10 lines-
No hate-
No dr-
You spit first-
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10 lines-
No hate-
No dr-
You spit first-
Cmon guy this goona be another no show......?
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atticus, rappin and attackin the baddest of rappers
gettin lyrically slapped and passed like mister Ester*
i raided your home domain
and impaled your daddy's remains
on a stake contained in flames
ur moms a slave to my craving of 'brains'*
so i'm your new dad, be glad, i aint that bad
but we can't have that attitude, bitch slappin you lil bastard
contracting bad moods and jackin for dudes, just cause i hit all over ya,
my crappy dad views are exactly what fueled your bad case of Vitricophobia*
sorry it was pretty quick. i will be back to see your later...
here are the meanings of some big boy words for those who have to ask...
*Who Is Ester?
*brains=head/blow job/hj/dick suck (good stuff)
*Vitricophobia-fear of step dad
no feedin either homie...........................
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Man ur shit needs a major tune up//
Ive heard better from todlers riding tonka trucks//
My lines are a scalpul and ill slice you with real precision//
Better watch out or ill make a verbal cercumsision//
The shit you spittin dont even match hip-hop criterea//
My words'll be beatin ya so hard you'll go strait into deleria//
Ill entoxicate you like a 300 mill of liquor//
Ur a fat ol' man and im the collesterol makin ur blood thinker//
As the days go on im gettin to you//
Ima give you a heart attack and see you done through//
uppin please vote.............................................. ......................................
hahaha this battle was funny wow nookie ur structure was wierd but original but flow was wack
also a77 was not tite but it was funnier and had a better flow he gets my vote
vote for this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102244
thanks anyways bro... uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....
uppin x2................................................ ..................................
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quite a weak battle.....but they gotta get voted on so.....heres what i think....firstly Mc, whats with the structure... ya punches werent too hard hitting either.... and the flow was knocked thru it.... A77...this was weak but brought some humour into it.. but still the punches were weak....so close call.....im gonna have to go A77 in this.....vote=A77... both need to work on wordplay n hard hitting punches..ok...pz
return the favour plz....
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...06#post1033206
yes i know im weak, everyone starts somewhere. uppin please vote.............................................. .................................................
both of u need a lil work aint gonna come easy but a77 was pretty funny and had an ok flow he get me vote
NOT A HATE VOTE....
MC NOOKIE im sure you can do better than that so im not gonna talk shit on it, anyway it flowed better than the other kids but it just didnt have good punches
A77 had some OK punches enough to win,
opener-a77
closer-a77
punches-a77
original verse and written the fastest-MC NOOKIE
Return the favor without hating im just dealin with the facts------
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102450
a77 took both the opener and closer and punches. MC u just need to work on it and you will get better.........................
vote-a77
vote on this..............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102780
upin.............................................. .................................................. .............
lets rap it up guys.............................................. .................................................. ..............................
a77 took this.. his punches...although they weren't much were harder hitting and wittier...nookie, if you gon' use big words like victrophobia...or whatever the hell that was...make sure it flows well with the line above...or whatever the case may be...elevate on your punches, and necessary parts of the verse and you'll be aight...but for now, a77 took this one....
vote0-a77