Your rules:
I'll set it up
You go first
15-20 lines
Due Thurs for you. I'll be here later.
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Your rules:
I'll set it up
You go first
15-20 lines
Due Thurs for you. I'll be here later.
il spit mine probs on friday ayt dawg cause im away all day 2mara and thursday so friday is that ok?
that's fine. I'll drop in about 10 mins. Good luck playa. LMAO@Playa. I don't say crap like that.
BOOO YOW!
I'd use a rain man reference, but it's simply stated that,
any use of a garbage emcees name in verse, is garbage to match,
you'll never come dope, stop it, this'll be ya utter defeat,
Piece'll hit ya girl so hard, homicide'll be fingerprintin ya teeth,
gotta strain to see your talent, bitch stick to the ballads,
can tell he shook, tossed cookies then looked for the salad,
ya fumblin words, obvious why you aint got the balls or gonads,
catch visectomy visions anytime vienna sausages calls or shows ads,
tired of being overlooked, kid wants to better his rep,
so Piece gave him a winning push.. off his competitive edge,
kid 4 get ur pride, there's nothing more, ur finished,
cus you're much like ur avy, STILL searching for.. an image,
Don’t lose ya control cuz I’m nice, you’ll get toss’d & whimper,
An upset stomach? ..when I punch it.. even it loss’d it’s temper,
I don’t respect punks, so shut up, nobody’ll show you love,
ready ta catch a L, look see him gettin his baseball glove,
I'm only jamaican right now.. ya lines'll never hurt me,
Piece'll be standin in the thread, you'll be standin in ya blood a mercy,
we're down to the finisher, yea, time to get personal,
now all I gotta do is find one person.. who's ever heard of you
Thank you.
lets go warren!! FUCK X.L.G 4 LIFE
Warren Piece u needa see that im tha greatest mc that u ever battled with//
ur shitty ass rhymes are fake like a 10 000 year old myth//
unlike u im the past, present, and future cause i'd be real//
lines be like prison bars cant break through them cuz they made of steal//
better yet made outta gold u shuld'v been told im golden lyrikist//
u cant deal with this im real with this cuz aint no one as mean as this//
u shuld quit cuz u aint fit to battle me//
ur rhymes are basic lke 2+1=3//
mines are complex like sociology, cosmo-biology, and trigonometry//
u dont comprehend cuz my rhymes make ur brain go in overload//
explode.. ur brainz flying all over ur keyboard//
yet i neva run outta rhymes cuz i reload//
like a deadly weapon, a mack 11//
aim's dead accurate n precise to blow ur head off in a second//
i dun even know why im wastin my time, wastin rhymes, u battlin me shuld be a crime//
ill kick a flow so hard it'll dislocate ur head from ur spine//
my rhymes sends chills to ya bones ur shit and my skills surpass ur own//
u actin all gangsta thinkin ima lose//
dun consider urself a crip cuz u be watchin 'blues clues'//
my brain n my pen make a deadly combination//
a perfect collaboration//
rhymes so ill they need a hospital for sanitization//
this is absurd, im battlin a moron thats in a newb team
but when im finished ur guna realise textbook the best crew u ever seen//
towards u i dun promote hate, yet, i disinegrate cuz u fell for the bate//
so, seeing as ur dealt with, 'check mate'//
get some votes up in here!!
oh and by da way X.L.G cant vote or Textbook!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
agiht....................thia battle was really close...............
4 real...
i got
punches-RM
flow-WP...shorter bars
OHHHS- tie
personals- no one
structure-tie
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its a tie thier...but i think Reign man took this one...... little bit more creativity.......... an constent beating of punches........
vote...reign man.........
i will pol once i get 100 posts..agiht......
RETURN teh FAVOR an vote on my battle vs. DOUBLE O SEVEN
or vs. Petrafy
aight heres my 2 cents.......
flow-not availible in text
structure-warren
vocab-warren
multis-warren
metas-tie
wordplay-reign
punches-reign
personals-tie
overall-warren
props to both of ya, but ima say reign takes this, cause punches win battles............
yo can u guys return the favor and hit this up?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102438
much appreciated..........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102292
don't be bitches return the favor................ ^^^^^ vs. double o seven vote fair.an poll..............
aight hot battle.......sum pretty tite punches in those spits....so the basis of that i vote fo warrern.........ure vocabluary were pretty hot, althiought the flow were like non-exsiteant...
vote*warren.
ayt 1-0 2 warren keep the votes comin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
uppin this shit!!
vote honestly and il repay the favour!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
reignman had better punches, to me thats what wins a battle not vocab and structure all that other shit.
vote = reginman
please return the favor and drop a honest vot on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102470
This was a easy vote...WP took this battle easily...Reign you talked about your damn self to much in this battle which you should never do....Wp had the better punches....flow...personals...and everything a battle verse should contain...stay up though
iaint in Tetbook so ican vote on who i want!! and if im gona speak d truth Warren Piece took this 1 easy!The*Reign*Man d best thing about urs-------i dun even know why im wastin my time, wastin rhymes, u battlin me shuld be a crime//
ill kick a flow so hard it'll dislocate ur head from ur spine//
GOOD LINE no beef!
dizzy hommel pm me back!!
dawg answer me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5th and last time uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
vote honestly and il repay the favour
You can not honestly tell me that this kid had better punches than I did. That'd be like sayin Judas was more of a man than Jesus was. The polls are 1-1. Whom ever voted for you would beat you in a battle and lose to me, period end.
Warren Piece
Good structure and flow... I like the style
fav bar:
you'll never come dope, stop it, this'll be ya utter defeat,
Piece'll hit ya girl so hard, homicide'll be fingerprintin ya teeth,
The*Reign*Man
i do not like your flow nor structure...
// <- - that irritates me.
however.. your lyrics are not so bad
fav bar:
better yet made outta gold u shuld'v been told im golden lyrikist//
u cant deal with this im real with this cuz aint no one as mean as this//
but yea... Warren Piece gets my vote
well... warren killed this kid
Very nice punches.... goot wordplay...
Some witty flips on concepts...
Reign came aight but you can just see the inexperience...
Vote- Warren for a much better verse
One more people. Let's get it done.
And might I add 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15.
That should be enough to take care of that 100 post thingy.
Man... these three bars literally caned most of Reigns verse...Quote:
Originally posted by Warren Piece
tired of being overlooked, kid wants to better his rep,
so Piece gave him a winning push.. off his competitive edge,
kid 4 get ur pride, there's nothing more, ur finished,
cus you're much like ur avy, STILL searching for.. an image,
Don’t lose ya control cuz I’m nice, you’ll get toss’d & whimper,
An upset stomach? ..when I punch it.. even it loss’d it’s temper,
Both were pretty tight tho... WP had the better structure overall, good punches throughout etc... consistant and creative...
Reign Man had the weaker structure... average punches compared to WP really, esp. those bars above... some good lines but not enough...
Overall it was a tight battle but...
Vote - Warren Piece