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no d/r &
no hate votes
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the rules have been set...
10-12 max lines...
u drop first...
i will drop later on
real votes please.
no d/r &
no hate votes
good luck...
yayo have fun getting shitted on.
lolol
damn dawg i had that same idea ..for that alter ego shit..
reminds me of a jordan commercail
aight... yo...
why should I call u mr. when u don't even spit tight
u probably never wrote shit in ya whole life/
like pizza in a burger king kid u in the wrong place
go get da copz cuz u'll vanish without a trace/
like a blood stain bein washed away u will fade
came up like u hard but walk in shame cuz u'll fail/
like a fuckin ant 'mr' will get trampled
u won't even know what actually really happened/
cuz u only in this game for the show u know
pluz ya walk talk and clothez it iz all for show/
u can't do it even though it was shown
cuz ya shit iz still wack and mine iz like 'whoa'/
pz.
aight that kid can't vote, what the fuckz your problem ?................................................. .................................................. ..................
nuthin u jsut luv the dik u wanna battle me next..
an i just no where mr rite came from...
so yayo u wanna battle me
checkin in
droppin soon as i can...
100 characters........................................ .................................................. .................................................. ....................
aight...
why'd i agree to this shit....aint got time for the winless geek...
it wont start here..
meaning ya rap career...bright future..or ya winnin streak...
he's getting weak...i should feel bad for even dissin this hoe...
and we'll see how hard he is
.............................standin next to me under the mistle toe...
somethings missin bro..oh yea personals..for him its hopeless...
did him a favor...........battlin me maybe he'll finally get noticed...
wackness must be taught... i give props to those that teach ya..
go back to school kid..............cuz u aint doing shit here either....
check his occupation in his profile to get that last line
decided to go eight instead..that should be enough..
keyed it up before i went to lunch so..
let the voting begin...
uppin 4 honest votes............................................. .................................................. ................
first up come on folks...
we need votes.......................^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^
mr w.rite took this by skill, you had better punches, structure multies and everything.. you just served this kid.. but yayo your verse was alright.. keep spitting
vote = mr w.rite..
hit dis up...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101949
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102049
FreeYayo
Your structure was basic..good.
But content wise you just lacked..
The witty,funny or personal punches,
Did not occur in your verse..
Basically quite weak to be honest..
I mean your not that bad.. just work on,
Punches & that witty wordplay which are,
Essential in battles.
Overall Below average..
Mr W.Rite
Pretty basic..try not to fill space up with the..
Dots so much though..
You had some nice lines..good personals..
& sum funny, witty lines that summat where..
Quite enjoyable to read, a rare thing in FL.
The mistletoe line made me laugh a little.
This is a battle, punches are what count most..
You had way better punches & personals..
So..do the math.
Overall Ok-Good.
vote Mr W.Rite
aight hot battle, the punches an wordplay won this battle fo him.
MR W.Rite, u got sum good skill dawg. In fact id say rite got most of the vote points.
so overall*rite.....im poll vote l8r on, when i got 100 posts aight...
ok this wasnt even enjoyable.....
it was like watch a bear eat a squirrel.....
m killed yayo in every way.....personals'punches'flo.......meti's multi's....even tho the dot deal was dumb....
yayo elevate
vote MR
V/ mwr
nice verse...your structure was vet style...nice job...good punches, couple nice personals
Yayo was basic...nothin to complex nor hard...it was ok...but not good nuff to beat Rite
my 2nd up.thanx for the votes i will hit up those battles later...^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
i gotta say that Mr Write killed in this battle.
Yayo had some real played punches. The Burger King Joint for examle.
Mr. Write did everything right. He didn't really come that Hard but
he finessed the basics and therefore wins it on technical skill.
He had prsonals. Wordplay Structure Metas Sustainment and Overall Enjoyment over tony yayo so....
Vote=Tony Yayo
I'm just playing.... Mr.Write.
I took the tyme so, If you don't mind......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101920
3rd up
come on guys drop the links
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alwayz same shit, my verse wasn't bad I had more metaphors and shit, u all just dickridin' him (I'm not sayin' he was weak or some shit) but that most of y'all just vote for him cuz he been round here longer, talkin' about elevation, fuck that, I'd bet 70% up in here dropz there shit pre-written, fake ass battlers. (again I'm not sayin he did) I'm through with this fake shit.
just keep battlin man..you'll get better
believe me we both have a ways to go...
uppin #4^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Yayo--
Some halfway decent punches. good flow, good structure. ok.
w.rite--
some good punches...but a lot of it didnt seem personal. flow was ok...but..
vote: free yayo
return the favor....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102139
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101943
Quote:
Originally posted by Mr W.Rite
3rd up
come on guys drop the links
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make this my last up....need one vote...
:thumbup:
All Right..............
Mr.Write...........Had An Better
Overall Verse Better Puns
Better Everything Good Shit
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Vote= DaCurse