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no hate
U DROP FIRST
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no hate
U DROP FIRST
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yo joker man soz for freeposting but plz hit this EDITED as i took the time.thx and soz again............................................. .....pz
Please see Battle Rule #4. You must vote before leaving a link to your battle.
-strobe
Ya might be a joker, a midnight smoker, but one thing ya ain't...is good.
With bells on ya Lugz, and a dirt weed buzz, ya embarrasin this hood.
I mean look at ya avy, could you strike a more submissive pose?
You look like ya wanna get fucked, seriously, ya half way outta ya clothes!
I see those who oppose get crushed like ants, man...since ya ain't been beat...
But I'm here ta disclose I'm a rope like Batman and leave ya deck incomplete.
Capture tha Joker, then toss him aside, cuz alone he's useless...
Nothing seems to compliment this guy, except his own excuses.
Ya subpar, gotcha 1st loss, now you truely do rank below #2, son...
So the bullethole in ya name is fitting, cuz I've just made a hole in one.
.:K:.
Isn't allowed to vote on this battle since he decided to freepost in here!
Seriously...
Stop that shit.
If K votes, I'm reporting it as riding.
I hate bullshit freeposting to garner votes!
IT'S AGAINST THE RULES!!!
Peace
Ur acient flows are no match fo me the barely provided wins in the past
Ya sig is irrelevant cause u got a 100 percent chance that I’ll merk ur ass
Nigga u need to retire ur like 40 years old and u still don’t get respect
Old ass nigga…Ya rhymes was neva hard like ya viagra had no effect
Nigga fuckin wit me you’ll have ur last seizure that will end ur life
Ur livin a miserable life 35 years past and ur still a virgin wit no wife
Ya state nickname is ur biography cause ur very lonely and ya die’n’slow
How da fuck are u on this site for 7 months and still don’t got no flow
Ur not no vet just anotha newbie wit a lop-sided record tryin blow yaself up
discrace 2 da game wit no experience when u been in it since snoop was a pup
Open = Joker defenitly
Ur acient flows are no match fo me the barely provided wins in the past
Ya sig is irrelevant cause u got a 100 percent chance that I’ll merk ur ass
siknesss
Flow & Structure = joker
Punches = Joker
Wordplay = Tie
Closer = Joker
Ur not no vet just anotha newbie wit a lop-sided record tryin blow yaself up
discrace 2 da game wit no experience when u been in it since snoop was a pup
haha sik
Vote = joker
Godd Battle
REPAY FAVOUR I SPENT LIKE 7 Minutes breakin this down yo
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...66#post1030166
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...76#post1030176
y'knoq...born came strong on this one, had a lot of good punches, but joker came back hard. the 100% merk line was good, and the age jokes were decent...i got to say:
vote: joker
please return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101943
Uppin 4 Votes
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OPener: BtK I though Jokers was mad played
Closer: tie Both were kinda played
Flow: tie Both were good reads
Personals: BtK All Joker talked bout was your age and shit. BtK had some good smart personals
Punches:BtK Good metas and shit. Koker had punches but few hit
Win:BtK
this battle is definately going to joker. his opener was what made him win it too. BTK, your closer was tight too. but joker came harder and that is what got him my vote.
vote - joker
when i get a battle, ill edit a link in here and u can vote for me
opener: joker i like th way he dissed on his sig that says the Merk %
flow:tie both had a decent flow going
Punhes: B2K i think that b2k's punches landed harder that J's did
Personals: both had good ones but b2k had more. and they where more consistent
vocab:neither really
metas: Tie both had some but not to good
Finisher: b2k both had good finishers the snoop part in jokers was nice, not played but kind of obviouse..b2k's finisher was played.
Overall: B2k i just felt that he had a better overall verse.. No Hate Just a vote.. Props to both
Peace
i really liked the overall feel of b2k's verse better ........i'll break it down in one of the many forms i use......comparitive punches........
I mean look at ya avy, could you strike a more submissive pose?
You look like ya wanna get fucked, seriously, ya half way outta ya clothes!
Ya state nickname is ur biography cause ur very lonely and ya die’n’slow
How da fuck are u on this site for 7 months and still don’t got no flow
those were the best punches from both sides in my opinion.....the play of your avy was mad hilairous and intelligent so i'm giving this to B2k...also you vocab at the end of your lines was really simplisitic......his wasn't much better but the punches took you.....vote
b2k
B2K'S VERSE
Ya might be a joker, a midnight smoker, but one thing ya ain't...is good.
With bells on ya Lugz, and a dirt weed buzz, ya embarrasin this hood.
.first line was decent.....second was pretty much filler.......6/10
I mean look at ya avy, could you strike a more submissive pose?
You look like ya wanna get fucked, seriously, ya half way outta ya clothes!
nice punch/personal....creative.......9/10
I see those who oppose get crushed like ants, man...since ya ain't been beat...
