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u drop first
BIG battle so scary no ones doing shit how about room maker battles first thats better. 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
wtf.....dawg stfu and get out my thread this is not ur battle he agreed to tha rules .................................................. ....................
whats going on u guys gonna battle or what ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????????
checkin in, why do i needa drop first, if im dropping first then im givin u a 2o minute limit to drop after me
coo lets do tha damn thang
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your lyrics couldn't poke me if they came in bunches
Only thing dats a joke...are your played out punches
u faced Ill Fresh...mentionin Mary J. and Macy Gray
They are as used as the mesh...where the Lakers play
Ill bet cash dat on any given day, I can beat ur ass in
But no votes will come our way... ppl too busy laughin
they all laughin at the fact...at how your so bad at rap
how ur verses gave me a slap...and left my body intact
in this battle u rolled 1-2-3...so tyme to pack up ur bags
just another fake MC so quit rap and go back to Batman
Good luck. Drop ur verse.
Kid Tried-to -Pass, Your *Mis-Under-Stood* like if ya Spine-Collapsed//
ya Mind-Is-Tapped..When you spit *THE LIFE of the music* just Dies-In-Rap..//
To battle me you gotta be MAD!..Im known to *Seal ya Life*-With-GlaD//
Snipe-this-Lad, Your *Facuet is Not Broken* Its Just Your Pipes-are-Bad...// (pipes=Vocal Cords)
Ya Insults-are-Baffling..Wordz Has No Electricity so he *Charges his Punches* for Assault-an-Battery//
This is the Results-in-Battling, My *Mind Frame Will Break Ya Mentals* cause my Vaults-are-Shattering..//
steel-swords-will-split-ya, takin *photo's of my lifetime* only way he carryin Ill-Mortal-Scriptures//
peel-cores-with-mixtures,only way wordz gettin the *Spot Hot* is when he Stealin-Porno-Pictures..//
rock-and-fold-foes, wordz is *Stuck In The Past* still Watchin-Old-Shows//
Pop-with-Low-Blows,and like *Heating In Swimming Pools* My Conditioning is Stoppin-ya-Cold-Flows..//
uppin for sum votes plz..........
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aiight i think u both did aiight but i cant vote but if i could it would be for payce becuz too many things rhyme with payce and u didnt mention one....but joker u shyt was still aiight
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god, i havent even been able 2 finish a battle here since nobody votes.
wat up
vote down
opener J
flow J
pounches J
wordplay J
closer J
overall joker
vote on my battles in my sig
peace
uupin 4 votes
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Yeh i agree... i THink Joker took this
...........but Payces shit was oright 2
vote in my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101620
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uppin 4 votes
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evan tho your verse realy 5uked kompared ta Jokerz
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they all laughin at the fact...at how your 5o bad at rap
how ur ver5e5 gave me a 5lap...and left my body intact
^^^^^^^^^^^I laghed my a55 of at thyz line
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but Joker had better... one thing tho kuz drop all da * an - an /
that 5hyt takez alot out of da power in yo ver5e... otha than that
keep it krakin kuz, My Vote=Joker
this is an honest vote....payce...cus u pm'd me askin for one
punches- joker
flo- payce
structure- payce
multi- joker
meti4- joker
wordplay- joker
overall- joker.........payce elevate and quit whining....joke won
no beef.....jus a helpin hand...pc*1*
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a good vote.
-Cprogress
im requesting a bar for bar breakdown on this battle please. Im styll not sure on how I lost dis battle...............................
LOL @ Carsonn00b Go KillYourself You Still dont know how to punch do you fool.............................................. .................................................. ..............
JOKER
Kid Tried-to -Pass, Your *Mis-Under-Stood* like if ya Spine-Collapsed//
ya Mind-Is-Tapped..When you spit *THE LIFE of the music* just Dies-In-Rap..//
^its an OK opener good wordplay and an OK punch......7/10
To battle me you gotta be MAD!..Im known to *Seal ya Life*-With-GlaD//
Snipe-this-Lad, Your *Facuet is Not Broken* Its Just Your Pipes-are-Bad...// (pipes=Vocal Cords)
^he tied that all together pretty well..a little punch and good wordplay again....snipe has to do with the seal and the seal has to do with glad ......7/10
Ya Insults-are-Baffling..Wordz Has No Electricity so he *Charges his Punches* for Assault-an-Battery//
This is the Results-in-Battling, My *Mind Frame Will Break Ya Mentals* cause my Vaults-are-Shattering..//
^ wordplay again very nice..good punch..creative.....8/10
steel-swords-will-split-ya, takin *photo's of my lifetime* only way he carryin Ill-Mortal-Scriptures//
peel-cores-with-mixtures,only way wordz gettin the *Spot Hot* is when he Stealin-Porno-Pictures
^didn't like this one as much...your setup was off and your punch was weak 5/10...
rock-and-fold-foes, wordz is *Stuck In The Past* still Watchin-Old-Shows//
Pop-with-Low-Blows,and like *Heating In Swimming Pools* My Conditioning is Stoppin-ya-Cold-Flows..//
^really good closer OK punch good good wordplay.....8/10
overall...35/50....
PaYce....
your lyrics couldn't poke me if they came in bunches
Only thing dats a joke...are your played out punches
^ kind of a weak opener....you forced that ryhme there i thought...5/10
u faced Ill Fresh...mentionin Mary J. and Macy Gray
They are as used as the mesh...where the Lakers play
^ok this is interestin...is this a punch???.....i don't see it....filler...5/10
Ill bet cash dat on any given day, I can beat ur ass in
But no votes will come our way... ppl too busy laughin
^meh thats an OK punch the vocab is too simplistic ...6/10
they all laughin at the fact...at how your so bad at rap
how ur verses gave me a slap...and left my body intact
^ok this is talkin about how weak his verse is prolly your best line..7/10
in this battle u rolled 1-2-3...so tyme to pack up ur bags
just another fake MC so quit rap and go back to Batman
^that doesn't ryhme...i call that a missed punch 5/10
overall...28/50.....you came way harder vs...me...
Payce DQd for uppin for than 5 times.. He was obviously aware of the rule because on his 5th uppin he marked it as his 5.. If you want people to vote vote on their battles and leave links