cheked in......ill spit in about 30 minutez.......
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cheked in......ill spit in about 30 minutez.......
aiight i'll put my verse up exactly at 05:10........................................
my check in.........................................
watch as this herb 'falls' off, punchlines draw in 'tumble' weed,
'taggin' him like im a 'graf artist', i even make iron hearts bleed,
when you dream in colour its a pigment of your active imagination,
the only caterory you could take, is one of minimum participation,
comin at me, 'quarter' like skill, i come back, an i hit 'priceless',
rip out your 'lungs', squeeze so much that i leave you 'lifeless',
battle this 10 year old, bearly able to type correct grammer,*
leave him menatlly scared, till arrivin in with skool a stammer,
any type of rap, leave it alone, you got van goghs ear for music,
some late advice, this battle if you never had it, you cant lose it.
*on his profile it says he was born in 1990
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you got bout 5 mins you best spit
no hate
good luck
ni99a waz "double0-seven???!"
i knock u so hard give u a free flite 2 heaven
dis aint no james bond, he ja rule
b battlin' rookies, gettin winz- thinkin' u cool?
yo dis kid iz representin da UK.....
he b thinkin he gonna get dis win.."NO WAY"
yo ur linez iz "rubbish"........
imma tell u wa i tol' 2 wood john."u wish!"
yo ur rapz is goin down da gutter...
dis kid hearz mah name n he stu-tt-err
yo waz dat on ur lips?? iz dat cum?
dis ni99a gay, b havin a 3 sum.....
his dick iz so small he masterbatez wit tweaserz
dis ni99a so ugle wen i see em i get seizures!
pple dun laugh wit u, dey laugh at u
i creamed gizzard n wood john, n imma do da same 2 u
every1 will remember dis "double0-seven" tragedy
imma kill em, yo go on stage...ur shytz a comedy
watch dis ni99a b diggin 4 hiz rapz n' hiz lil notebook
but they aint gonna help u...cuz dis battle i took....
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why you set a time limit, which i didnt even originally post up in the first place if you aint even gon follow it????????????????????
flow:007
punches:007
vocab:007
wordplay:even
personals:lil tager
Opener:007
Closer:even
Vote:007
Can u hit tha batttle in my sig wit a vote since i took tha time to vote 4 yours thanx
-chuuch
i needed time 2 think......i said 30 minutez.....n unlimited linez*
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*****************u culd re-do ur shyt if u want*******
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nah it aight, i posted my last comment when i though u hadnt posted, but turns out i was wrong............................................. .
doesnt say crew cant vote.... so im gona
double-0 seven takes every category.... complete merking....
one thing double-0 seven.....
if he born in 1990, he would be 13 or 14 by now.... not 10...
but u still merked him...
vote - double-0 seven
oo7 took this in every catagory, nicer flow, punches landed iight,
disses hit betta, lil tagger need to elevate his skills, punches was weak, disses was weak,
vote oo7
lol, i must of thought it was still 2000.............................................. ......................................
First of All... I don't think that it should have to be said... crew votes should be banned from battles period. Especially when one MC has 1000+ posts vs. the others 100+ posts.
But Anyways, 007 took this one regardless to me.
The strength of his punches combined with good structure and creative subtleties like "pigment of your imagination" really turned the tide here.
i set up the call out in bitch slapped, an he jus went an set up the battle, which i stated i would set up, an he posted no rules. so i dont know the situation on that one????
He accepted my call out, not him mine, o the post counts are regardless.
i never even knew it was unlimited lines untill after both verses had been posted!!!
bump........................bump.................. ........bump...................................... ...........
i think 007 took this in every catagory but tagger did have some good personals and wordplay.but overall it wasn't really a contest
vote-007
breakdown
punches 007: watch as this herb 'falls' off, punchlines draw in 'tumble' weed// good wordplay also in this line...tag yours was aight but a little to simple
flow both: they both flowed pretty well solid throughout although tag some of your lines were stretched
metas 007: comin at me, 'quarter' like skill, i come back, an i hit 'priceless'...this was a nice line//tags..imma kill em, yo go on stage...ur shytz a comedy..this line coulda been flipped better and made more into a punch but aight meta
personals 007: battle this 10 year old, bearly able to type correct grammer,* good solid personal...but i dont understand how he'd be 10 i think he'd be 13 but good
wordplay 007: when you dream in colour its a pigment of your active imagination good line if you tink about it it makes sense :)
overall i think 007 took this battle
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it says i didnt post a explaination yet but i did so i think a fl mod is going to poll it for me because i posted in investigated reports
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well....this wasnt fair.....007 killed this kid and the kid didnt even kno how to structure his verse.....007 took everything...punch meti multi flo....everything....eff it...0-2 dont battle peeps over 10 wns.....bitch slap newbies only......
vote 007
bumpity bump..............................uppity up................................................ ................
One sided, almost blameworthy battle.
double-0 seven, took every catagorie,
One would judge upon when rating a battle verse.
The upper in hand in especially punches, won it..
For him, the opponent had a weak lay-up..n lacked,
Content wise.. just outdone.
vote double-0 seven
I'll poll & make this vote official when i reach 100 posts..
As you can see im almost there..
MeanwhileReturn the favour...