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incase you're incompetent..and dont know how to remeber rules..I will restate them
16 lines max..
post before saturday..or on saturday..whatever..just do it soon..
it doesnt matter who goes first..chances are I will be..so checkity check it in..so we can get this started..
you betta dunk when i blaster ya way/ "dixie normous"?...you can alreayd tell this cat is gay/what can i say/leave cause your shit aint worthy/i thought you knew istay wit the 9 like jordans olympic jersey/ill take yo chain/and then rock it like i own it/u say shit/imma take my gun and make sure you deep throat it/this ryhme shit is done/cause i left u smokin like the barrell of the gun/ when i put six in lungs/ love my style....cause man its tight/ u aint a thug/ your scared of blood like your MAGICS WIFE (magic johnson)/ come on bitch FIGHT/do what like/ imma give you a little time before you lose ya life/
blah..a quick key..
Jay is nothin' but Yak Yak Yak.....so watch me Kill the Noise/
The only time he's part of an Ill Community is livin' in Illinois/
Turn you Upside Down on your ass to show that you're Bitch Made/
Go back in time and Kill You before you started Rappin'in the 6th Grade/
Boys told him he'd be Hard if he start a Label in College,them dumb whores/
But he wanted to Frolic and it couldnt be accomplished..cause he was Sophomore(Soft More)/
I see that this kid is temptin' me.....so I'll show him what I'm all about/
His moms said I was too Cocky...so I wen back In Her Mouth/
Man..I'm rippin' this kid..just to show him that I'm truly bold/
But he'll doubt my flows til he finds out he come Short On Votes like 20 Year Olds/
smh..I really wanted my first battle to be good..I wanted my opponent to have atleats some level of telent..oh well:rolleyes:
LOl i like dixies
normouse s shit
funy an alot of personals
good wordplay feelin it good shit kid
other newb was aite but wak concept an old style
newbie style i mean
V-Dixie
Eh dixie a few more post to poll vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102865
Can u hit this up an POLL it man thanks pc
yo u aint shit...ya first battle aint done im still rappin....but ya life will be...when i kill u and hide ya body parts in file cabnets...i aint 20...im 15...i got a sick team....put a bullit in ya skull...and have head lookin like a split screen...who u think are...callin me a whore and stuff...i know im HOTTA then you...and im just WARMIN up...get ya facts straight....this is my brothers name...ill make u end ya career on this site....or just think of another name.....u aint got heat...i should warm ya team...i call my bullits wasps....cause of the way you swarm ya teams....man i thought i told you this how i do fags....exspecially the type that rock the gay flag....for a du rag....whose bad....not you...use a gay thug...only the type to go soft in a strip joint...and get hard in a gay club...say somethin?..
yo u aint gettin of that easy partna'
roflmfao!!!!!...lets do it like this..my 1 verse..vs. both of Jay's verses..and we'll see who won..anyway..And I could be a bitch..and report you for erasing your member profile..but fuck it..my verse is still good enough to son you..but if I ever see you doin' it again..I will report you..you fag..uppin for votes..and dont start bitchin either..you responded to the battle...now take yo ass whoopin like the wack noob you are..and by the way..sayin you 15 dont mean shit..I just turned 15 on december 19th..so dont use that for an excuse..
wow i think someone is mad that they lost...call down sister we will get threw this 2gether hah hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahha
calm down now i deleted it because it was my brother stuff..and i didnt delete....i changed....ok...ok...report me its kool
wow this was an awesome battle :laugh: ... that kid brough straight fire.. man i don't know if i was laughing at his punches or laughing at the kid himself.. i think the later of the two.. then he brought the 2nd verse.. wow.. that was bad...
anyways after my criticism.. its obvious Dixie Normous won this, he had better structure, wordplay, everyhting, even the kitchen sink.. i liked the cocky line that was good..
so anyways..
V-DE
:thumbup:
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uppin the thread..# 1...and btw..you are a nuisance jay r and jay-twist..you equalivent to a shit brick..:)..uppin
u have one vote?...WOW--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
uppin this battle...#2............... ........................ .............uppin...up up and away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hahaha DE just ripped jay a new one. jay... you need to calm down homie, it just wasnt your day .to be honest you're structure was kinda off, im not taking anything away from you. but DE was on point. and then the mama line made me spit out my drink i was laughing so hard...
for the record jay........ format your shit. it helps in the long run
DE got my vote
now you have a chance to tell me how wack i am
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103013
damnit man!!!!!..I thought he would be competition..so I spit fire..I should have went again Chrit like I said I was..oh well..wasted good lines on a wack person..:(..uppin for votes..#3..uppin uppin uppin..
Dixie killed this guy. Great funny punches, oright flow and good structure. the other guys stuff was fustrating to read.and hes punches didnt connect at all. My vote dixi
Please return a honest fev
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101043
Yo this was a good battle fam, but Dixie took this shit.
Opener- Dixie
Punches- Dixie
Flow-Tie
Vocab-Dixie
Structure-Dixie
Multis-JT
Vote= Dixie
Keep elevatin'
Return Da fava
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102895
umm..I should be up by 4..one of you losers better vote...lmao..j'kin..anyway..uppin..#4..I think..this will prolly be my last battle on RB..this site is full of herbs..anyway..uppin..
uppin for the last and final vote!!!1111...my very first battle..against a total herb..and I totally crushed him..let this be a mothafuckin warning to all you hoes..I will lyrically tear you a new anal cavity..bitches..now uppin for the last vote on this battle!!!
DAMN..HOW COME NO ONE ELSE IS VOTING?................................... .............................. ..........................
People are actin like this battle is way one sided.... I don't see it that way, it's close in my eyes...
that was the only decent punch in your verse jay....Quote:
love my style....cause man its tight/ u aint a thug/ your scared of blood like your MAGICS WIFE (magic johnson)/
nothin too hard hittin, not very complex stuff...
Dixie, your shit wasn't very hard hittin either, man
You had wordplay, but a lot of filler, and the punches were, eh, alright.
Your whole verse is pretty solid, nothing dazzling just all solid, so you take this one for complexity and an overall better verse.
As far as punches though, both need some work on that.
No hate on either of you.
Vote: Dixie
OK, I can't edit my post for some reason, but I guess I need 100 posts to vote in the poll, so sorry
stfu^^^..I'll rip the shit out of you...:)..thanks for your opnion though...and BTW..this battle was one sided..and I had no filler..
Dixie-good flow,good punches,ok vocab.nice wordplay,needed better personals
jay T-ok flow,need to work on punches,nneed to work on flow,ur spit was ok,but ur structure needs to be changed
Vote:Dixie
please drop an vote on dis
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...48#post1048648