me n u i wanted this shit now lets roll
10-30 lines me n u
drop 30 mins afta i hit aight pz
yall kno tha rules
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me n u i wanted this shit now lets roll
10-30 lines me n u
drop 30 mins afta i hit aight pz
yall kno tha rules
Checking in.....
You about to be 5-9
I got the combinations and key... So discard everything ya written...
Chrit's got this game on lock... just so this bitch cant get in...
But as the sayin goes, the dirtier the ho, the harder the slap...
Clownin on me?... Even the bitch in you is smarter then that...
Running ya mouth non-stop... so hoe just stop a minute...
I'll be nice and tell Pet ta keep his chin up... So I can pop ya in it
If all good things come to an end... no wonder you have infinite time...
And I'll be sure to give you props... when I run out of hands for mine
Set up to fail... sorry kid.... but you're the one to blame....
How you expect to beat the best... with a misspelled username?
10 lines
Fuck 30
Im slick when it comes-to-killin, your chest my gun-will-fill-in while blood shoots-out-ya-vein//
ya brain collapses-with-whackness neva hit ya satisfaction, expectations unsurpassed in rap your just movin-with-shame//
Lets leave-it-to-truth spit to his fullest but he still wound up being decieved-in-his-fables//
No support like a legless-table.. ripped the price tag of his dildo and claimed he had-a-Label//
yo man I hate ta say it but you asked for this battle n I dont need-nobody's-aid //
cuz my mouth is just like a double shotty gauge it’ll leave-ya-body-sprayed//
I ripped out ya heart and told the sound engineer to "sample-the-beat"//
"kick" the head of this laughable-geek so he can see an example-of-"da-feet"//(defeat)
droppin this whore with punches to the torso, strangle him with his intestinal-chord//
"droppin sick" cos its his "stomach and organs" that are "hittin-the-floor"//
Leave ya lifelines open like I 'slit-ur-wrists', I'm sick-n-pissed//
Like 'sweet pussy' I leave ya in 'holes' depending if u 'lick-or-fist//(licorice)
This bitch is a fag cuz he really does like it in his-booty//
Has his coach bendin over while hes yellin “put me in coach” like a homosexual-Rudy//
punches-chrit
flow-chrit
disses-chrit
personals-chrit
this was pretty one sided.. petrafy came iight not a bad verse but chrit just dropped much better punches there was a few quotables he had the better verse vote-chrit
return the favor hit up this battle
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...0&pagenumber=2
petrafy your structure was wack. i dont know why you didnt come more personal to be honest. well, you blew your big chance. ;)
chrit came clever/witty like he usually does. good closer and u had that sarcastic/cocky tone that u always come with. and thats what wins battles for you. props
vote: chrit
o well man i wanted ta battle him i stepped i get beat shit o well least i tried shit chrit is basically tha best on this site n im 5-8 what u expect lol
See ^^^...Quote:
Originally posted by Phoeniix
chrit...u had that sarcastic/cocky tone that u always come with. and thats what wins battles for you. props
vote: chrit
That's the "non-chalant" shit I've been referencing.
Someone else sees it too.
Good, thought it was just me.
Better punches, more complexity, better wordplay, and more personals...
Win this for Chrit.
Pet did ok for a pre-write.
(If it wasn't, I'm sorry for that)
But he had no personals at all.
And alot of played stuff.
Still, I see hope there.
A couple of your lines had some nice wordplay.
Just up the aggression with your punches.
Make em harder.
Peace
ite chrit gets this it just flowed alot better with more consitent punches, p man you gota work on your structure your lines were streched also work on punches against sum1 like chrit they gota hit harder man.
v- chrit............
........................plz hit this with an honest vote now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...66#post1029566 .thx............pz
3-0 finish this off kids...
= )
yo man http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...66#post1029566 plz dawg as i took the time....................pz
flow-chrit
structure-chrit
punches-chrit
creativity-chrit
overall-chrit
easy win ere..........1
cud ya hit up my battle wiv goofy in front lines 1st page wiv an honest vote.....!
Read new voting rules.. Vote disqualified -Token
4-0
One more vote to close this damned thing
Someone end this......
Petrafy.. I can tell you've been at a different site where all the quotations, apostrophes, and dashes are cool. Here you gotta get rid of it. Completely fucks your structure and flow up. Just be simple.. Example: Chrit's verse... Well structure.. Good balance of wordplay. Too many filler from chrit.. Harder punches for petrafy.. But you only had played metas.. and Multis aren't that great here either when you have them like you did. Get less violent and more intellegient. Be witty. Be smart. Out clever your opponents.
Vote- Chrit
^agrees wit token..
chrit beat you wit clever lines...simple structure..and nice flow..
we are not interested in how many multis you can use..
thats a played style of writing on this site...dont take it personal
thats just how we rate one's verse...
some of your lines were pretty nice...but you have to be clever and very creative to get wins..
chrit came decent..seen better but the verse was creative and witty..
poll vote=chrit
hit me up guys..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102062