Yo What Up vs. oCANti

aight son.......

10 lines.....

house rules.....

drop verse 30 min after check in....

lets do this.......

Fo sho I'm checkin in I'll drop in a minute as soon as I'm done answering to this other shit.
GOODLUCK*
Ya feel me dough

CHECKIN IN..............

ill drop shortly hombre.........waitin on ur check in first.......

lets do this...........

how u fuckin wit a guy fit-for-elite, ur done, its time to admit-defeat, cause no one gets away fuckin wit me, im

^^^shit i fucked up........i pressed submit reply instead of reset form.......thats not my shit..........ima reword that cause i didnt like it.......so whateva..........i guess i start this shiznit ova again......good luck dawg........

You a libra like me/ that means you soft and sweet
and if I ever catch u tryn to bang/ i'm puttin u on blast u geek
I have never met a libra who could stand up tall
who doesn't have to stay focused on walkin/ or else he'll fall
u try real hard to get a friend/no to hard to get a win
you're on here for the numbers / so u stay close to a pen
you can say yo what up as much as you choose/
but you treat this battlin shit like a conversation in a chatroom
but to answer your pm, yeah we can do lunch dude
but that's after the rb voters vote that I ate you for Brunch dude


WHOAH! THAT"S ME ALL THE WAY BABY>>>>>>>>
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u crazy fuckin wit a this g, cause im fit-for-elite, theres no way u gettin by me, its time to admit-defeat, now its time for u to feel-the-heat?/
ima laugh when ur face hits-the-concrete, my punches cant be stopped, y try?, just quit-ur-beat, i never tie or lose, i cut ur "toes", but never split-the-feet (defeat)/

im undefeated, but yet, so-r-u, the only way u get "a head (ahead)" is when ur mom votes, but then she bends over and starts to blow-u/
my punches fuckin explode-u, although-its-true i dont wanna be mean, but honestly dawg, its obvious u know-ur-screwed/

i was callin out another cat but u wanted to take-his-place, its like my punches take the "pencil" u writin rhymes wit and erase-yo-face/
ur a disgrace-to-any-race, this guys been preparin for this by standin in front of baseball pitchin machines, hes gettin "embraced"-for-disgrace/

the only way u gonna win is if u can somehow deceive-the-poll, my punches ull stop ya lungs and then i attack, only to leave u left breathin-out-ur-asshole/
im about done-smashin-this-troll, no need to waste more lines on a guy who takes losing so bad that he blames it on his comp when hes trashing-his-console/

this guys broke as fuck he makes a livin off of betting-his-coins, hes join back to welfare cause hes gettin-destroyed/
i was kind enough to let-him-join, he cant rap worth shit, i could fill this whole post with periods and hes still wouldnt be gettin-the-point/

EXPLANATIONS-
I thought it was pretty clear but for u stupid bitches......

1st bar-i said i never tie, i cut his toes, but i never split defeat, or da feet......get it, i never tie, i never split defeat, i cut his toes, but i never split da feet.........if u dont get it, go back to 4th grade......

2nd bar-were both undefeated, but he only gets head is when his mom gives it to him, he only gets ahead in battles when his mom votes.........

3rd bar-in bitchslapped i was callin out someone else, then he said hed battle me, on the back of a pencil is an eraser in case u didnt know that.........

4th bar-self explanitory

5th bar-if i filled the post wit periods itd have lots of dots, im sayin he cant rap worth shit, so even if i filled this with lots of points he wouldnt get it........do u get it?

if u dont understand what im sayin dont vote, i dont wanna have votes against cause u dont get it.......leave it for the intelligent ones.......

hurry up and write man.... I don't have all day.
I amm not going to be on the same battle later tonight cuz my opponents not here to contribute, ya feel me.
but n-e-wayz upppin or whatever that means
yall get ready to vote please

lets get some votes up in this bitch...........

UPPIN.........

and in the last bar its supposed to say that ur goin back to welfare........not join..........

pretty lame battle, dint help with 'Ocan' bein in it lol.

Ocanti-ure flow were good an structure, but ffs sake the complexity were fvckin dire man really was,u need to work on that an keep ya complexity an flow at the sorta level it is.

yoW-ure verse was all around better, prodcuing a higher level of complexity an wordplay. But the complexity got a lil too complex on sum lines, an the flow suffered......but i liked the wording u were using an so i enjoyed reading ya spit.......keep it up

overall*Yo what up.

return the favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102154
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uppppin
Vote on this thread honestly and give pro's and con's
uppppin and vote
oCANti vs. Silencerr

Yo What up verse was average or mediocore at best. First O'canti the structure was tight and the metaphors were on point. You what up was structure was not on balance no breaks or pauses between different methaphors.

