10 lines, as agreed in Bitch Slap. After you check in I'll go first.
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10 lines, as agreed in Bitch Slap. After you check in I'll go first.
Aite Nucca Check Check... Go Ahead.. Spit It Brother...
...... Why Does It Need to Be 100 Chars...?
Jay B? That's really your name? Come on...
Do I even have to point out whose dick your on?
You're just a joke, a nobody, and your name's been played
You can't call yourself old school 'cause you stayed back in 3rd grade
Jay is rapping 'bout his nine that he keeps cocked for his bitches
Well I pack a 9 too son, but it's measured in inches...
Stop frontin' kid, you ain't no ghetto superstar
The only 'Hood' you've seen is on the wrapper of an ice-cream bar
So there's my 10 lines bitch, I just spit my half
now come at me witcha skills, (I need a good laugh)
You around? It's a 10 line battle not an essay dog, log off the Sublime Directory and spit something. Use those nice prewritten lines that you've saved "just in case."
Ok really Brendan.. ya career that hasn't started is ending...
Destroy ya with wessons, sonnin ya would just be teachin ya a lesson...
Not to fuck with lyrcist that are way high class
Ill Send ya to hell and make ya die fast..
This guy really needs a reality check and needs to find skillz..
Cause i got lines that are sick and you know that mine are ill..
Pack ya bags im sending ya ass away to a island with Gay Men..
When i told him to suck his own dick he was happy and said Ok then..
This Battle is finished why did i waste my time..
All You did was copy and paste ya lines..
Quick i don't feel like trying...
Bump for votes I guess.
btw, I know you probably are refering to the a Smith & Wesson, but just saying "wessons" makes you sound like Elmer Fudd trying to say "lesson."
Dawg...Stop trying to Sway Votes... Delete the Extra Post... Cuz Thats Wack...
Hmmm Yea Nucca Wtf Is Up With the 100 Chars
OK sorry, you're right I should have just upped for votes and not said anything about the battle. I can't seem to edit it myself but I'll PM a mod and see if I can get it taken out.
OK, whose dick does Jay B has to suck to get somebody to vote on this? I don't want to waste my alloted five ups all in one night but come on... somebodys gotta peep this
Yo son that wasnt a battle that was a slaughter lololol
Brendan we jus had a battle and I give u props man it was tight
but here u didnt even have to try lol
FLOW:BRENDON
PUNCHES :BRENDAN
OPENER: BRENDAN
CLOSER:BRENDAN
VOCAB: BRENDAN
MULTIES: none
VOTE - BRENDAN ............. keep flowin son
I think this is my 3rd bump for votes... I just want this one to get finished off so I can start racking up those Ws
Yeh Brendan takes this in every category. Flow, structure , punches. this guys good.
Vote Brendan
Looking for a few more votes. Thanks
Looking for a few more votes. Thanks
Trying to close this battle out so I can start another...
Quote:
Originally posted by Brendan
Looking for a few more votes. Thanks
BRENDAN
That's all I'm going to say............................................... .................
I mean really do I have to say anymore, this is the second one I've seen from you and I already want an autograph.
That was'nt to seem like a groupie but lets do this right:
Opener.....uhm uhm.....Brendan
Closer......uhm uhm......Brendan
punches.......uhm uhm uhm .....Brendan
I don't know what a multi is but I'm sure u(Brendan) have it
flow........do I have to type it again
BRENDAN/BRENDAN/BRENDAN/BRENDAN/BRENDAN/BRENDAN
i CAN VOTE NOW SO MY vOTE IS:BRENDAN
rETURN THE FAVOR
WR!TE MIND VS. OCANTI
GAZEEBO VS. OCANTI
last bump allowed
Quote:
Originally posted by Brendan
Trying to close this battle out so I can start another...
jay b u like the typical newb, usin the 'copy an paste' line is sumfin every body has, an will continue to do.
brendon takes all catergorys here, pinches, an all!!
nice battle peace
brendan poll, when u get 100 plz, an jay b plz vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104005
jay b u like the typical newb, usin the 'copy an paste' line is sumfin every body has, an will continue to do.
brendon takes all catergorys here, pinches, an all!!
nice battle peace
brendan poll, when u get 100 plz, an jay b plz vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104005
Vote-Brendan
Why?-go back to the first page and check the battles out again if u didnt get a goood look at them....clearly B took it...other kat came with a good verse but wasnt enough....both keep spittin
Brendan wins with a more solid verse.
He had a smooth easy to read flow to his drop and punched effectively, personals left a little to be desired but good drop nonetheless.
Jay B had a good drop as well but his punches didn't really land and his flow was a little forced. Hot shit though boys.