But I'm here ta disclose I'm a rope like Batman and leave ya deck incomplete.
wasnt really feeling the first line....but second one was nice....7/10
Capture tha Joker, then toss him aside, cuz alone he's useless...
Nothing seems to compliment this guy, except his own excuses.
this was a nice bar here.......9/10
Ya subpar, gotcha 1st loss, now you truely do rank below #2, son...
So the bullethole in ya name is fitting, cuz I've just made a hole in one.
not the greatest closer but gets the job done...7/10
38/50=76%
Jokers verse
Ur acient flows are no match fo me the barely provided wins in the past
Ya sig is irrelevant cause u got a 100 percent chance that I’ll merk ur ass
nice opener i was feelin the personal here.....9/10
Nigga u need to retire ur like 40 years old and u still don’t get respect
Old ass nigga…Ya rhymes was neva hard like ya viagra had no effect
not a great bar here..it was so so.......6/10
Nigga fuckin wit me you’ll have ur last seizure that will end ur life
Ur livin a miserable life 35 years past and ur still a virgin wit no wife
lmao........good punch/personal although the age jokes are played it still had a good effect......8/10
Ya state nickname is ur biography cause ur very lonely and ya die’n’slow
How da fuck are u on this site for 7 months and still don’t got no flow
nice bar........decent personal.......8/10
Ur not no vet just anotha newbie wit a lop-sided record tryin blow yaself up
discrace 2 da game wit no experience when u been in it since snoop was a pup
nice closer here...9/10
40/50=80%
close battle but joker wins 40-38........good battle both of u
haha weird
Born
Ya might be a joker, a midnight smoker, but one thing ya ain't...is good.
With bells on ya Lugz, and a dirt weed buzz, ya embarrasin this hood.
/\filler
I mean look at ya avy, could you strike a more submissive pose?
You look like ya wanna get fucked, seriously, ya half way outta ya clothes!
/\decent
I see those who oppose get crushed like ants, man...since ya ain't been beat...
But I'm here ta disclose I'm a rope like Batman and leave ya deck incomplete.
/\didnt understand that im a moron i guess
Capture tha Joker, then toss him aside, cuz alone he's useless...
Nothing seems to compliment this guy, except his own excuses.
/\ lol decent punch
Ya subpar, gotcha 1st loss, now you truely do rank below #2, son...
So the bullethole in ya name is fitting, cuz I've just made a hole in one.
meh filler
Joker
Ur acient flows are no match fo me the barely provided wins in the past
Ya sig is irrelevant cause u got a 100 percent chance that I’ll merk ur ass
/\punch??
Nigga u need to retire ur like 40 years old and u still don’t get respect
Old ass nigga…Ya rhymes was neva hard like ya viagra had no effect
played and not flipped well besides Born is white i believe:confused:
Nigga fuckin wit me you’ll have ur last seizure that will end ur life
Ur livin a miserable life 35 years past and ur still a virgin wit no wife
/\that is just stupid obviously not a personal and not a punch
Ya state nickname is ur biography cause ur very lonely and ya die’n’slow
How da fuck are u on this site for 7 months and still don’t got no flow
/\wack
Ur not no vet just anotha newbie wit a lop-sided record tryin blow yaself up
discrace 2 da game wit no experience when u been in it since snoop was a pup
/\gay double contradiction learn some gramar
overal born wins for better punches
sorry joker please dont think im beefing
im just honest elevate you seem to have
some potential
peace
why does joker have a picture of Nas in his sig that says joker on it...
uppin ur thread...
sorry guys to drunk to vote. i'll hit it up later
I already voted for this battle... can you both return the favor and post and honest vote on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102534
Thank You, Much Appriciated
Peace
Uppin to get that final vote...
Thanks much to those who have moved the poll.
Appreciated.
Help close this one out one way or the other...
Peace
damn good battle...both verses had me laughin...so here's my breakdown...
flow=btk
punches=joker(you said some wild shit! hahaha)that closer was sik...lmao
multis=tie
metas=joker
structure=btk
personals=btk...that avy line did it for me
vote=btk...good battle...I wanna see rd 2!
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress
Wow joker done dropped bomb shells....LOL fucken crazzyyyyyyyyyyyy
ur shit was good too b2k but we all kinda expect it from a vet
he just fucken riddled to be honest that was good
His lines about viagra opener and closer
b2k obviously had the avatar line which everyone pointed out, good shit yall both is crazy so dont hate on me, im just goin with what I felt, joker had a mad flow and I felt it, wheeled and dealed that shit GOOD BATTLE
Vote-Joker
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...3&pagenumber=2 yo vote for this battle
ok
born 2 k=his verse was straight i liked it really no hard punches i seen u do better nice flow though and shit was straight but just didn't it like it dat much
joker=ha the opener was funny tha 100 percent shit was a nice personal that had me laughin and shit seriously nice flow good punches and good structure
vote=joker he got this no doubt good battle both peeps though this was a close 1