Criticize22 vs Metaphysik

(everyone wanna battle me..why) anyway

5 bars/10 lines
blind
no c h dr votes
i set

man i need more than 10 bars

i can tell by tha way that u rap uze juss a rookie
u need to quit rappin n start sellin fortune cookies

cuz u would make more money off that then rap
please dont speak..ur breath smell like a jock strap

uze a pussy.. and n this game only tha strong survive
so strap ya boots n leave ya thongs aside
n when i beat ima say "hong kong was fryed" lol

ok now what time of a name is blazincrip
ur rhymes r like lite beer is doesnt phase my shit

i know u beat n ghost recon..but u will neva snipe me
n if ur lucky u will never have to fite me
cuz ill slit ya wrist like i was promotin nike

n dats rite i will neva have a shaved head
at least when i go to sleep it aint on a paved bed ( tha road)

finisher:
now look at ya book i juss took a page of life
this is only a rhyme dont start raisin ur knife

hahahahahaha that sucked

Aight check it

Theres no doubt I keep Crit in check like corrected papers//
Scratch like scrapers, let your lungs meet water and condense like water vapors//

Your minds made up like ugly hoes wit pretty clothes in lipstick//
Im dirt and your sick, that's opposite like Rick Slick, clowinin this bitch like It//

Your meeting your death like your talking to me on aim, this kids lame//
Crack ya frame, send double bullets at your house like the end of ya name//

Hold you down like bitches on knees, your flows wack please believe//
Blast 2's at Crit wit heat like i'm pushin repeat, hold ass like its your seat//

Your from Fort Worth Texas and have a man, that’s why you stay down south//
Like your eating alphabet cereal the way your stuck with words in mouth//





2nd bar: It is a killer clown
3rd bar: Double bullets like name...two
4th bar: Send 2's like repeat..22's

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metaphysik in every category possible..........i mean i just don't know why i would even vote on this its too obvious who won this.......the wordplay was just at different levels of elevation and suprise metaphysik had better wordplay.............oh not to mention..punches.....flow............vocab........ ...wahtever vote metaphysik.....uppin for your verse in elevated and both drop a vote on this shit if you got the time...........

and i forgot to paste the link my bad...............

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=2

yea. crit, you still need to elevate. think a few punches were in there. but stay with lower people and then go against vets. meta's verse was tight. got in all categories. p'z

vote - meta

return da favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101623 & http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100587

ite meta got this with everything man,

c- u seriously need to work on your structure man look at metas like dat also your punches were soft and some played work on that.plus u need to put more bluk in your bars dawg.elavaet.


meta nice closer man.....


plz plz vote on this now now now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...46#post1030046 ......thx...........pz

Ugh, this battle sucked. Both need to elevate seriously. Meta had a few decent punches, nothin spectacular. But criticize just sucked. No punches or anything. Meta, I would think you would use more Meta's being named after it and all.

Vote Meta for attempting to make a punch.

Nice battle.... Physics got you on that one but nice battle
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If you had 100 posts, this vote would have been invalided due to inadequate feedback. See this thread on what constitutes a valid vote.
-Kalvin

yo soz but can 1 of u plz put an honest vote on this to get the ball rollin its being slept on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...46#post1030046 thx...............pz

thanks for voting and all that left links i'll peep em in a minute..............

Both need to elevate seriously....word havent battled in while

i would think you would use more Meta's :) i spit nothing but metas

it's a habit...like this...like that....uppin (2)

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peepin links now

vote:metta

this waz a crappy battle both had a weak flow and weak puches the part " Your meeting your death like your talking to me on aim, this kids lame//" that waz sad

but still better than " can tell by tha way that u rap uze juss a rookie
u need to quit rappin n start sellin fortune cookies"

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Critize=Rhymes were simple and didn't really like it just the flow seem nice u need to work on ur structure son

meta=his verse wasn't that nice for the rec he carries he came nicer though with punches and shit so i liked his flow better

vote=meta

vote on this battle please and be respectful

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102244

meta i'll battle u afta this battle son 1