15-20 lines
1 hour
blindspit
check in..............
normal rules.............elevated sleeps..............dicks................
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15-20 lines
1 hour
blindspit
check in..............
normal rules.............elevated sleeps..............dicks................
my bad new rules 5 bars
i spit verse
feed off me and you will catch cancer cuase the flow is disaterous........................................ ..
checking in
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Mix dickriders and ring votes, now thats metaphysiks trail
Took that class in gradeschool, I was too intelligent so i failed
C, The physix of your xpilzit phlows are unnatural to the scientific method...
Cause no matter what you produce in ya rhymes, they'll never be respected
Your like Bullshit Gen eds so i'm a get credit and then drop you...
like oil mixed with water theres no way that i can't top you......
scientifically drop you, burn you up like asteriods hittin the o Zone
A-typically this unknown stops you dead like I was born prone
this battles like david and goliath except this time the giant wins
which is you so congratulations merk me sometime again.........
Aight check it
Washed up like detergent, never hit anything like pimps that are virgins//
In need of surgeons, Unders wrapped in towel and burned on top like turbans//
Leave Under out dated like kids wit no dates at dances mad as fuck//
This kid sucks, make you pray to "negative charms" like you believe in bad luck//
Your not ready like premature birth, punchin your face, it hurts//
Hells on earth, put pennies on this beef then squash it for what its worth//
Ill is what your not, your popped, im dialing bullets like I call shots//
Make your throat clot, like suspenseful books thats thickened wit no plot//
Your minds not right like your head tilts to the left, hit your cleft//
Stealing your life like baseball bases, theft, three shots and nothings left//
2nd bar: lucky charms...bad luck
rated - This was an alright verse, kinda week from what you brought to battles befor. You had good flow, and good structure. I liked a couple of punches in there, could have used some personals. You had some alright word play as well...
Meta- You aso had an alright verse. There was a nice flow, and all of that. I dont like it when // is put at the end of lines though. I liked your word-play, and the creativity. But alot of punches could have hit harder from my perspective.
Vote - Meta
Conclusion
I didnt like the opener and the closer of rateds verse. that really threw me off. You could have came with better punches, both of you could have accually. But I think Meta just hit harder with it...
( Please return the favor an honest vote on the battles in my sig )
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Damn.... Close shit...
Punches-Tie
Wordplay-metaphysik
Vocab-TheUnderRated
Enjoyable-metaphysik
Multies-Neither
Structure-Tie
Vote-Metaphysik
He edged it out..
I thought TheUnderRated had it
But Metaphysik surprised me with that comeback
Props to both of you
But Metaphysik gets my vote....
.....LINK......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102163
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i think Meta took this one...because he came more raw. underrated....u came good...u just didnt focus enough on just hitting cleverly...seemed like u wanted to get "scientific" and forcing complex vocabulary..plus your close was kind of giving up i think when ur like "merk me sometime again"
even tho i like UR's structure better...i think Meta took this since his punches were more aggressive. some clever concepts and some pretty cool metas were included in his veres as well..
good battle.
my vote: Meta
i took the time to vote on this, so hit this up honestly both of you please...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103318
wont let me poll? do u have to register for elite?? i have over 5 wins....so what do i do to register? anyways anybody who sees this can see i have over 5 wins....so i can vote. but i guess im not registerd to pol. so wahtever. i'll figure it out...
hit up my battle tho
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103318
Punches were decentQuote:
Quoted From TheUnderRated
Mix dickriders and ring votes, now thats metaphysiks trail
Took that class in gradeschool, I was too intelligent so i failed
C, The physix of your xpilzit phlows are unnatural to the scientific method...
Cause no matter what you produce in ya rhymes, they'll never be respected
Your like Bullshit Gen eds so i'm a get credit and then drop you...
like oil mixed with water theres no way that i can't top you......
scientifically drop you, burn you up like asteriods hittin the o Zone
A-typically this unknown stops you dead like I was born prone
this battles like david and goliath except this time the giant wins
which is you so congratulations merk me sometime again.........
Some were played
Alot the concepts were played
ya verse was ok
Still needs some Elevation...
