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:shoot: Whoever you jam dog you sweet as them - I got a group called teks Dont make me feature them-
If you get a peice of them- you wont see the end - Plus I flatter with a Dagger Like Im Peter Pan-
And your flow fucka just part of my extraz- I know Im nice Faggit- I'll say parden and Wet cha-
Fuck a lot of Ho's- Even ones that resemble carmen electra- But your Ho give enough mouth to give a Army a lecture-
If this was a championship game- I would get them damn rings-And if you damn scream- Ima give you damn wings-Fucka holla back for more
:shoot:
:nono: Damn I'll come back for more...
I got a 4-5 so there aint no nine to hold busta- 9 to 5 straight worker see ima bold hustla-
cows'll fly the day i unload sucka- plus your lepercon flows cant touch my pot of gold fucka-
and HEY!
I get mad brains with a mad Dame- My flow spetacular at times its Dazzling-
And i get mad love from theses mad fiends- These mad rocks get me mad change and mad glocks-
and The man rocks, mad glocks no way to contain me and I bust Mad shots Like my gun was angry-You wont beat me fucka-
I kill'em all:shoot:
I feel quite bad battlin you son, you'll gain a loss before 5 posts
I sense you've got no lyrical ability - I'm battlin WoodJohn's ghost!
Ya shootin blanks as usual... apparantly not only verbal slugs
I hope you'll never try audios either, peeps'll definately don plugs
It's obvious you'll remain un-noticed... obviously won't make it big
I guess theres summut to help tho... maybe find a standout sig
Set a time limit.. you take 10 for that weak response to the thread
Tho credit where its due... obviously you didn't pre-write instead!
Still, you're hardly 'Notorious', I mean just look at ya battle tally
I'm merkin' you kid, sonned straight back....back...to Cali...
lol sorry man.....I had a little min or two screen crash...
Uppin for votes..........................................
Ima leave you dead fucka with no trace-you a prick that just run to the jakes-
Your blood'll be spilt with a run to the lakes-Ill have you in harlem searching for the lord-
but theres one problem-your not mace
Im glad Im battling you on the inernet cause your face shall not be showed-
I usally battle for green but today a price wont be owed-unless i put you on my hype list-
10 dollars for a handgun Ima snypist- 100 dollars just to leave you lifeless- but killing you with hallow point bullets its priceless-
chea!:gfy:
Lmao.....riiiiiggght....use any verse I guess.....
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j had a few good lines but most of it di dnt flow
too well． some of it was funny tho．
harlem’s sig line was classic． funny shit D
j got repetitive at the end (mad and mad that)，
and he just kept going． he had some weak @shit
too．．．
vote：harlem
heh...forgot i cant vote...and ignore that, this computer is fucked up...
100 charrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrracters
J Goodz
Visit the cypher department..
Overall Weak
Harlem's Finest
Ok verse..clean, good structure..
Pretty nice lines through out..consistant.
The Woodjohn line was funny..
Already won it for you..to one sided..
Some ok solid punches..
Overall Ok-Good.
Return the favour..
i'll break it down like i'm supposed to.......
Whoever you jam dog you sweet as them - I got a group called teks Dont make me feature them-
^not a punch not a personal....weak sexual stuff and thinkin your the shit....not battle tactics...
If you get a peice of them- you wont see the end - Plus I flatter with a Dagger Like Im Peter Pan
^ok you tryed some wordplay i respect that.....flatter with a dagger?....again no punch...more talkin about how good you r..
And your flow fucka just part of my extraz- I know Im nice Faggit- I'll say parden and Wet cha-
Fuck a lot of Ho's- Even ones that resemble carmen electra- But your Ho give enough mouth to give a Army a lecture-
^ok thats almost a punch...no personals...talkin about your girls???....talkin about his girl.....weak.......
If this was a championship game- I would get them damn rings-And if you damn scream- Ima give you damn wings-Fucka holla back for more
^simplistic flow....no punches talkin about how good you are....
filler...you wrote more than 10 thats all i'm going through....
3/10
FINEST...
I feel quite bad battlin you son, you'll gain a loss before 5 posts
I sense you've got no lyrical ability - I'm battlin WoodJohn's ghost!
^good setup the punch was kinda weak is he woodjohn if so ...then the punch hit harder but he prolly don't even know who woodjohn is..
Ya shootin blanks as usual... apparantly not only verbal slugs
I hope you'll never try audios either, peeps'll definately don plugs
^creative OK punch which is enough to take this battle on the punches category......
It's obvious you'll remain un-noticed... obviously won't make it big
I guess theres summut to help tho... maybe find a standout sig
^ kinda weak sorry i ain't feelin that as much as you may have been...
Set a time limit.. you take 10 for that weak response to the thread
Tho credit where its due... obviously you didn't pre-write instead!
^ok you prolly don't wanna give him credit in a battle at all....you coulda punched em but you complimented him......
Still, you're hardly 'Notorious', I mean just look at ya battle tally
I'm merkin' you kid, sonned straight back....back...to Cali...
^goin for a personals here i feel that the punch missed a lil but hey what are yougonna do......
6/10
vote goes to harlem.....
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Plus I flatter with a Dagger Like Im Peter Pan
-J Goodz that was ok word play i give that like a 5/10
-Harlem finest-It was hard to unserstand your verse man
ther was some nice punches though, But still My vote goes to J goodz.
Tha Breakdown
Opener-Harlem
Closer-Harlem
Flow-Harlem
Structure-Harlem
Punches-Harlem
Vote-Harlem
I took tha time now u redo tha favor
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress
HArlem took this no fuckin problem in every category no point in listing them...............and J u need to start talkin less shit and start showin more skills
vote :Harlem
I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress
J goodz...ur structure is completely fukked. I didn't even wanna read dat shit but I forced myself to...and I was dissapointed to learn it was still whack.
dawg...i suggest you take a trip to the wackness emergency centre and take a good look at how you should structure your rhymes. Overall, this goes to Harlem's Finest hands down.
If you are even dumb enough to vote for j goodz...then you do not deserve to judge any rap battle.
I'll poll when i hit 100 posts. Out.
Drop a honest vote on the battles in my signature plz. Notice the word honest. Tired of dick riders.
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Final up................................................ .................................................. ......... please drop an honest vote man... drop a link etc.. for a favour returned.....
aight i know i cant poll vote, but heres my 2 cents anyway........
J Goodz- ur verse was not good.......had a few so so punches at best.......start cyperhing and droppin open mics and shit till u have a bigger idea about how to form words together to make multis, metas, and better punches
HarlemsFinest- not the finest verse ive ever seen........still had some good punches, some good multis........keep battlin homie, u got the main concept down at least....
props to both of ya, but Harlem takes this.....
yo can u please return the favor......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102438
much appreciated.......
Yo, Jgoodz, I know you could bring it better than that. Some better punches and some better flow.
Yo HF, your's was pretty good. Good puinches flow and wordplay.
Vote: Harlem's Finest.
Originality - HF.. fresh concepts an minimal played lines
Punches - Both.. Peter Pan line was new
Personals - HF.. first bar.. J's verse coulda been for anyone
Flow - HF.. held the punches together nicely
VoTe = HF
Nice battlin.. jus felt HF's seemed more tailor-made an J's was kinda pre-written lookin.