Tactical vs. Idolized

12 lines max, i spit first.
check in first for your loss hoe.

checkin in. go fo it. And why you offline? .................................................. .................................................. ....

check the fuck in, hoe. whatre you scared of?
oh, your first loss. that does mess your net pride up i think.

i got talent already, this wack kids tryin to cope with
& deny me the win? u still aint denyin` my dopeness
im pryin` him open, findin` wackness owns this kid. .
needs 'Alp, Everest is where they'll find ur bones n shit
components broken, shit. . he's strugglin`keepin up
turn this faggot leakin` stuff, into a faggot weepin fuck
read this stuff, & realize im just playin` & fuck this hoe
cuz he looks like mini-me when we're standin juxtapose
im idolized, its no surprise that i kill this kid w/ talent
he'd need a miracel of filler to beat my skill & valiance

I'll "waste" this kid so fast he'll be spinnin down the drain
I don't Idolize this punk cause his lyrics are all played
My lyrics will penetrate ya mind, they'll fill up that empty space
You insult every real MC, the Idolized is now the Disgraced
I think I Idolized this kid more befo i even saw him spit
This kids style is crap, I put out better "bars" when I shit
This battles your Grand Entrance, not a good way ta open
Cause after I defeat ya, We'll celebrate your Grand Closin
This kid is like dumpster cause all he holds is trash
Tact is spittin neva quittin, My punches leave a gash

uppin for some votes please............................................ .................................................. .............

here is the breakdown...
Personals...Goes to Tactical for the plain fact that Idolized did not have a single solitary one....pre-written?...
flow...Idolized i think had a little cleaner flow...
punches...goes to the man tactical...because his punches hit harder than the weak stuff you had ...you should try and say something that really makes people think he sux...thats a punch..
opener...tactical...his was a punch...and a meta...
closer...idolized got the closer i think his multi was a bit more advanced than tacticals...
overall...tactical..

Thanks, uppin again (2) .................................................. .................................................. .........

yo nice yall

opener-tactical
closer-tactical
structure-both
flow-tactical
punches-tactical

redo tha favor yall
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100239

Polled.
-Axe

uppin for votes (3) petrafy ya didn't poll man .................................................. .................................................. ........

i tell u what.....this was a very good battle....
no newbie's here....they knew what they were doin-

punches- tac
wordplay- not much
flo- tie
structure- tie
meti4- tac
multi- tac

overall- tac......very close and nice from both tho.....
please hit this up wit an honest vote thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100670

uppin fo some votes please (4) .................................................. .................................................. ......

Uppin for the last time! Please drop some honest votes here .................................................. .........................

Hadda go wit Tac on this one...

Y? ~~> punches hit harder, made more sense, used apponent involvment. Direct disses. Idolized had none. Big up Tac. go get'em

good battle both of u. IT was close but in the breakdwon Tac takes is
Vote:Tactical
BL:Close Battle

close battle really, both had sum ok punches and flow. i think idol's flow was alittle betta, but tactical had harder punches. vote=tactical..........fav line

Quote:

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This battles your Grand Entrance, not a good way ta open
Cause after I defeat ya, We'll celebrate your Grand Closin

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..lmao nice line.

yo this was pretty wack, but i think idolized takes it.

structure - idol
opener - idol
flow - tact
enjoyment - idol
closer - idol, fo sho

keep elevatin or whatever tactical

overall vote: poison

TACTICAL TAKES IT MAN NICE NICE SHIT ............................................. VOTE ON THE POISON-PEN VS. FATALSTRYKE BATTLE PLZ

yo this was a tight battle by tact

opener Tac
flow tac
personnals tac
closer tac


overall great battle by tac my first poll vote goes to you dawg

peace
no hate
keepop spittin both of you

im idolized, its no surprise that i kill this kid w/ talent
he'd need a miracel of filler to beat my skill & valiance

^ That was better than taticals whoel verse you stupid n00bs voting for tactial makes me sick do you even know what a solid punch is for fuck sake
Punches=I
Flow=I
Multi's=I
Vocab=I

Vote = I He Came Much Harder... C'mon NOw..