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ight 12 lines
no crew votes
no d/r
no feedin
drop weneva
OKAY, this iz my check innnnnnnn........so uhhhh i'll drop in a few.
I'll voice my opinion after both kats are done droppin.
hey yo Def I called you out in bitch slapped if ya Def.
mmkkay here goes..
def been tellin me how he tight with god and that woteva he say he obay
cus eva since he found out he battlin tha princess he lernd ta pray
def alwase cums crashin battles n beggin for a return vote
he def by mouf (mouth) n only do txt cus sum i slit his throat
man this emcee's style is wack lk marlin mansons makeup
man this so easy lets play cowboys n bring tha stake up
yo but def and rappin is nearly as bad a combination as drake n josh
ill clean this battle up, lk christina from diry afta she started work at tha car wash
this kid a big fan of friends cus he been wishin he had sum
n he fantasise but i spit tha truth n pop that dream lk bubble gum
like distinys child def think he can make me loose my breath
hell naw iv killed him be4fore he begin as quick as tha spread ov black death
damn the eight line is suppose 2 say dirty not diry my bad
lol n yall no wot tha black death is right ?? if ya dont its a plague that killed loads quick in britan
U call urself princess of rap royalty,
But u couldn't spit a royal creation if u were screwd...royally,
Ur like rap royal beats, 'given' away inexspensively,
But nobody's gon buy ya 'ass', y pay when u get it free,
U must be dementedly somewhat outta ya mind,
How u gon be a princess when ur herships been denied,
Ur used ta bein wit guys, like 'Keys' u always 'fallin',
But u luvin 'Linkin Park', alwayz on ya knees 'crawlin',
I accepted this battle cuz i'm tired of bein discreet,
I wanted ta beat* u, somwhere other than btween the sheets,
But u luv helpin, comin inta the site wit a new chick every week,*
So i could slap 'HER' ass while 'U' turn the other cheek,
*explanations.....beat, not as in hit her, as in fucking
and the second* refers to her sigs and posts, she always has a diffrent chick.
Originally posted by:Princess
def been tellin me how he tight with god and that woteva he say he obay
cus eva since he found out he battlin tha princess he lernd ta pray
OK OPENER
def alwase cums crashin battles n beggin for a return vote
he def by mouf (mouth) n only do txt cus sum i slit his throat
DIDN'T LIKE AND DON'T PUT MOUTH IN PARENTHESIS WE ALREADY NO HIS SPELLING
man this emcee's style is wack lk marlin mansons makeup
man this so easy lets play cowboys n bring tha stake up
THIS IS YO BEST BAR AND PUHCH COMBINED
yo but def and rappin is nearly as bad a combination as drake n josh
ill clean this battle up, lk christina from diry afta she started work at tha car wash
THIS BAR IS REALLY STRETCHED OUT A LOT THAT'S NOT GOOD
this kid a big fan of friends cus he been wishin he had sum
n he fantasise but i spit tha truth n pop that dream lk bubble gum
NOPE
like distinys child def think he can make me loose my breath
hell naw iv killed him be4fore he begin as quick as tha spread ov black death
COOL ENDING
you had an aight verse but you gotta to step it up a lil
battlin kats wit some technique you feel me but don't trip though
you'll get it one love.
Originally posted by:DBM
U call urself princess of rap royalty,
But u couldn't spit a royal creation if u were screwd...royally,
AIGHT OPENER
Ur like rap royal beats, 'given' away inexspensively,
But nobody's gon buy ya 'ass', y pay when u get it free,
COULD OF BEEN WORDED BETTER
U must be dementedly somewhat outta ya mind,
How u gon be a princess when ur herships been denied,
NOPE
Ur used ta bein wit guys, like 'Keys' u always 'fallin',
But u luvin 'Linkin Park', alwayz on ya knees 'crawlin',
OK BUT COULD OF BEEN BETTER IT SOUND'S LIKE IT'S PLAYED
I accepted this battle cuz i'm tired of bein discreet,
I wanted ta beat* u, somwhere other than btween the sheets,
BETTER
But u luv helpin, comin inta the site wit a new chick every week,*
So i could slap 'HER' ass while 'U' turn the other cheek,
COOL ENDING BUT NO FATALITY
you had some decent punches in there but you could of came a lot stronger
in this battle one love.
