CarsonJet -v- ILLunatic

10 lines
no crew
no hate
no dik
no recycling
no biting
no feeding
blind spits

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Go ahead and drop Carson
I'll drop later on tonight....
I'm mad busy....................
Plus..... I got writers block

ILLunatic? dis bitch? didn't u just battled a joke an get ripped?
Check his vics,^hey look!^ it's equivalent to his web-sites hits
Split spit wit vocal cords like a mack truck dun jacknif'd' a ford
hijack'd a sword-blood pour'd-drown'd em at a depth he can't afford
word's left blur'd elevated frontlines now he's got the writers block?
More like lack of cock to block-this is one thread u can not lock
status quota check'im set..im jet u couldnt hit me if u was ILLunaTek
Face the facts-ya wak..even chevrolette couldnt make ur spit worth vette
goose egg's repp'd? it's what happens when u battle talent steada newbies
thought u had a clue G ur just a trail'in bitch it's true yo im your Movie

Carsonjet....wannabe vet....Ya stepped in, and i wonder if ya beds-wet yet
Do you regret yet..My rhymes put you in debt..so you kno ya not a vet
Ya skills a disgrace...bout as bad as ya face...Its time ta put you in ya place
Without a trace...........Ya out like Greg Vaughn comin up on 1st base...
Carson Ya lost ya jet- son...Ya not a vet-son...19 and gotta crush on Judy Jetson
Ya wrecked-son...lessons w/Mike Tyson and a punch you still couldn't perfect-one
Use to be in UT but they infected....Non perfected... Ya skill against me is rejected
Intersected.. ILL v.s Jet... Its obvious who's lethal injected..ya punches are weak and niglected
Hold tha phone....Carsonjets just been owned...Served so bad he can't find his way home
All alone....On tha net server thinkin how his Cyber lifes just been blown..................

Close battle...Im not gonna vote cuz ya both in da crew but good spit from ya both~ ..

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Carson you said i won
But idk i think its pretty close
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u vote swayin lil bastard .....lol....if there was no THOG i would win easy**right back at u...........

LoL...
Yea yea yea....
I had to get personals
But anyways....
No more freeposting...
VOTE FROM NOW ON...

Good battle tho Carson
No beef....Still tight

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Breakdown

punches ill: Check his vics,^hey look!^ it's equivalent to his web-sites hits// Ya skills a disgrace...bout as bad as ya face...Its time ta put you in ya place

metas cj: Split spit wit vocal cords like a mack truck dun jacknif'd' a ford// ill you lacked

personals ill: Carson Ya lost ya jet- son...Ya not a vet-son...19 and gotta crush on Judy Jetson <----LMAO// carson yours was tight too but he took it in this

multies cj: ILLunatic? dis bitch? didn't u just battled a joke an get ripped?
Check his vics,^hey look!^ it's equivalent to his web-sites hits// ill you lacked some and coulda been flipped

flow both: both were pretty tight consistant on the dissing and not that stretched//

overall i gotta go with illunatic no hate cj just my opinion man

can yall peep mine in here its below this one please

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open: CJ.................................
close: ILL................................
personals: ILL..........................
metas: CJ..................................
punches: ILL..................................
multis: both.............................................. .
overall - ILL................................

win:

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This shit gettin mad
Slept on.................

vote -illunatic............

punches - tie. none were above average from either.
metties - tied. metties from both, but none stand out.
flow - illunatic. carsons was hard to catch, for some reason.
most likely this was because of weird spellings, and misplaced metties making it hard to read. yours was much easier to read.
personals - no really stand out ones fromm either.
opener: neither
closer: CJ, he actually had a punch in his.

vote -ilunatic, because of flow. everything else was avg from both .

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I'm up....3-0...........
2 More and it will be
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hate to say it Carson...u my boy and everything...but Ill did get u in this...basically in the same ways feeble placed it....except i saw the punches as a close tie....and this battle really boiled down to vocabulary...and Ill had a tad better vocabulary...everything else was either even or close

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Ill
Vocab - Ill
Flow - Tie
Punches - Tie
Rhymescheme - Tie
Structure - CJ
Metas - Tie
Personals - Tie (none hit hard in my opinion)
Overall - like i said...Ill gets this just for having a better vocab..lol...everything else was pretty evened out....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote

peace

I'm Up.......4-0
Bout to be KO
Someone vote
And close this
This has been
Open for far to long
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Yeah this was a good battle here..
Punches: ILL
Multies: ILL
Flow: Tie
Vocab: ILL
Structure: CJ
Personals: Tie
Overall this was a good battle...but i think ILL came better with the overall verse...punches hit harder i felt...but props to both of you...vote goes to ILL