Straight Ace vs LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1

Aight......drop at the same time.......ill start keyin wen u check in......due 30 min afta check in........RULES-- No hate votes, dickridin, or crew votes........10-18 lines..........

uppin so this cat sees it................................................ .................................................. ..................................................

Check in..* keyed up already..*
..Immediately started keyin up..forgot bout the check-ins..
Anyways im set.

aight dont drop yet jus so u no i aint feedin.............gimme like 15 to key it up...............checked in here i go...............

yoooooooooo

This cat here looks tough with the record but this newb is gonna make him look sofa than cotton/
Ive all ready dug your grave got ur tombstone and readin this your all ready rottin/
Gonna drop simple lines cuz he thinks im jus an ordinary newB/
But with this vocabulary and creativity ima legend-to-be/
Soon ery1 will recognize my skills and ull be my first opponent to get defeated/
Next battle, next battle, next battle.....the pattern is repeated/
I came too card for jus a silly cat of his potential/
Cuz he doesnt understand that punches and flow in this game are essential/
Now its time that i end this thing wit the final punch and a closer/
When eva u c Straight Ace jus remember hes a fake...a poser/
And this cat jus got distinguished as "THE TRUE MERKING"/
I let him no who i am and jus remember dogg im lerking

When you challenged a newbie & i accepted, blatant lies..
Cause kid, you could not ever hit me like punchin at flies..
No crew & d/r you just signed your own dead guarantee..
With one match, ill make ur record look like a reversed of me..
New to RB, & makes it clear to see..look at your name..
..Realise half of the time it reflects of your rap game..
Crack ya bones like 'heavyweights' massagin' gnomes..
This kid is unlikely to win, like deaf ppl claimin vocal tones..
Lyrical? this kid hasn't got a firm 'texture' he'll fall apart..
& the only reason ppl will be votin on this, cause of my part..
Ill extract the good from the bad & leave u in between..
..Why? cause this herb blasted on scene - unseen...
Got 6 more lines to fill up & kill you with..like mass murder..
But like ur career, this battle wont go any further..

You may vote now..

uppin for sum votes..............................nice battle right here come on..................................leave a link n ill vote on ur battle honestly

Lyrically=He Was Wack Verse Wasn't Tite And Didn't Like It Senteches were to stretched out and not many punches but o well elevate

Straight Ace= i think ur an alias and i'll find out but u came better with the setup and the flow was better some wack punches but u smoked em

vote=straight

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uppin come on dont sleep on this.............................................. .................................................. ...........................

aight...

this was an aight battle...

but, insane, you said it yourself...
in this battle i think punches killed you. In my opiniou... keep your eyes on the target.. don't tell me how good a shooter you are... it seemed like your were telling your tale instead of throwing bullets at ace. but you had a good verse thought, don't get me wrong... love love baby

ace: you had a good verse also.. stayed on topic.. essential... it seemed more like a battle verse. keep wokin on punches.. good job.


VOTE: ACE

thanks for the votse so far...........................let me no wut i need to werk on.............uppin for the 3rd time and going to sleep............GOOD NIGHT..............leave a link and ill vote in you battle.........

Uppin' 1...One..
Poll a vote, leave link & ill return the favour...
Happy new year.........

is it just me or did lyricly insane talk about what he was gonna do all battle....and then by the last line he ran outta room to even do it......advice....dont talk about what ur gonna do in a verse....just do it.....

Ace did what he was suposed to do....he had nice hard punches and solid wordplay along witta smooth flow.....he didnt have to do much to beat this kid...in my opinion....he over did his work here....a waste.....

vote- ace...easy....

Appreciated . Uppin 2..
Poll a vote, leave link & favour will be returned..
Second Up........

pretty easy decision here.....Straight pretty much took lyrically insane in every category.....most specifically punches, personals, and structure....no hate....but this is a landslide victory for Ace....he won every category in this....no need for a breakdown due to that fact.....no hate to u lyrically insane....good read to u both....just a vote

peace

Lyrically-you were wack as fuck nigga. your verse didn't have nothin...the lines were stretched, and what little punches you DID have...were played out. only thing i can tell ya is elevate....

Straight Ace- u came alot betta wit da flow, and da setup. you merked this nigga...even though some of your punches were a little....wack.

vote=straight