You know the rulez.
If you don't, check in the Bitch Slapped thing.
I key when u check in and the same for you.
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You know the rulez.
If you don't, check in the Bitch Slapped thing.
I key when u check in and the same for you.
Checking in...
check.........check............
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time for you to lose your
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neck..........neck................
[[[[[Fuck the Technician]]]]]
...Your gettin "sat" down like at dinner cele-brations,Show my respect for you by giving you shell-ovations(he'll get clapped)........
...Smack you up, i attack-goons, this kid "spittin" more "retarded shit" than handicap bath-rooms...
...Where u get ur words from prolly a wack-school,Your like a "hot actress" soo how could u even act-cool...
...Lookin like "smoked" cigar ashe like grey-dreads, And you cant come out on "top" cause ur gettin "cut short" like shaved-heads...
...Tech comin out this battle lookin like he got stuck-in-fights,Your always "wrong" so as a person fuck-ya-rights...
this was a shitty flow. trying out a new structure. waiting for ur flow. he prolly gonna win. but,
VOTE AND DROP A LINK...
btw, teh bolded words are the rhyming words, for the slow person. lol.
^ haha nice attempt at a good verse........heres my 10 minute Key.....
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This battle was supposed to be ten lines what happened?
Oh, lil phresh started pretendin that he was actually rappin
Puttin bold shit and quotes for the punches you attempted
If you didnt bite that whole verse I'd hafta say it was rented
I told you it would be your funeral you were up to the challenge
By the way you write your verse I can tell you nothin for talent
You had nice wordplay.....cuz I'm playin with your verse kid
With all that filler?....you must be holy....you gotta be Clergic
Fuck a closing bar.....you wack newbie dont pose as hard
Like a frozen star.....i can break you when i throws my arms
nice drop man. uppin for votes. UUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IINNNNNNNNNNNNNNN###########111111111
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punches- tech, lil p you lacked punches you "tried"
flow- tech, lilp, you gotta work on that
vocab- none
complex- none
creativity- lilp
humor- tech, i like ur opener
opener- tech
closer- tech
lil p, you gotta change ur strechted lines like tech's verse
tech, stick to vets
voote- tech
EVERYONE HIT THIS UP
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=killer
Well....
Technician takes this with more experience and better flow.
His vers just flowed well. the structure was impeccable and he won in all categories to me.
I don't even think that lil phresh wrote a whole ten bars...
Maybe i need to read again, but that won't changed the fact that technician wins..
Both of you...please?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102471
He one upped you fresh... any way good battle yall. Technician's flow was litttle smoother from the beginning to the middle.
Vote = Technician
aight. 0-1 you. keep the votes coming in........................ UPPIN #2..............................
i meant to say 0-3 but it wont let me edit. sorry for the free-post, but just keeping the update....
Lilp Verse: yo it was strechted like a bitch, no flow, bad punches. you gotta take out the bold and "
Tech- Yo you had nice punches hard hitting, good flow, ok wordplay and i liked ur opener and closer. thats y u win it
0-4!!!! damn im getting my ass merked. but thats aight. i learn from my losses. this was a good battle man. i need to elevate some more
wait... no its not. rock already voted, its still 0-3. but keep the votes coming. and why wont it let me edit!?!?
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Lil Phresh...don't let this get u down. Ur like me...u came new to a forum and called out sumbody good. Lol, u just gotta fix ur structure man...make it more like techs and u should b fine here.
Tech...lol, dat shit was good man
"Puttin bold shit and quotes for the punches you attempted
If you didnt bite that whole verse I'd hafta say it was rented"
dat shit was jokes lol. Tech has crazy structure and ill punches.
vote- technician
return the favour by droppin a vote on the battle in my sig and this link below. thx.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101459
do i need to exlplain lol
yo lil bold and all that shit don't work here ur sentences werre to stretched out son nice punches though
tech he took this lol he just killed him with the bite or rented line hahaha he smoked this cat easily so hollaz 1