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10 Lines
5 Votes
Real Quick
Lets Go. .
u spit first............***************good luck......no hatin...
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this should be a laugh....
i'll hit it up when uve both spit.....
good luck............................................
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Ive been writing dope lines,
.. ready to show and prove, then
i took a look at your name..
& figured i aint need to use them!!!
your a useless dumb fuck,
& ima riddle this gay ..
cuz he tried thanking his lucky Stars ..
in the middle of the day!!!
& Im one of the gangster types,
that's full of bling bling ..
i wont let you admire my necklace ..
but sure, you can kiss the ring!!!
stupid fuck, think your dope?
Dawg .. your wack as hell ..
and you'll need to Re-install AIM,
.. to Start With AOL !!!
your a fucking newbie, bitch!
^ figured id tell this lame
only time you Opening Up to An Audience ..
.. is if i Disected you live On Stage!!!
he not spittinnn!!!!!!!!!!!!.............................
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yo ur a lil' prick, u neva got pussy so now u goin for dick!
Man ur rhymez are wak.........
u think u gonna win dis battle??....u tooo much on crack
you need 2 go bach to 1st grade n learn how to rhyme....
cuz rite now, u juss wastin mah time...click clock ...click clock
u aint notin like Tupac!, or me, da realist emcee
u probably juss a low-life who watcheds and bites off da battle in 8MILE
..yo quit rappin....u aint eva gonna get style...
u juss a fuqen dump pile...
What the fuck?! Read the post above your's, dick slap.
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**u juss a low-life who watches***************
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uppin 4 votess............................................ .
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.................................................g ood shyt there free trial
yo no1 b votinn............................
uppinnnnn 4 vvotezzzzzz...............
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Punchlines.........(AOL beat that shit by a long shot)=aol
Style.........=AOL
Ending........=AOL
Vote=AOL
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vote gone because you suck at life. -feeble
plsu, the vote sucked, was the opposite of how the battle went, and you are already being banned for doing shit like this.
Ok, like im going to accept that .. * Send's PM to feeble minded *
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Aol owned Mick Jagger
Punches hit harder vote = Msn..
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Word. 2-0, UpPiN
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2-0, upping for votes!
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word of advice cam...you say you DONT want to have d/r or hate votes
then damnit stop using all your alias at the same time
^ Bwahahaha, AOL isnt even me. = )
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^ Word to mister Cam. :)
Votes?!
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holy shit.. this really wasn't fair..
AOL in every aspect.
v-aol
holy shit
tagger, go away.
please
thank you
bye
pz
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blah this was a week battle and aol took this
punches-aol
i wasn't liking your structure though
you needed more punches in your verse
lil' you neede harder pucnhes your shit was basic and could of been alot better
you only had structure in your verse
overall:aol
Punches-AOL
Rhymes-AOL
style-AOL
Rhythym-AOL
Overall-AOL takes it by a long shot, lil tagger got owned
HAHA
UPPIN
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IMO this was one sided.
AOL FREE TRIAL had real nice direct punches, liked the short flow he was bringing, real direct, came correct.
as for lil tagger his whole verse was indirect, dont think i picked out one line that was actually aimed at his opponent.
punches- AOL
personals- AOL
multis- AOL
flow- AOL
wordplay- TIE
overal-- AOL FREE TRIAL
return the favour on my battle plz.
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At first, I read AOL's drop & was like, "Ho, Ho, Ho." But, then I read lil' tagger's, & was like, "Ho, Ho, Hooooooo!" Let me break it down . .
Punches - lil' tagger
Flow - lil' tagger
Multis - lil' tagger
Wordplay - lil' tagger
Metaphors - lil' tagger
Vote - AOL Free Trial
aight
opener aol
creativity tie
structure none
closer aol
overall aol
not a bad battle
return the favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100636
peace