me n u
ill spit first
yall kno the rules
first to 5 votes
must explain votes
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me n u
ill spit first
yall kno the rules
first to 5 votes
must explain votes
Yo u getting scared but here theres no escape like Alc-a-traz//
My lines r like knifes stabbin ur ass, killin-u-dead//
There was no chance of u winnin this shit but yet u-still-try//
This is like jumpin in front of a bus, cuz either way u-still-die//
I'll take a second to speak, n Ill keep my weapon in reach//
I ain't talkin romance but you'll get swept off your feet//
I got more riches than you, I fuck more bitches than you//
Only thing I haven’t got is more, stitches than you//
Put your ass in my path and I'm gonna blast it//
Give u just a sample of me n I burn u like battery acid//
This guys life is always in slow motion like the matrix-reloaded//
Now just sit there n stare nigga cuz u just got straight folded//
what this take me like 5 minutes hit it back yo man
You Got Whack Structure And Punches And Whack Weaponary/
Bitch I Am Like A "Deadly Dance Combo" Do Not "Step" To Me/
Im The Illest , So Sick That Medicine And Antibiotics Are Useless/
Your Fake,You Bite So Much Lyrics Your Going Fuckin Toothless/
Thinkin Your Gunna Get Votes Cause It Took You " 5 Minutes "/
Well All Your PRE-WRITTEN Shit Is Getting Fucking Diminished/
Dont Even Try To Battle Back , You Should Just Retreat Bitch/
Cause If Im On Your Fuckin BEEFLIST,Ill Make You MEETLESS/
Belive This , I Aint No MotherFuckin Joke, Your The Hoax/
I " See Through You " Like Your A MotherFuckin "Ghost"/
yo just wanted ta say i didnt pre-writ......................................
tight ass shit mann..................................uppin for votes
Yeah man its All Good I didtn mean It , it Was Part Of Battle
Lets Get Some Votes
Good Luck Man...This Was Sick Battle
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I ain't talkin romance but you'll get swept off your feet//
Bitten off Gangstarr-Mass Appeal or You wanna battle me
Aight just though I'd point that out. Otherwise nice battle boyz.Merry Christmas.
Laydown:
Opening:Tied need a little work but n2bad
Punches:CrookedComical
Personals:CrookedComical
Multis:Petrafy
Metaphors:Tied (none)
Enjoyability:CrookedComical
Structure:Tied both well defined
Flow:CrookedComical
Closing:Tied N2bad
Overall:
Vote:CrookedComical.
I always repay the favour. Nice job bois.
for real shit mann...i never heard of gangster i guess thas dq if u want crook....mah bad yall i mad tha mistake didnt mean it but o well.............................................. .......up 2 u crook
Nah I Wont Have You dqed .. lets just get some honest votes
P.s
Havent upped this in a while cuz ive been banned cuz i shared an Ip block with sumone else who got banned
it sucked
but im back
Peace
ite close shit but c-c gets this for me with better punches nice opener man,
just get sme personals in there but nice spit,
p- work on your punches gota hit harder man ive seen so much better than you.
now put an honest vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...46#post1030046 plz..............................thx............pz
Alright come on yall for reall we need votes
post ya link ill repay the favour
peace
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crooked criminal had a better structure and punches ayt?
petrafy had good punches and a good structure but cc verse was easier 2 read!!
vote - cc
aight...well, this shit was pretty dope. both had some good punches, but i think that petrafy came stronger and crooked didnt come back strong enough (no hate crooked).
vote: petrafy
please repay the favor....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102139
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101943
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lmao at doc_knock trying 2 be damon dash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
shit talker
I got more riches than you, I fuck more bitches than you//
Only thing I haven’t got is more, stitches than you//
^ thats bitten off of a real rapper i don't remeber who though....i could take the time to go listen adn find out but i don't really care taht much................for that reason alone i give this battle to crooked comical.......don't bite shit its sad................
Crooked Comical structure was better and his punches mor effective
As in all things we still gotta elevate Petrfy a little more vote CC
uppin #4
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Returnin the favor to this Comical nigga
Good battle... I actually expected more out of petrafy... You should probably use more than 5 minutes next time son... because it's not really about the speed... You just don't come intense enough when you just pushing it out... Sh*t felt like a song at first.... Following the rules of what makes a good verse is only the beginning.... You gotta make your shit come alive with creativity.
Anyways, Comical gets the Vote
now thatt 100+ I poll-voted for that Comical nigga... already explained why.
Honest for my battle against McProfit in my si please trying to close these joints out... got more rhyming to do.
closeee but comical fucked him up, started just bombing on his ass starting with the second line of him biting shit HAHA, then he talked of his prewritten lyrics and a beefless list that was good, ur closer wasnt that strong but the rest backed it up, good flow
as for petrafy he had a weak opener and a bit line and u ended a sentence with the same word, YOU-YOU so my vote went to comical good battle -----------------------