10 bars (20 lines)
*All Rules Apply
*Both verses Due 12-30-03
any later than that will result in a DQ
*All votes must be explained
Good Luck!!
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10 bars (20 lines)
*All Rules Apply
*Both verses Due 12-30-03
any later than that will result in a DQ
*All votes must be explained
Good Luck!!
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rofl.............IN
IN
Its like…
Your verbal methods don’t achieve superior heights for people to vision,
Trying to reach herbal types but doesn’t know the word dope in his mission/
Your reduced style aint hitting high stakes to come out with a superb script,
Why try and produce bile? You don’t splert twisted bulks to be heard as sick/
Who sent me this dick, His spits lack conditions to rise up to these standards,
Being beat by this Britt as no hits are missed when as I damage your innards/
You think your competition? You wouldn’t win this like spastics running the 100M,
Do you want me to link some tuition cause yours writes don’t hit degree’s like dreamers/
Leaving this boy sunk after every lined attack violates his breaching grounds,
As this speaking pounds into this clown, his work wont be seen by watching crowds/
Your decision to be killed by a new known newb really does make you suck,
This Session being sealed as I’ve caused to much smoking to this new punk/
Why ask for me to drop early? Is it to slaughter your presence permanently,
You spitting lots is rarely seen, Certainly your gonna come post sickness surely/
This coward picking up newbs but doesn’t know which one will violently erupt,
But guess what, this flows heating this bitch leaving him in a messed way like sluts/
You think people rate your newb wack but infact they slate behind your back,
It’s a joke to beat fake wannabe crap who pack weak facts in their nursery acts/
I speak the street cause this shit is quality as it nestles down a appetizing win,
Dropping of wrapping up gifts as this is another collected present I’m sending/
A little keystyle for you..
Uppin on your verse...take your time...you did say do something quick...remember deadline is tonight...
Peace
Kid how long does it take to write a verse? im gonna be an old peoples home before your finished...this is jokes, i do this quick and you have hours...
yea my bad hommie.. i was at work and my boss needed me to stay for a few extra hours so i did... ya know.. money is money what can i say...anyways im writting my verse now.. i will have it up within the next 10min..
Peace, sorry for the delay.
Come on you herb, you’re so wack you couldn’t organise catastrophe
If you had a meeting with Bin Laden, Saddam Hussein and one thousand Iraqis
You spelt your name wrong and you can’t even rhyme two lines together
I’ll put a bullet in your head and murder your gang’s one and only member
I beat you so hard in the chest your sole is battered, bruised and abused
I’ve been accused of statutory rape cos I’m fucking these kids up daily
Truth strikes like R.Kelly saying "now I know why she had to be home by 8"
It Hurts dosnt it, you sound like the kind of guy that would say "i dont like
coc i just like the smell of it"
If you were to ride along on a bolt of lightning I’d still be ahead by light years
You don’t deserve such an ill ripping as skill’s dripping off my divine tongue
I could still defeat you if I was deaf, mute, blind and surviving on one lung
Since when do Verse and heart rhyme? Oh wait now this fag is editing
Circumcised Tapestry feel my lyrical blasphemy allow the sins to begin
my lyrics encrypt scripts with knife like incisions, that cuts you length
width and thickness like 3D dimensions
My choke maneuvers are designed to shed right throug you
like I gave you the Heimlich maneuver wearing the gloves of Fred Kruegar
Finisher:
When I spit precision my collisions shifts within them, attack your chest
plate so hard, your heartbeat will be skippin rhythm
you about to get Ko’d after you fall imma choke you
cause I just beat you so bad even chrit wouldn’t vote for you
Bare played lines man but uppin for votes!
Peace
Upping for some honest votes and properly explained the new way............................................... .................................................. ............#1
Uppin this shit...explain your votes please....
Up, Up and away to the top!!
#2
Opener: Doze sorta lame kat Vers nice line Moving some weight there
Flow: Vers's flow nice
Struc: I liked dozes structure a lil bit better
Punches: Vers hit hard with his, doze made some contact but vers takes this
Overall a close battle but vers takes the scene
Safe dogg,
#3
UP, UP AND AWAY TO THE TOP,
UPPIN ON THIS QUICK SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn this battle had some long ass verses...
but this is how i saw it...
opener/draw
closer/ver...
vocab/ver...
complexaty/ver...
multi/draw
meta/draw
structure/doze...
punches/ver...
personals/draw...
hey i liked ver`s... style better used some big words and it captured me in a sense of mind...
it was a style not seen often...
you doze yer verse was long...but it was really good...but im afraid i wasnt feeling it like ver`s is verse
vote/verstyle...
Damn, fuck it..being beats the best thing...shows i need to elevate more, someone sign up in my battle callout, nice battle with yah style, nice beginning for me...safe it..
Peace
yea dawg no doubt.. but dont look down yet... cause you can still come back..
Nice Verse by the way
Upping for some honest votes #2................................................ ...................
i know. these were very long battles and i think it was a close battle.
''Come on you herb, you’re so wack you couldn’t organise catastrophe
If you had a meeting with Bin Laden, Saddam Hussein and one thousand Iraqis"
^nice opener Vers, this what gave u a HUGE lead in the long run.
the rest of it were good punches as were Doze's, but the vote has to go to Vers. I liked ur Finisher too Vers.
Vote - Vers
PS: I hope this was explained properly. Dont wanna get DQ'd
yo i think V took this because.....
Doze, i see you got skill. its obvious in your vocabulary and ability to use words and flow nicley. i think all u gotta do is just harness that capability into solid more direct punches at your oppononent. say it straight up. be a little more raw and your shit will come off more agressive and punches will land easier. get a little personal wit it next time....
Verstyle, good verse had it all down solid. punches landing...flow right on...had some personals in there. Only piece of advice i could say is to not over do the stuff about how youre gonna physically murder him and shit. i dont know....just my opinion. but otherwise all punches hit hard and had some creative shit in there. good verse.
my vote: verstyle
i looked at verstyles battles and i like his style..... he is creative and has solid verses.....this one was close but i would like to vote for ver because i just felt the style and flow better...doze your good too,but verstyle takes this for over hits.........
peace