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u drop first
lets go!
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10-15 lines
u drop first
lets go!
yo im here are u gonna come b?
wuts really good....were the fuck are you b************************************************* ************************************************** ************************************************** ******
soz man...
a was writin the longest ever vote on another battle lol
checkin in....
ima start keyin when you check in................................................ .
ite, im nearly done..... jus 2 more lines.........
uve gota check in man.... or im not droppin....
if you no show me, im gona try n get u banned :)
now come on.....
yo, man..... check in for god sake
then i'll drop
COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
my fault b....i had to bounce out the apt. for a minute...go ahead now tho..********************************************* **********************************************
no probs man.................
alright, that was ur checkin then.......
ima drop my verse now......
u shud have urz ready now aswell, youve had all night man.....
good luck
here it comes.................
Its jus like ur avvy says, a game of cat and mouse
u cudnt step to me if u were ladders to a tree house
youve only been here for 3days, and youve already lost 2
maybe the reason is becuz in ur raps u only talk about u
now you make everyone go first, youve got all the signs of a biter
maybe if u hadnt been dropped as a baby, u mite have been brighter
ima leav you with a saying for you, 'they say three's a charm'
a third loss is enough to break youand send u bk to the funny farm
its bout time u left rap, ur more suited to punk rock
or go bk to ur real occupation, 'Pitchin Rocks on the Block'
shud of finished there, but im waitin for you to-check-in
after this verse... J Goodz R.I.P, notify the next-of-kin
it was cute be...nice..it was nice..
yo...
You were curious were I was...Because I never checked Back..?
Well its only right that you die..Cause curiousity killed the catt..!
Im real,you act...And Goodz see that your Gurly.......And if I die right now...It's ok....cause they say the GooD die early....
And so your knickname FREEman..?and you coach Karate..?well I got a kong foo gun,..That FREE bullets and Smoke your Body..!
The Flow is nauhty..And leave you 1 with the Alli...And I bet you get SONNED more than a shore in Cali...Hey!..Ima Rock-This-Fella...Now he in a Jay fit...FREE look at so much porn...He sucked in...And now he in the Matrix...Dont say shit.. gay bitch..cause you won't ever make it..your not creative..and Your flow too naked..!
And what you posted..That shit Dirt..!So I'm R.I.P now?..Shut up Trick!... you just got merked!...and none of your rapz had punches...Not even if you rapped about koolaid the whole verse..Chump you need church....Game done
it was cute be...nice..it was nice..
yo...
You were curious were I was...Because I never checked Back..?
Well its only right that you die..Cause curiousity killed the catt..!
Im real,you act...And Goodz see that your Gurly.......And if I die right now...It's ok....cause they say the GooD die early....
And so your knickname FREEman..?and you coach Karate..?well I got a kong foo gun,..That FREE bullets and Smoke your Body..!
The Flow is nauhty..And leave you 1 with the Alli...And I bet you get SONNED more than a shore in Cali...Hey!..Ima Rock-This-Fella...Now he in a Jay fit...FREE look at so much porn...He sucked in...And now he in the Matrix...Dont say shit.. gay bitch..cause you won't ever make it..your not creative..and Your flow too naked..!
And what you posted..That -shit -Dirt..!So I'm R.I.P now?..Shut up Trick!... you just got merked!...and none of your rapz had punches...Not even if you rapped about koolaid the whole verse..Chump you need church....Matterfact you just hurt!............Game done
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THE SECOND ONE I DID WAS JUST A CORRECTION.....
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Freeman - The whole verse was week, and most punches had hardly any effect. You tried to be creative, but it didnt really flash. The structure was aight, a couple stretched lines. Need to work on a new rhyme scheme, that one is getting old. But there is one thing I liked about your verse. I thought the closer was pretty good. I dont think you put full potential in this...
J Goodz - Verse was week, and it was pretty wack as well. The punches wernt hard hitting. You need to fix that structure up hommie. You did have a better rhyme scheme than him, I liked that part. But it was to week, and work on your creativity. Keep elevating....
Vote - Freeman
Conclusion - Both verses were just weak, but he had the better of the two. He had a nice closer on that. So he gets my vote. Dont take anything I say personal, just elevate, thats what were all here for... aight hommies...
Freeman=His Structure Was Straight Flow WAs Nice And I Liked The Punches The Step Punch Was Nice But Some Shit Was Not Hot So U Was On And Off
JGoodz=Verse Was Wack Strcuture Wasn't Tite He Really Didn't Have Punches Dat Were Like Off And Nice
Vote=Freeman
vote on thsi battle please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102633 i'ts gettin slept on
NOT A HATE VOTE IM JUST GOING WITH THE FACTS!!!!
Close as hell battle lemme BREAK THIS SHIT DOWNNNNNN
Opener----J GoodZ -----Though i've heard both of em before reworded
Closer----Freeman
Punches----TIE
Vocab----TIE
Metas//Similes----Freeman
Good close stuff, Freeman hit you more personal though, you can tell he did his homework on u before this battle and it payed off "cause he talks about himself in his battles"----LOL
J Goodz you did good as far as working with what little you had to and your flow was good but his punches hit harder.
Good flow by both of you, if it was a flow and not a 30 minute think write. VOTE-----------FREEMAN-------------- Return the favor yo im getting slept on harder than this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102450
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thanks for the votes y'all...................
uppin this #1
I personaly felt Freemans verse more.
Just easier to follow , with OK punches. Nofing special.
Other guy, i just didnt connect with your stuff, structure was off, along with everything else. Am not hating.
vote freeman
Please vote honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102847
freemna ripped other dude
i thought his punches an wordplay diud it for me
good shit freeman i cant belive u lost to carson hes good but u had a strong verse..
like this battle...compettion was wak..tho
Vote- freeman
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102857
^^ hit it up honestly freeman pc
ite................................
thanks for the votes y'all...................
one more poll for the 5-0..... 5-0 on text, 4-0 on poll.....
uppin this #2
I give this vote to freeman he just had a better overall verse punches meta's flow everythhing goes to Freeman.. J your verse wasnt that bad but you just got outdone by a more expirenced MC.. No hate just a vote
Overall: Freeman
Can you Both Vote Honestly on my battle..
I took the the time you should too..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102839
Thank You.. Much Appriciated
Peace