CarsonJetX2 vs McProfit (100 votes or more only worth your time)

Aight The Laydown:
Blind Spit
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Spit within 10 mins after check in.
10-20 lines
No D/r
No Hate
No Crew (express your opinion if you want but no poll vote)

Good Luck Peace!

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Aight
Ima lay my shit down like I was writin on a bed/
My rhymes so pleasurful it reminds us of how your bitch gives head/
We've all had a turn at the hoe train, we tried to refrain but she was smacked up on cocaine/
You'z like the shell for the bullet/ Contain the damage but not man enough to show it/
Fuck you and you crew the lyrical soldiers/ I'll lay your asses down with my lyrical boulder/ So hott that it lays you to smolder/
I'm an instant spitter, youz a quick quitter, cuz when I show up you know I'm the best hitter/
Youz an incomprehenable lyricist that's why you came to battle me so you could learn a little bit, that your wack ass shit, ain't got nothin on my moneymakin buisness/
McProfit makes no jokes but for you theres an exception a white ass bloke who obviously decided to take to much coke and now you left me herre with you. . .
Nevermind therres the joke.

McProfit

Look at profit^^he's 1 an 8?please...this kids an RB disgrace-
He could be white and black an still he's way outta this race-
Even his avi is left wit space..he's proof God makes mistakes-
Mc? not quite..he belongs in one place....at a wake in a case-
Literally a joke...this dope can't even set-up a battle right-
Honestly this kid couldnt develop a win if he owned samsonite-
An stop...nobody thinks your a racist we all jus think u suck-
I'm way over his head.. but then again look...so are rocks-
I coulda left this at your loss rate but wait lemme finish my plate-
Check his sig^he dont distinguish race means Im still tryna figure what i jus ate-

Both Yall Was Sick ...

But Before I Vote Here Yall Gotta Vote on My Battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101423


Sorry but im gettign slept on and i gotta do what i gotta do... i swear ill vote here with honest vote right after i get mine

peace

Please see Battle Rule #4 . Next time it will be a DQ.

-Cprogress

ha ha no.......
it doesnt work that way and i am reportin this:)
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Well You Can Report This but There Aint Nothing Bout This In the Rules .. if they Put It in rules Or Tell Me i Cant Do this ill Stop

your Probably Gay In Real life

" OH IM TELLING ON YOU "

Get A life

thanks for lookin out for me.....lol
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pm me an talk ur cool guy garbage.....................

Umm, this was interesting.....i suppose it would be nice to say something nice about your verses and comment on blah and blah. I felt both of you were lacking something besides structure and complexity, skills maybe?Since i lack posts i cannot vote, so there forth i am just taking up deliberate space...........

I liked this shit.... good battle
both came on strong. No hate but someone had got to ge the vote
and for me its -Carson
Just good flow and easier to follow , but MC yoru hsit was entertaining to. NO HATE......

return the fevour and vote honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101277

carson takes it by completely dominating in the flow/structure category, as well as hitting harder with more distinctive definite punches.....

Profit, work on your structure.....it really hurt your verse alot. and work on a SET UP/PUNCHLINE format for punches it will add to the strength of your attack..

carson came ill as usual.


hey could u guys both please vote on these battles?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101219
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101252

carson took it
....a lil' more punches.....way more structure....no hate.....good shyt by both of u*****************

yea carson took this...the fact he multied the fuck outa his punches and personals....kept an tight structure all the way through and finished strong took the won for him... MC work on your structure man i say that to you in every battle of yours i vote on and you don't listen you got some ill lines now if you typed em right you might get a win...no hate...one

check the battle plz....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100990

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not very impressed with either one of you, but someone does have to win. I am giving my vote to carson....strictly on structure. Both of you need to elevate....keep at it!

Even though I have an active battle with Profit... this is no where near a hate vote...

Carson... I liked the flow good multis and personals...

Profit you came strong but your structure and flow where lacking. And you used no personals from what I could tell... that and the style make it seem a little pre-written. Even though I don't think that it was. Good shit though... Kepp doing your thing.

My vote goes to Carson this time.

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Opener: C
Punches: C
Personals: C
Vocab: Mc
Flow: C
Structure: C
Closer: C

C took this shit easily....Close in a few cata's but nj to u both