Overall...13/20
Punches were also decentQuote:
[i]Quoted From Metaphysiks[/u]
Washed up like detergent, never hit anything like pimps that are virgins//
In need of surgeons, Unders wrapped in towel and burned on top like turbans//
Leave Under out dated like kids wit no dates at dances mad as fuck//
This kid sucks, make you pray to "negative charms" like you believe in bad luck//
Your not ready like premature birth, punchin your face, it hurts//
Hells on earth, put pennies on this beef then squash it for what its worth//
Ill is what your not, your popped, im dialing bullets like I call shots//
Make your throat clot, like suspenseful books thats thickened wit no plot//
Your minds not right like your head tilts to the left, hit your cleft//
Stealing your life like baseball bases, theft, three shots and nothings left//
Hit a bit harder than TheUnderRated's
Flow was pretty good.. structure..OLD
Wordplay... some were played...
Overall.......15/20
Vote-Metaphysiks
Meta came a bit harder...
Kinda weak battle tho
TheUnderRated..ya need to elevate a bit
No hate... just bein real
i'm not voting....just asking when u gone check in my battle agaist u Meta....i'm sure one of them are over now??
peace
UnderRated
Mix dickriders and ring votes, now thats metaphysiks trail
Took that class in gradeschool, I was too intelligent so i failed
C, The physix of your xpilzit phlows are unnatural to the scientific method...
Cause no matter what you produce in ya rhymes, they'll never be respected
Your like Bullshit Gen eds so i'm a get credit and then drop you...
like oil mixed with water theres no way that i can't top you......
scientifically drop you, burn you up like asteriods hittin the o Zone
A-typically this unknown stops you dead like I was born prone
this battles like david and goliath except this time the giant wins
which is you so congratulations merk me sometime again.........
Punches were alright, A few played ones
Alot the concepts were played also
ya verse was just ok
Elevation....<-- speaks for itself
Overall...12/20
Metaphysiks
Washed up like detergent, never hit anything like pimps that are virgins//
In need of surgeons, Unders wrapped in towel and burned on top like turbans//
Leave Under out dated like kids wit no dates at dances mad as fuck//
This kid sucks, make you pray to "negative charms" like you believe in bad luck//
Your not ready like premature birth, punchin your face, it hurts//
Hells on earth, put pennies on this beef then squash it for what its worth//
Ill is what your not, your popped, im dialing bullets like I call shots//
Make your throat clot, like suspenseful books thats thickened wit no plot//
Your minds not right like your head tilts to the left, hit your cleft//
Stealing your life like baseball bases, theft, three shots and nothings left//
Punches were good
Not much, but alittle harder then Under's
Flow was pretty good...
Structure - change it up...dont space bars or use //, thats old
Wordplay... that was ok
Overall.......16/20
Vote-Metaphysiks
Meta came a bit harder...
wasnt amazing..but i found some good wordplay here
Vote=Meta
why??
BREAKDOWN-
punches-meta
metas-meta
personals-under..thats all meta lacked
wordplay-meta
flow-both
structure-under..i jus prefer yours
overall-META
came w/ nice wprdplay n metas...
concentrate on more personal shit pz
MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ...BEING MAD SLEPT ON
I WILL POST AGAIN IF ITS NOT LOL
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102931
thanx for all the feedback y'all this was my first elevated battle....................uppin 2 close.................
I think metaphysik won this battle i liked his style an struture.
punches an personals were nice..so heres the Break
Punches-Tie
Wordplay-metaphysik
Vocab-TheUnderRated
Enjoyable-metaphysik
Multies-Neither
Structure-Tie
Vote-Metaphysik
He edged it out..
I thought TheUnderRated had it
But Metaphysik surprised me with that comeback
Props to both of you
But Metaphysik gets my vote....
Ill is what your not, your popped, im dialing bullets like I call shots//
^^Illest line in the battle.....
Other than that- this was a pretty tight knit battle
punches- Tie
Vocabulary- Under(some how i feel he overdid it tho..)
wordplay- Meta(he had some ill wordplay...like that line above)
flo- Tie(different structures....but the both flowed well
multi's- Tie(ok from both....sparingly)
meti4's- Meta(they were just more clever)
Overall Meta....I just think under came to like Webster'ish here.....I've never seen him do this before....he must be tryin summin different......
nice drop both...