V/DBM
for overall better punches and cleaner structure and wordplay
hit the link back
you both had good puches but im gonna go with def because his punches were harder and he landed more..........it was a good match though........
dont forget to vote on my matches. i need feedback
uppin number 2 i think.....................don't sleep on thiz.
i still cant fuckin vote
however
if i could id vote def... princess came way too basic... u gotta have a lil skillz PLUS have some punchlines... u got tha idea about bringin punchlines (not that they were that great, some were ok, some werent) but u gotta learn to use multies and some wordplay
defs opener and closer were pretty ill i thought
tha rest was meh but he had better stucture and showed more skill
please return tha fav and vote on my battle, woot vs eight. im outta ups
thanks
Princess
structure was pretty good.. flow was decent.. no multis.. attempted wordplay.. most of it didnt come through though.. u attempted some punches and wittiness.. for that i give u props, but most of it didnt come out right.. no good personals..
def by mouf
god damn the rhyme scheme in ur first 3 lines sucked.. inexpensively, royally, and free DONT RHYME.. for something to rhyme the syllables have to be the same in both words.. all 3 of those have different syllable counts.. meaning, they dont rhyme.. good structure.. flow was alright.. no good multis.. putting ""'s around ur words doesnt make it wordplay.. like in ur last line.. THATS NOT WORDPLAY.. thats just random crap.. so, no good wordplay.. u attempted wittiness, but most of it was wack.. no good personals..
Overall
def by mouf had the better flow.. both had a good structure.. neither had multis.. both attempted punches.. neither had good personals.. Princess had the better rhyme scheme and wordplay.. so basing off of that.. Princess gets my vote..
VOTE - PRINCESS
sometimes i wonder about these votes....
princess your flow was a lil shaky your punches were basic, but it was good still... it made me laugh you know... the thought was good, you had workable punches
def i read your ish i jus wasn't feeling it flat, your punches were basic as well, all you talk bout is beat this, things guys will usually say to a g... i thought that was soft and you came jus a lil weaker than princess
therefore
vote: Princess
princess
def been tellin me how he tight with god and that woteva he say he obay
cus eva since he found out he battlin tha princess he lernd ta pray
def alwase cums crashin battles n beggin for a return vote
he def by mouf (mouth) n only do txt cus sum i slit his throat
man this emcee's style is wack lk marlin mansons makeup
man this so easy lets play cowboys n bring tha stake up
yo but def and rappin is nearly as bad a combination as drake n josh
ill clean this battle up, lk christina from diry afta she started work at tha car wash
this kid a big fan of friends cus he been wishin he had sum
n he fantasise but i spit tha truth n pop that dream lk bubble gum
like distinys child def think he can make me loose my breath
hell naw iv killed him be4fore he begin as quick as tha spread ov black death
DBM
U call urself princess of rap royalty,
But u couldn't spit a royal creation if u were screwd...royally,
Ur like rap royal beats, 'given' away inexspensively,
But nobody's gon buy ya 'ass', y pay when u get it free,
U must be dementedly somewhat outta ya mind,
How u gon be a princess when ur herships been denied,
Ur used ta bein wit guys, like 'Keys' u always 'fallin',
But u luvin 'Linkin Park', alwayz on ya knees 'crawlin',
I accepted this battle cuz i'm tired of bein discreet,
I wanted ta beat* u, somwhere other than btween the sheets,
But u luv helpin, comin inta the site wit a new chick every week,*
So i could slap 'HER' ass while 'U' turn the other cheek,
OVERALL
both had good strong rhymes with good punches, nobody had GREAT personals but attempts were here and there. Everybdy and good vocab and i saw no multis. but everybody had a tight structure and good strong spits
no wack which is a relief
V/ Princess
She had better vocab, a few of her punches stud out, and the fact that she mentioned the black death... that I have NEVER seen before... so princess gets mine
RETURN THE FAVOR PLLLLLEEEAAAASSSEEE
even those that arent battlin..
I need 3 more vs Sik and like 1 more on 4ize... PLEASE!!!
yep ill return the favour ... thanks for the votes uppin
def been tellin me how he tight with god and that woteva he say he obay
cus eva since he found out he battlin tha princess he lernd ta pray
Good shit lol...coulda been worded a bit better but good concept, nice personal
def alwase cums crashin battles n beggin for a return vote
he def by mouf (mouth) n only do txt cus sum i slit his throat
good wordplay usage
man this emcee's style is wack lk marlin mansons makeup
man this so easy lets play cowboys n bring tha stake up
Ehhh...not feelin it
yo but def and rappin is nearly as bad a combination as drake n josh
ill clean this battle up, lk christina from diry afta she started work at tha car wash
decent
this kid a big fan of friends cus he been wishin he had sum
n he fantasise but i spit tha truth n pop that dream lk bubble gum
meh...
