C.Quip vs B.I.Detained

10 - 15 Lines
No Crew
No Hate
No Bullshit Votes
No Feeding Of Lines
Votes Must Be Explained
You Spit First...

check

seen as tho you set it
spit 1st

Gonna be busy for a bit..than I'll spit pz
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Ayo The Verbal Terror-Wrist'll Lay Scripts That'll Even Blow Through Bunkers//
I'm Ill...While Yah Straight Garbage Like Heterosexual Dumpsters//
This Biter A Repeated Offender...Hes Better Off Begin Called A (c)Serial//
Hell..You Should Even Be Made At This Win Since I'm Giving You New Material//
Ha..You Up For Keeps? You're Crew Wants You And And Stays AIM'ing Me//
Go Ahead And Cry Uncle..Cause Yah Weak Ass Is More "ON-T" (auntie) Than A Jesus Peice//
But...Bi's Weak Ass Couldn't Even 'Steal Through Victory' Downloading Biggie Tracks//
Flows You Lack..Its A Proven Fact That You Wack..So Just Get Over It Black//
Fuck It..The FightsOut..I'll Box Bush Like Putting Rock To The WhiteHouse//
You Winning? A One Armed Man With A Clapper Gots A Better Chance To Put My Lightsout//
Lets Just End This Bout..Theirs No Point To A Battle..Yah Already Left Ripped//
A KO? Don't Count On It..Like A Solar Powerd Calculator Begin Used..In A Eclipse//
Yeah Weak Bitch..The Bodyblows I Give You'll Heave You Face To The Furnace//
Buying Lottery Tickets The Only Time Yah Short Change Is 'Scatching The Surface'//
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You're Just Simply Gay..The Type To Ask For Fights And Scream For Mase..Kid..To Beat Me..You'll Need To Play Hopsctoch With Priests To Get A Leap Of Faith.....

Sribble...Key..Scribble..Key...how the Fuck you wanna battle me?

WARNING*-You can't put a Merkin in ya Sig W/out a Fukin Win
says he Merked 2Tymer..yet we all know that it cunt have Bin
tells RB..[~*~Better Than You~*~]..I guess he's into Jokes
I wanted you outta my site at 1st..now I hope he fuckin Elopes
I got you Detained but I dint know ya Sentence was Stretched
I See you as a Droolin K9 Dawg..by all the votes ya Try to Fetch
S'Thug asked me to battle U coz he wanted to Evaluate a Herb
...he's gonna Sonne you More..but am sure thats wot U Deserve
see your not eQUIPped to step to me..let alone start to Dance
coz it takes 2 to fuckin Tango..but on C.Quip I got an Advance
I'm Miles ahead of you and I could U-turn endlessly
..B4 you even Caught Me...
your a Broken-Down Newbie..just another Victimised Emcee
Verbal Terror-Wrist Huh...even your own Quotes are Suicidal...
I read your name 4 Million Times and I still Cunt Find a Rival

Aight B.IDetained..Nice Verse..Aight People..Upping For Some Votes For This People Dammit!!!!!!


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Uppin for muh crew ~ .

uppin 1st


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BI-good punches,flow,vocab,consistant verse,good worplay,had personals

CQ-good punches,flow,vocab,didnt see personal,ok wordplay

Vote:B.I

please drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102394

BI - good punches, nice personals, flow was aight, vocab was in there, nice structure

CQ - good punches, no personals (didnt see any in my opinion), flow was good, vocab, structure was good

vote - BI

PS: if you are wondering why mine is somewhat like joker's, its because i saw and thought almost the exact same thing. nice drop my both tho.

return da favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102483 <-- (me vs -Technician-) [0-0] he hasnt spit yet, but when he does, VOTE!

1-0

The Other Cat Didn't Vote On The Poll So It's Still 1-0.


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I say that b.i wins

B.I had that perfect structure and flow to his drop.
C.quip came tight too but he lacked any punches and just didn't seem to hit as hard as B.I
Hot battle on both sides but B.I. is more elevated than you C.Quip
-Aragorn-

I voted.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102471

I would appreciate one from the both of you.

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Bi punches hit harder an he had better wordplay an vocab which made his punches more effective!!
it was a god battle. but quip jus didnt come hard enough!!


plz drop an honest vote ont his battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100819

B.I.- came wit hard hitting punches, the flow was consistent, had some personals, vocab was nice, had some good wordplay

C.-had ill multis, good punches, flow fell off a lil, one or two personals, vocab was good, werdplay was ok

Conclusion- B.I. takes this because he came wit better punches and personals.

Since I took the time to drop my 2 cents, id appreciated if you would do the same.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102686

peace........

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bi won he had a better overall verse.
his punches and everything else were better
everything that needs to be said has already been said so i wont repeat it

vote = BI

can you guys return the favore with a honest vote. need one more to close this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102470

wow....what an ill ass battle

I woulda lost to both.....its hard for me to even vote-
but....
punches- both (tie)(crazy punches on both sides)
meti4's- C(that dumpster line......Ill as fuk)
multi's-none(but they werent missed at all)
personal's- BID(he tore C apart here...awsome personals)
flo- tie(both moved smooth an delivered nice)
vocab-C(slightly bigger wit his words used slightly better)

both came wit there best.....vote- C.....hard decision...both were nice....no hate to either...*1*

you asked who i was, well i've already voted on this battle, an you posted your link twice in mine.........................STFU ;)

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i already knew that in the bk of ma head
oh yea ya sed it in another thread...duh!!!
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aight here it is....

C.Quip (which by the way is an interesting choice of screen name lol) came with steady wordplay, metas, some punches and stayed fairly consistant. There weren't really any hard hitters, and a few lines were played, but overall a decent verse... but this (sadly) was the best punch in the battle :

"Fuck It..The FightsOut..I'll Box Bush Like Putting Rock To The WhiteHouse//
You Winning? A One Armed Man With A Clapper Gots A Better Chance To Put My Lightsout//"


B.I. came okwith some personals, creative use of c.quips name, weak punches (no hard hitters at all) and basically SURPRISED THE SHIT OUTTA ME wit that weak post... B.I. you are one of the best on RB and that by far was the worst I have ever seen you do. It's no that it was a bad verse, but you definitely didn't try.

sorry bro, but C.Quip takes this one. Honest vote, no beef

good luck yall

pz

This was a decent battle, and I enjoyed both verses, but C.Q- I see more and more emcees using "extended lines" and it really fucks up tha flow. Yours were longer than I would usually prefer, but really, to each his own, and you both had tight flows here.

Here's tha breakdown:

Open:B.I.
Close: C.Q
Structure:B.I.
Flow:B.I.
Punches:C.Q
Personals: eh
WordplayC.Q
Metas: C.Q
Multi's: C.Q
Enjoyment: Tie

Vote C.Q

Hey, hit this link wit an honest vote:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103166

Thanx............................................. .......................~1

bi takes this.......i felt he had fresher concepts more creative punches and a lil bit better flow......his verse was just too much for C quip

c.quip-u had some nice ideas and punches but they just werent enough.......your verse wasnt really bad just get rid of the // at the end of your lines......u had a good verse but bi's was just a lil bit stronger