ayt joker
10-15 lines
i spit first
i set it up
no hate votes
spit 15 mins after me!!
lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ayt joker
10-15 lines
i spit first
i set it up
no hate votes
spit 15 mins after me!!
lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!!
me and wins attract each other like glocks-and-magnets//
while losses cling to this kid by the name of rocco-malice//
i leave ya bones shattered and scattered in a box-of-fragments//
out of all the contestants, how come i got-the-faggot??//
dam! what a way to start-this-is-ill//
u could be a illustrator, and still have no artistic-skill//
u buggin if u think u gonna win, u-is-loco//
u only got to into rap battles due-to-no-shows in other websites//
i got exec's scoutin-my-name, but for u im doubtin-the-fame//
ur not on my level son, u might as well just get outta-the-game//
im up against a scrony-dude, that was born-to-lose//
but ima take his lyrics, and after i beat him, TextBooks guna run the show//
i just stopped-in and i mocked-him//
u shoulda not even spit, and got beat the same way u got-in//
the way i come so hard, yall say im so-erect//
i'll go-wit-techs, and blow-ya-chest//
u spit rhymes but to no-effect//
i got morals, but even if u was my elder i wouldnt show-respect!//
ur turn remember u got 15 mins left 2 spit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this kid couldn't drop hot shit if he stocked stoves on his ass/
i just got to laugh... your so easily ripped like tearing wet paper in half/
Rip out your tongue, teeth and gums to show my verbal-presence/
Laugh-at-ya words and defeat you cos this kids a herb-in-essence/
Smash ya vocal chords on the pavement just to curb-your-cadence/
Mentally throw scalpels at ya head worse then disturbed-patients/
Call this Family Matters the way I hurt ya like perturbed-relations/
Cut off ya pinky toe section, connect it to ya dick to prove ya length with erections/
Injure ya arm & veins with infections, piss on ya needle when ya make lethal injections/
i diss to extremes, all ya spits are dirty like when nile meets the gulf stream/
ya livin a dream, ya couldn't 'spit clean' by washin ya mouth out with Listerine/
get some votez up in here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!
damn this waas a good ass battle
both of ya did ya thing, I like the way both of ya use multis
but I think Reign Man came just a bit harder
Joker if u had that verse in any other battle it would be a win
vote=Reign Man
yo can u vote on my battle...thx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101694
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keep the votez up REMEBER ANYBODY WHO VOTE HONESTLY IL REPAY THE FAVOUR BY VOTING ON THEIR BATTLE(S) HONESTLY ayt???
punches r
metas r
personals both
consistancy both
wordplay r
overall reign
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a good vote.
-Cprogress
Nice battle. It was well done by both of you. No one got merked.
Laydown:
Opening:The Reign Man
Punches:Joker
Personals:Tied
Multis:The Reign Man
Metaphors:Joker
Vocabulary:The Reign Man -nice job btw.
Flow:The Reign Man
Structure:Tied
Closing:Tie both really good.
Overall:Reign Man
Joker-nice job this was a close battle and you didn't get merked.Props to both!
Peace!
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a good vote.
-Cprogress
o man dis shyt was close, at first it looked like reign man had it but then i read jokers shyt and im like "oh shyt" so i guess its a tie
that was a close battle and both pretty tight
But i give this to Reignman i liked his flow better
punches too, the rest was kinda ties but punches win battles
vote: reign
vote on this.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101455
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101620
no to sway or nuttin half his stuff aint rhyme so how did he get me in flow.he had no multies.he had basic vocab.and his opening didnt even rhyme and my name is not rocco-malice..
PAY ATTENION UPPIN 4 VOTES
drop links and we will hit them up its funny how everyone that voted for u left a link thas the only way ur gettin votes
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fuck u joker man u just a lil bad loser who cant take his beatings!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so dawg u know wat i say FUCK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was a good battle but to me the harder hitting punches came from..
My VoTe - Joker..
Heres what took it..
Quote:
i diss to extremes, all ya spits are dirty like when nile meets the gulf stream/
ya livin a dream, ya couldn't 'spit clean' by washin ya mouth out with Listerine/
I gotta agree joker took this his verse way better and his punches was stronger.reign's verse was ok u juss need to work on flow ur shit barely rhyme.
Vote:Joker
yo this was a tight ass battle....
opener-j
flow-rm
multis-j
metas-j
personals-none
enjoyability-tie
complexity-rm
closer- j
overall-joker
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a good vote.
-Cprogress
reign man took this, joker just came with a bunch of forced multis.. reign had much better content to rip at his opponent
vote-reign
Joker took this easily in my opinion... Reign Man had good punches... but his structure was so off-base and sorted that most of the seems like it didn't rhyme. I'm samrt enough to be able to see the patterns... but it shouldn't be so much work to follow your verse.
