aiight
10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules!!!
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aiight
10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules!!!
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dont Feed plz"!!!!!!!!!...gimme that keyboard watahhh
you're wack kid..and the bold in ya Sig signals Your Behaviour
it straight out Says.."Vote for Me And i'll Return the Favour"..
make it Plainer? Ok..21 wins and you still Avoiding Elevation
you still couldn't Top me if you had Mastered the Levitation..
you're an Invitation..for me to throw some Weak Creations
if James Bond was a Rap Artist..you'd be a Shitty Imitation...
Admins must be Aware..see they kept you at the right Level
M'weight sed he was Solid N Fat..coz his name is Heavy Metal
Lmao..you could giv me a million Bucks n I still wouldn't Buy itQuote:
moving up in the world......
AUDIO
try it!!!
take a tip From Chrit..n Quit Normal battling coz son you Shit
detained like a backwords poet, writes inverse has no proportion,
BI couldnt set nothing off, even if his name spelt, commotion,
watch as i invert with a ton of 'brix' an i leave 'BI-Detained',
This kid came out pissing, but i come spit'pourin out rain,
like bad superstition, wack lyrics have binded themselves to you,
'loss' has pre-positoned itself, with an offer that you cant refuse,
BI'needs a loss I say 'Phil.M.up' cus this kid straight up wack,
U really think he's 19-3? check Alias' roasted so much, now he black,
wastin my time, with these weak battles , but my watch is slow,
i though all these vets were sick, more like old ill-stricken pros ,
oh yeh
bi detained aka brixton, phil.m.up......................................... .................................................. ........
1st
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B.I. Detained
you're wack kid..and the bold in ya Sig signals Your Behaviour
it straight out Says.."Vote for Me And i'll Return the Favour"..
Good opening...good punch wit personal
make it Plainer? Ok..21 wins and you still Avoiding Elevation
you still couldn't Top me if you had Mastered the Levitation..
Kinda Played...it was just so-so
you're an Invitation..for me to throw some Weak Creations
if James Bond was a Rap Artist..you'd be a Shitty Imitation...
Creative with the personal...Liked it
Admins must be Aware..see they kept you at the right Level
M'weight sed he was Solid N Fat..coz his name is Heavy Metal
Not To bad
Lmao..you could giv me a million Bucks n I still wouldn't Buy it
take a tip From Chrit..n Quit Normal battling coz son you Shit
Kinda basic rhymin it wit shit at the end, personal made it ok
007
detained like a backwords poet, writes inverse has no proportion,
BI couldnt set nothing off, even if his name spelt, commotion,
It was ok...not the strongest opening
watch as i invert with a ton of 'brix' an i leave 'BI-Detained',
This kid came out pissing, but i come spit'pourin out rain,
The personal wit brix has been played before
like bad superstition, wack lyrics have binded themselves to you,
loss' has pre-positoned itself, with an offer that you cant refuse,
better then the rest...good
BI'needs a loss I say 'Phil.M.up' cus this kid straight up wack,
U really think he's 19-3? check Alias' roasted so much, now he black,
kinda played again
wastin my time, with these weak battles , but my watch is slow,
i though all these vets were sick, more like old ill-stricken pros ,
Good Closer
Overall - B.I. Detained
he came harder with punches and was more creative
Bi=His Verse Was Aite I Seen Him Do Way Better The Setup Was Straight Punches Were Aite I Liked The Flow Though Shit Was Funny As Fuck Like THe Levitation Line It Was Straight
Double=You Was Aite Also But I Didn't See That Much Hard Punches Ur Flow Was Straight And I Liked It But It Just Didn't Seem As Creative As Detained's His Was Better And Shit
Vote=Hard Decision But I Had To Go With Detained
decent battle 007 is getting better but its taking a long time...
punches was won by BI he had better and more witty ones
personals also was won by BI more effective
both structures were straight and that was coo
overal BI due to punches and personals
2nd
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can some 1 explain this line, just for my curiosity??Quote:
Originally posted by Celestal Dialect
[B]B.I. Detained
Admins must be Aware..see they kept you at the right Level
M'weight sed he was Solid N Fat..coz his name is Heavy Metal
Not To bad
well. maybe honest, but bullshit votin at least do it with trutuc!!!
your custom title still says MiddleweightQuote:
Originally posted by double-0 seven
can some 1 explain this line, just for my curiosity??
well. maybe honest, but bullshit votin at least do it with trutuc!!!
which means admins dont think ya worthy enuf to have a custom title...duh
solid=Metal
Heavy=Fat
how hard was that???
Wordplay son...
play w/ it now n again
aiight, i can change my custom title!!!!
'M'weight sed he was Solid N Fat..coz his name is Heavy Metal'
still havin a hard time figurin what ur sayin here,
BI DETAINED
you're wack kid..and the bold in ya Sig signals Your Behaviour
it straight out Says.."Vote for Me And i'll Return the Favour"..
5/10
make it Plainer? Ok..21 wins and you still Avoiding Elevation
you still couldn't Top me if you had Mastered the Levitation..
6/10
you're an Invitation..for me to throw some Weak Creations
if James Bond was a Rap Artist..you'd be a Shitty Imitation...
7/10
Admins must be Aware..see they kept you at the right Level
M'weight sed he was Solid N Fat..coz his name is Heavy Metal
4/10
Overall = 5/10
detained like a backwords poet, writes inverse has no proportion,
BI couldnt set nothing off, even if his name spelt, commotion,
5/10
watch as i invert with a ton of 'brix' an i leave 'BI-Detained',
This kid came out pissing, but i come spit'pourin out rain,
6.5/10
like bad superstition, wack lyrics have binded themselves to you,
'loss' has pre-positoned itself, with an offer that you cant refuse,
2/10
BI'needs a loss I say 'Phil.M.up' cus this kid straight up wack,
U really think he's 19-3? check Alias' roasted so much, now he black,
7/10
wastin my time, with these weak battles , but my watch is slow,
i though all these vets were sick, more like old ill-stricken pros ,
no..... 1/10
Overall = 4/10
Whack battle ... keep elevating
peace
B.I.Detained
good structure and personals...
you're wack kid..and the bold in ya Sig signals Your Behaviour
it straight out Says.."Vote for Me And i'll Return the Favour"..
^ good opener
double-0 seven ur sig alone scares me LOL
Good punches.. thats what I like
fal bar:
BI'needs a loss I say 'Phil.M.up' cus this kid straight up wack,
U really think he's 19-3? check Alias' roasted so much, now he black,
^ good good
vote-B.I.Detained
He came harder
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B.I. takes this, but by a nut hair...
Nice multi's, decent punches, decent wordplay.
Nothing really "wow".
Just a decent, steady verse, some filler, not much on the personals, good flow.
6.75/10
Best line from 007 was the closer.
Opener was pretty good too.
Nice and tight.
Good recognition on Brix, I didn't know BI was Brix/Phil...
Unfortunately everything in the middle lacked real punches.
Good flow, eh wordplay, just not as strong overall.
5.5/10
Peace