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Drop and pm me when your done. I'm just browsing the forums.....
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sorry i can't pm but here's my verse
Quick instincts to hit bitches reveal his name is obviously bitin
30 minutes to write a verse- just to cover facts of Aragorn spits pre-writins
Like hot sound waves im connecting-hits to the side of ur face ~n~ ur cerebrum
Noticeably you’re a fag doing the opposite of .coming hard. U like to see cum
Dropping played lyrics kid u no king, they should call u re-run
Scared cuz I’ve only be-gun, giving you more holes then the cemeteries first one
Inevitable that you loose like men going to Las Vegas with gambling problems
Kid fah real though…. I’ll fuck you up leaving you with no use like condoms
A mismatch with a catch, me taking the win so u could say I hustled n’ robbed em
To bad, like commonly fighting Iraq citizens you end up as a casualty charred
Your scripts get ripped and unlooked at like ugly face covered porn stars
Your at an end… no chance to amend… u basterd get shattered like glass going in a bend
A cold killah? You will be when I put you on chill...
Cut you up, store you in the freezer... let's see if you hot still...
Every letter I type in text, brings you closer to death
*Ill spit it in bullets
*And flow it fluid
*hope you holding your breath (bullets... get it?)
My voice is deadly to man... it's this herbs last day
Incapacitate him with words... as if I was a Man Drake (Harry Potter)
Bury you in the ground... become one with the landscape...
Murder methods you can't trace... highway to hell at a fast pace..
kautious... do you know the meaning of the word?...obvious...
You must of felt nauseous... challenge Aragorn to this contest...
But ignore that, the same way you ignore the fact that your whack..
Pretend your shit's fat... like young P pretends like he's black..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100073
Up up and Away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kautious- You had good flow but some forced multis and some *really* played wordplay (cum instead of come) kind of fucked up your verse. You attacked hard and get some points for that but a lot of the time you didn't word shit in the right way so the punches failed to land.
Aragorn- You're good with words, a skill i can appreciate as a lot of the time my shit comes wordy. I didn't think you were attacking as much as he was but you outclassed him in other categories so the win is still yours. Good job, we'll battle soon.
Can we get some more votes cracking in the morning people?
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uppin for votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...07#post1011907
i gonna break it down like this...
opener- I like kautious's better aragorns was too simplistic...
closer... gotta go to Aragorn on this one...heehehe young p..
multis...i give multis to kautious....
wordplay... i wasn't really feelin katious on this one .......aragorn.
punches...i give punches to kautious he had that re-run one...
personals...i give personals to Kautious also ....your first personals was too simple and really your dissed young P in this batle harder than you disses kautious no hate my vote.....kautious peace....
Uppin this battle
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uppin
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Um.... Ok...
Flow-Kautious
Structure-Kautious
Multies-Neither
Punches-Kautious
Personals-Kautious
Wordplay-Neither
Overall Vote.....Kautious
Quick instincts to hit bitches reveal his name is obviously bitin
30 minutes to write a verse- just to cover facts of Aragorn spits pre-writins
DOPE.. needs to be shortend up
But its still dope
flow-kautious
multis-aragon
punches-aragon barely
personals-kautious
disses-aragon
wordplay-kautious
consistancy-aragon
this was real close.. kautious started off real hard then faded toward the end of his verse, u real real hot n solid then u started to get simple like u wanted to get your shit finished.. aragon had the nice multi flow throughout, and some kool punches his opener set the tone of his verse.. kautious had the personals, but aragon's punches through consistancy edged the win, this was a good battle tho, vote-aragon
can you guys hit up my battle??? i got DQ'd in my other one for uppin but no one votes so it just sinks..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100990
OPener: Ara
Closer: none
Flow: Ara
Punches: tie
Personals: Kautious
Win: Aragorn
Can both yall please hit this up honestly. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101357
i think aragorn took him out with solid flow and that creative structure on that one bullets part. thast some creative shit man. good punches even tho like meters said u didnt attack as much but u still hit hard enough....
i think K did the opposite....he focused on the attack and hittin hard so much he didnt come too creative.,.......and i think the rhyme scheme was fucked up? maybe just me. whatever dont make a difference. good verse, just not up to par with A's creativity.
hit that up guys please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101219
kautious:you came hard(no pun) attacks were strong, but your shit came jumbled, took a second read to understand some of it,
maybe you were goin for that, maybe not, but from my point of view it just looked unrefined.
Aragorn:your flow and word-play worked magic in my head. your attacks, not not as strong as kautios', were quick and to the point, not much thinking involved in figuring it out. Which in a battle is key.
my vote, aragorn
up up and Away!!!!!
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not a bad battle...Aragorn did the bullet point thang which i liked
Kautious you were stretched but had good wordplay...
BREAKDOWN---->
punches-A
metas-K
style-A
sustainment-both
Flow-A
structure-A
opener-K
Closer-K
Wordplay-K
overall-A
flow n punches caught it
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99772