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lets get this battle under away men!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
remember even if u lose dizzy ur still in our crew dawg ayt?
remember u 2 are meant 2 like each other so keep the spits clean ayt!!!
yo plzzzzeeeeee voteeee on disssss battle......im gettin bOrEdddddddddd.......ill return favor
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-Cprogress
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good luck
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Ok dis battle is finaly goin down,
Its time for u2 move2 1 side and hand me my crown.//
Check my battlin record is 2 n 0,
Im like Lenox Lewis hittin u hard goin for the K.O!//
My punches are strong ur losin ur breath,
One more punch 2u and it will be ur death.//
But im like Jesus ill rise from the dead,
Even if u shoot me and put a hole im my Head.//
Im gona end this soon cus ur lines are shit and wack,
by the end of this u'll envy me so much u'll wanna lick my Sack.
(Bollock Bag)//
I saw ur mum the other day i sed Bitch Please,
....Get up off ur knees, stop suckin his cock,
cum get mine its like a rock.//
Big up2 Textbook 4 lettin me in, Cuthroat screw up ur Lyrics they are at home in the bin.//
I hope dis bitch aint a no show ,
bcus it took me along time 2think of this bro! PEaCE!
Im gona be king soon my recors 2-1 now!
ayo never mind bout yer record!!
by the way cuthroat aint like that he'll show!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u probably explained this but ur record is 2-1 not 2-0 man so that flow doesnt even make any sense at all -----------------wheres the throw back---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
K i'm here:
Dizzy Hommel i'm bout to drop a bombshell
you'll be history a mistery like Roswell//
It took you a long time to write shitty lines
dawg even P. Diddy has better rhymes//
you can't flow but i know your aggenda
i'll take what's mine break ya spine make ya surrender
think i care that ya one of my crew members//
dawg you're an inferior creature
coming at textbook's superior leader//
i'll hit ya with a blow, a fatalstrike
leave ya raps handicapped, a disabled dike//
will you ever be able to beat me hmmm.. na never man
look at ya avator, for a favor i'll take ya to never land//
k not my best but oh well
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dawg this is 1 ill ass battle dawg!!!
i cant vote but if i could i would probably vote cuthroat but dizzy thats probably not yer best!!
both of u got talent and textbook can develop into 1 bad ass crew ayt?
peace!!
ct throat took this battle with better pounches
the other dawg lines were a bit to lame
both need to elevate
but overall good battle
opener Cut
closer C
pounches C
overall Cutthroat
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-Cprogress
listen bitch dont diss my main man dizzy ayt bitch just fuck off if u cant vote dont fucking freepost ayt bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aight that were hot as a mo'fuk*er.......CT punches were off da hook, fa'low could need a lil work but the enjoyment dint faulter atall coz of it.
overall*CT
vote!!!!!!!!1
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i say cutthroat took it in every catagory it wasn't a great battle but it needs a winner so my vote.
vote= cutthroat
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-Cprogress
Basically it comes down to punches..
Cuthroat had the better ones..
Acompanied with a better structure & flow..
I would break it down, but its quite obvious..
Overall Cut, just had a better battle verse..
Tip for Dizzy, practice.. on wordplay...
Add wit n creativity to your text, Oh n another,
Thing change up your structure..its easy..
But overall vote Cuthroat
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both of you have the same exact style.. flow-cut disses-cut punches-hommel overall-cut this was an iight battle you ned more personals and heavy hitters.. cutthroat hit harder, return the favor hit up this battle mein
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this was a pretty weak battle but ima say cuthroat takes this......
flow-not availilble in text
structure-tie
vocab-cut
multis-tie
metas-tie
wordplay-cut
punches-cut
personals-tie
overall-cuthroat
i know i cant poll vote but cuthroat should win...............props to both cats............
Ok I have to go with cutthroat he dominated with average punchlines which was all that was needed to win this. Structure goes to cuthroat um lets see everything goes to cuthroat where did dizzy's 2 wins come from??
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yea..this battle was aiiiight
i vote - cutthroat...
his punchlines were better than his opponent was, he had aiight wordplay that edged his opponent, this is why cutthroat gets my vote, they both of the same wording and the same structure but cut get's it better..
vote on this battle in return...
Banishment Battle..
uppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnn number4 iwas wack in dis battle please sum1 finish me off!
to be honest, this isnt a hate vote, both of the structures were irritating but i looked passed that, i think cuthroat came harder on this, his punches were on point and to be honest im wondering if you guys are the same person. (yeah i said it...battle me).. but cuthroat was more creative, he was so creative it even had reign man pissed (haha) but if there has to be a winner im going with cuthroat
now ya'll can talk about me
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