ILLunatic v.s Adebisi

I'm bored as fuck.....


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Adebisi drop first
No feeding
No biteing
No recycling
No stretching
No crew votes
No hate votes
No d/r votes


Good Luck......

Remember kids... Record mean shit... Peep the Chiefs...
I got a mean streak and soon you will to... in ya briefs...
You aint shit... never was... let me make shit clear...
This kids fucking garbage.. like his dad did to bring him here...
Punk you aint dope... we all know.... so quit frontin.....
Ya verses always rexembe ya custom text... they're there but sayin nothin
Underestimate the new kid... But shit this aint close....
I hope you have metafore's since you'll never see five votes....
Kids lonely... and know naming ya hand to say ya score with a girl...
And if Illness has arrived... Lets hope its terminal...

mmmhmm....DOPE......
I'll key up soon...........
Nice verse tho............
Props homie...............

Thanks

Shit i'm just gonna drop tomorrow
Dont worry i will not no show
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Damnit
I wanted a battle within 30 min.
Was supposed to be a blind spit.
Just post.

I laught at the rhymes you be spittin, cuz i kno they be pre-writtin
Who you be shittin, Ya shit couldn't be seen twice if it was copy-writtin
I spit bricks like boulders, Ya couldn't be dope if canibus crew on ya shoulders
I rip tha script & undocument ya folders, ya couldn't be hot if ya bathed in Folgers
Ya punches are defenseless, Steppin ta me ya loss is preventless
I'll make ya senseless, Ya done blazed before i finished this sentence
I spit in conviction, My punches hit 1 after another in contradiction
Retaliatory eviction, obivous prediction, losses come to you like a cocaine addiction
This was ya first cross and ya recieved ya first loss, ya loss shines in gloss
My punches hit in full contact like playin Lacrosse, how do you feel after ya brutal loss

^Not bad

Votes

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Vote...

( 40% ) Punches --
( 25% ) Flow --
( 15% ) Multies --
( 05% ) Structure
( 05% ) Vocab

lol sorry fucked up^

Vote...

( 25% ) Punches -- Even
( 20% ) Flow -- Ad
( 15% ) Personals -- Ad
( 10% ) Structure -- Ad
( 10% ) Vocab -- ILL
( 10% ) Originality -- Ad
( 10% ) Multies -- ILL


Both these verses came hard, some lines by both cats were played. I think ILL could have won this if he had of structured his verse better, he had some good punches, but they resulted in strecthed bars.
I think that Ad took this with good simple but hard hitting punches, better flow and structure...

My Vote = Ad

pce homies

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Hmmmm.....
Didn't kno that Adebisi was TOX
Fuckin Alias's..............................
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Punches -- ad
Flow -- Ad
Personals -- Ad
Structure -- Ad
Vocab -- Ill
Multies -- Ill

Vote: Ad

VOTE ON THIS PLZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101455

Read new voting rules.. Vote gone -Token

^ Can't even make ya own vote
Ya have to Copy B-Kast.............
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Breakdown
punches both but ill by a lil: I got a mean streak and soon you will to... in ya briefs...// Who you be shittin, Ya shit couldn't be seen twice if it was copy-writtin
metas ad: I hope you have metafore's since you'll never see five votes....
mulies neither: i think you both should have included a couple in your verse but oh well
personals both: Retaliatory eviction, obivous prediction, losses come to you like a cocaine addiction// You aint shit... never was... let me make shit clear...
This kids fucking garbage.. like his dad did to bring him here...
consistancy ill: his punches didnt seem forced but ade your not a newbe
flow both:
overall: close battle both came a lil weak but at the end ill took it in my opinion no hate just a opinion

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I just hope I dont get herbed for having less than 100 posts.

STFU......
You still got your damn Alias
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lol at this kid thinking ad is tox...


Punches=Ad
Flow=Ad
Multi's=I
Creativty=Ad
Vocab=Blah Non

Concluson: illunatic your verse was to stretched like tities learn from ad he's better than you damn must be imbrassing to get whored by this newbie i know i would be & ad hit more harder than you and kept punching

Vote = Adebisi

No.. Read new voting rules.. Vote Gone -Token

Ok.....
1. Adebisi is TOX
His crew members already told me
So you can't tell me its not...........
Learn your facts homie.................

lol & which memeber said told you that?............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................

Metaphysiks.......
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And a few other people
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If Metaphysik's in his crew why is he Metaphysik's voting...????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????? = /

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STOP FREEPOSTING
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Enough squabbling.
Votes

well i gotta give this to ILL better vocab... flow.. punches... multies... metas.... wordplay.... structure.... personals i didnt see much from either.... and creativity didnt see much in my opinion....
ILL took every category that wus taken by either of them
Ad couldve take flow/structure but the one stretch line fuked up your flow which ruined the structure...
ILL had lots of vocab n multis left n right .....
My VOte-ILLunatic check out any of my audios or open mic n anything in my sig.... ThanX.....
Peac3_________________-----------------------_________..............

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Punches: i think that Ill Edged it by a little bit.even though AD can pretty good too
Metas: AD his are just better.
Flow/Multies: i give this a tie because neither had good Multies and flow was ok by both
Personals: i also give this a tie both came good
Overal: Ill Takes it in my opinion he just had a better verse not that AD's was bad but i felt that Ill won..


Good Read by both.. No Hate Just a vote.. Props to both

Peace

Can Both of you please return the favor and vote honestly on my battle...i took the time so you should too..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102839

Thank You. Much Appriciated
Peace

Very close battle.
Punches- ill was a bit better than the other cat but not buy much.
Vocab was also better by Ill....
and flow was prop about even.
Vote -Ill (by a whisker)

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Punches: Ill takes this because of consistence, other cat took the opener but it was downhill after that
Metas: AD takes this in my opinion
Flow: Ad, Ill's structure is different than mine, his rhyme scheme threw me off a bit.
Personals: both pretty good but i liked Ill's better
Overal: Ill takes it because of consistence, good battle.

LoL....
Token removed all them bullshit, rulebreakin votes....

UPPIN..4-1
Yo token... Re-open the polls would ya homie...

Opening - ill
Punches: Ill
Metas: blah..
Flow: tie
Personals: Ill's were harder
closing: Ill
Overal: Ill