My Vote oCANti

^^^what the fuck.........a mod should check this out..........obvious dickrider.........how was his metas and shit betta than mine.........honestly, his vote doesnt count cause he cant poll vote, but shit...........how hard should i have come to beat him?......

1-0 UPPIN........

man ignore him, he bums ocanti on everybattle he has.............fo real......u murdered this guy......but hey..........

return the favour dawg, vote on mine honsetly........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102154
its wtih ocanti, check it out, i merdered him aswell,but all his newbie bum chums are giving shit.....

i cant poll vote, but ill still drop my 2 cents.........thanx for the vote homie..........

UPPIN!!!!!!!!!

dEAR: certa and yo~what~up


LET ME FIND OUT iM A GUY AND I'M GOING TO SUE

EVERYONE WHO WAS AT THE SCENE OF THE BIRTH

FOR LETTING SOME FALSE INFORMATION GO DOWN ON MY

bIRTH CERTIFICATE U FUCKERZ*



HONEST VOTES

oCANti vs. Silencerr

oCANti is a female first off and second off I am just calling it from my eyes Certified is just mad that I told the truth about his battle with tubesteak so hey don't hate the truth

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This Battle Was TRash Both Verses Were Messed Up With Structure But I Went With The One With The Better Flow And Ima Say Yo Wat Up Took This

Both Need To Elevate

If Ya Got 100+Posts VOte For This Battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102244

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u dick ridin bitchmade excuses for male rappers
yall are slow and you'll never make it past the computer.

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Ocanti... calm yo ass down. You make yourself look stupid with all those unneccesary comments.
You got demolished. You need to wrok on your structure and your flow. Itis obvious that you can rap but you need to learn to transmit that to your computer. The way you write it is the way we will interpret it.
Yo what up you was clean in the majority of categories, just come a lil harder with the punches and throw some more personals in there.
Vote here.... Keep it gangsta!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102471

See I can except that but not when people criticize without proper representation. Someone break down my verse and tell me where apparently I keep going wrong...........................

Yo, ya'll both got some serious talent from where I'm sittin.

Ocanti: Your libra focus was too much and too weak. You gotta use your wordplay better and you aint really seem to get down to the punches for real. Nice flow and structure though. And the personals sucked. But we all gotta elevate, you included. Oh and by the way, anyone who reads the bottom of your messages can tell you are a girl.

Yo What Up: Yo, you got the ill punches, but your structure sucks like hell. Now to me that don't matter that much, but it can be important come votin' time. Also your joint got the point across, but you need more flow. Sometimes your shit just wasn't rhymin. Wordplay was pretty tight. Personals was pretty tight.

For both of you: I don't see much dickridin' goin on here. Just accept what people got to say and use it to your advantage. The whole RB aint against you cause you a girl or whatever, Ocanti.

Close, but I gotta go with Yo What Up

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^^^shut the fuck up and quit freepostin..................

3-0 me...............

UPPIN THIS BITCH!!!!!!............

UPPIN #4..............................

CMON NOW.........................

LETS GET SOME VOTES FOOS!!!!!!!

UPPIN #5!!!!

CMON........IVE VOTED ON A SHIT LOAD OF BATTLES.........

LETS GET SOME FUCKIN VOTES IN HERE!!!!!!

breakdown

punches yo: im undefeated, but yet, so-r-u, the only way u get "a head (ahead)" is when ur mom votes, but then she bends over and starts to blow-u/
metas yo: ima laugh when ur face hits-the-concrete, my punches cant be stopped, y try?, just quit-ur-beat, i never tie or lose, i cut ur "toes", but never split-the-feet (defeat)/
multies yo: i was callin out another cat but u wanted to take-his-place, its like my punches take the "pencil" u writin rhymes wit and erase-yo-face/
ur a disgrace-to-any-race, this guys been preparin for this by standin in front of baseball pitchin machines, hes gettin "embraced"-for-disgrace/
personals yo: the only way u gonna win is if u can somehow deceive-the-poll,
flow ocani: hers wasnt stretched but was a lil plain
consistancy both: both continued to diss eachother

overall you what up

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