Joker you needed to come harder though... if you had there would have been absolutely no doubt. Especially since you spit last.
reign man
me and wins attract each other like glocks-and-magnets//
while losses cling to this kid by the name of rocco-malice//
nice
i leave ya bones shattered and scattered in a box-of-fragments//
out of all the contestants, how come i got-the-faggot??//
[]b nice concept jus didnt work[/b]
dam! what a way to start-this-is-ill//
u could be a illustrator, and still have no artistic-skill//
same as above, could of been made better
u buggin if u think u gonna win, u-is-loco//
u only got to into rap battles due-to-no-shows in other
websites//
didnt ryhme, wack punch
i got exec's scoutin-my-name, but for u im doubtin-the-fame//
ur not on my level son, u might as well just get outta-the-game//
aiight, not too bad
im up against a scrony-dude, that was born-to-lose//
but ima take his lyrics, and after i beat him, TextBooks guna run the show//
again didnt ryhme, last line had a good concept
i just stopped-in and i mocked-him//
u shoulda not even spit, and got beat the same way u got-in//
pretty creative, if you meant wat i see in the second line
the way i come so hard, yall say im so-erect//
i'll go-wit-techs, and blow-ya-chest//
not a good punch
u spit rhymes but to no-effect//
i got morals, but even if u was my elder i wouldnt show-respect!//
wack
Joker
this kid couldn't drop hot shit if he stocked stoves on his ass/
i just got to laugh... your so easily ripped like tearing wet paper in half/
played a lil, but an aiight opener
Rip out your tongue, teeth and gums to show my verbal-presence/
Laugh-at-ya words and defeat you cos this kids a herb-in-essence/
nice
Smash ya vocal chords on the pavement just to curb-your-cadence/
i put this as the odd line, nice
Mentally throw scalpels at ya head worse then disturbed-patients/
Call this Family Matters the way I hurt ya like perturbed-relations/
nice multi, nice punch
Cut off ya pinky toe section, connect it to ya dick to prove ya length with erections/
Injure ya arm & veins with infections, piss on ya needle when ya make lethal injections/
creative. multies, seems forced
i diss to extremes, all ya spits are dirty like when nile meets the
gulf stream/
ya livin a dream, ya couldn't 'spit clean' by washin ya mouth out with Listerine/
not too bad
reign
fix your structure, an stop usin bars that dont ryhme, you need to hit harder with you punches.
joker
structure needs a lil work, your wordplay needs to be a bit better, an jus keep it up.
overall joker
punches-tie
personals-tie
rhyme-joker
humor-joker
vote joker
I didn't put too many catagories cuz they were basically all ties
very close battle
~peace~
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Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a good vote.
-Cprogress
Punches:Joker
Personals:Joker
Flow:Reign Man
Structure:Reign Man
Multis:Joker
Enjoyment:Joker
My vote goes to tha Joker man.
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a good vote.
-Cprogress
Jokers winnin u gotta b shittin me My main man Reign murked ur ass!Also Reign delete sum messages icant pm u!and also........A'yo Reign*man* u damn write dat want my best shit against Cuthroat i didnt even no he holla'd me out until Mc Aines told me so i had 2 think quick!holla bak. Peace
yeh dizzy dawg dat lil bitch joker aint shit man!!
i just cleared my pm box there now man so u pm me again!!
man u have impressed all our crew wit yer shit in some battles and dawg dont worry bout fat battle with cuthroat man it was ayt but ur battle against dat lil bitch mcaines was off the hook i dunno how dat lil bitch won dawg!!
Yo, I don't know how this shit works, hhhhmmmm
Joker won this, His skills is far beyond reign mans if you look at his other battle wit Payce, Even though you did have played lines Joker, Which I hate, But Reign Man had even more, And hald his shit didn't even rhyme, and the few multis you had were forced more than the coppers, damn.
Vote- Joker (You remind me of Brooklyn, Bash's, Envy NY's style, Am I right?)
Pz.
UPPIN 4 Votes
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punches: reign man
personals: toe
werdplay: reign
flow: joker
vote: reign....no hate....but reign took dis shyt
Vote gone.. Read new rules -Token
okey-o-doke. lets get these votes goin...
Opening:The Reign Man
Punches:Reign Man
Personals:Tied
Multis:The Reign Man
Metaphors:Joker
Vocabulary:The Reign Man -nice job fo sho.
Flow:The Reign Man
Structure:Tied
Closing:Reign Man
Overall: The Reign Man
no hatin. but joker was pretty whacked. he turned me off from his weak ass opener...
ok this battle goes to joker beacuase he hit with hard punches and was getting ill towards the end....joker try to stay away from the emeinem style son that gets old real quick....just come gangsta.....anyway reign man you had a good start but about 3 or 4 of your punches didn't ryhme which really makes it hard to give you much in this battle cause if i ain't vibing with the flow then i gotta struggle through the verse in order to get any punches and they lose there sting....also fix your structure......vote joker...good battle...hit it up.....both....thanx...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101927
yo
this was an overall good battle by both mc
joker wins with structre and flow they bond without a good structure you can't get a good flow
pounches was hit harder by joker they were hard and damn funny
both had great creativity but joker seem,ed to show it more
overall battle vote goes to joker for a overall better stronger verse
hit the battles in my sig don't sleep them
peace
reign man it looks like there is gonna b another loss on ur battle record..........wen u gonna learn u aint good enough 4 this rap game............like ur oppnenets name he made a joke of u i wud vote but i wil let sum 1 else do it
its 4-2 me uppin 4 votes on dis shit
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Uppin 4 votes(4)
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ite yall,
joker nice spit man just work on your personals cause reign came harder there but overall you came harder with punches and nice flow along with structure man.
riegn not bad u ite but work on harder punches and also ure flow was off in places.
make sure you hit this up now now now...... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...46#post1030046 ..............thx............pz