to get this closed out!

structure-Spek
flow- spek
punches-spek
personals- tie
wordplay-Deception

overall-Spekta