like distinys child def think he can make me loose my breath
hell naw iv killed him be4fore he begin as quick as tha spread ov black death
This was cool
U call urself princess of rap royalty,
But u couldn't spit a royal creation if u were screwd...royally,
good opener
Ur like rap royal beats, 'given' away inexspensively,
But nobody's gon buy ya 'ass', y pay when u get it free,
ok sort of a wack concept but meh
U must be dementedly somewhat outta ya mind,
How u gon be a princess when ur herships been denied,
It flows cool but not a hard diss really
Ur used ta bein wit guys, like 'Keys' u always 'fallin',
But u luvin 'Linkin Park', alwayz on ya knees 'crawlin',
The first line was cool second was kinda wack
I accepted this battle cuz i'm tired of bein discreet,
I wanted ta beat* u, somwhere other than btween the sheets,
nice punches rightt there
But u luv helpin, comin inta the site wit a new chick every week,*
So i could slap 'HER' ass while 'U' turn the other cheek,
Its iight
Princess your concepts and punches were good ....you fell off in some spots but it was still, a little bit better than your last battle I read, Def by Mouf you had good structure and flow but some of your punches weren't as witty, and you seem like you got down on a little bit of creativity as well. Princess is lucky this isn't an audio battle cuz some of those bars were a little stretched.
v/Princess
(Princess)
def been tellin me how he tight with god and that woteva he say he obay
cus eva since he found out he battlin tha princess he lernd ta pray
{NICE}
def alwase cums crashin battles n beggin for a return vote
he def by mouf (mouth) n only do txt cus sum i slit his throat
{WEAK}
man this emcee's style is wack lk marlin mansons makeup
man this so easy lets play cowboys n bring tha stake up
{WEAK}
yo but def and rappin is nearly as bad a combination as drake n josh
ill clean this battle up, lk christina from diry afta she started work at tha car wash
{OK}
this kid a big fan of friends cus he been wishin he had sum
n he fantasise but i spit tha truth n pop that dream lk bubble gum
{OK}
like distinys child def think he can make me loose my breath
hell naw iv killed him be4fore he begin as quick as tha spread ov black death
{NICE}
(def by mouf)
U call urself princess of rap royalty,
But u couldn't spit a royal creation if u were screwd...royally,
{NICE}
Ur like rap royal beats, 'given' away inexspensively,
But nobody's gon buy ya 'ass', y pay when u get it free,
{WEAK}
U must be dementedly somewhat outta ya mind,
How u gon be a princess when ur herships been denied,
{WEAK}
Ur used ta bein wit guys, like 'Keys' u always 'fallin',
But u luvin 'Linkin Park', alwayz on ya knees 'crawlin',
{OK}
I accepted this battle cuz i'm tired of bein discreet,
I wanted ta beat* u, somwhere other than btween the sheets,
{OK}
But u luv helpin, comin inta the site wit a new chick every week,*
So i could slap 'HER' ass while 'U' turn the other cheek,
{OK, BUT WEAK FINISH}
Overall princess threw harder punches but it was very close.
v/ Princess
Holla back, vote on my battle on th link below.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...t=nova+rapchar
prin-
def been tellin me how he tight with god and that woteva he say he obay
cus eva since he found out he battlin tha princess he lernd ta pray
***flows off, but i love the idea, original in my eyes
def alwase cums crashin battles n beggin for a return vote
he def by mouf (mouth) n only do txt cus sum i slit his throat
*** again, fix the flow, add a multi, and its four stars fo sho
man this emcee's style is wack lk marlin mansons makeup
man this so easy lets play cowboys n bring tha stake up
** seems like filler, but not bad by any means
yo but def and rappin is nearly as bad a combination as drake n josh
ill clean this battle up, lk christina from diry afta she started work at tha car wash
** eh, ok i get it, but the flow is waaay off
this kid a big fan of friends cus he been wishin he had sum
n he fantasise but i spit tha truth n pop that dream lk bubble gum
*** i like it, but it aint perfect
like distinys child def think he can make me loose my breath
hell naw iv killed him be4fore he begin as quick as tha spread ov black death
** lol usually i like history refferences, but the flow is of so just 2
def-
U call urself princess of rap royalty,
But u couldn't spit a royal creation if u were screwd...royally,
* royally and royalty? weeeeaaaak
Ur like rap royal beats, 'given' away inexspensively,
But nobody's gon buy ya 'ass', y pay when u get it free,
** ok, its ok
U must be dementedly somewhat outta ya mind,
How u gon be a princess when ur herships been denied,
*** nice multi at the top, i like the punch too
Ur used ta bein wit guys, like 'Keys' u always 'fallin',
But u luvin 'Linkin Park', alwayz on ya knees 'crawlin',
** its a personal, but a weak one
I accepted this battle cuz i'm tired of bein discreet,
I wanted ta beat* u, somwhere other than btween the sheets,
*** nice wordplay
But u luv helpin, comin inta the site wit a new chick every week,*
So i could slap 'HER' ass while 'U' turn the other cheek,
** ok decent
TOTALS-
prin- 15/6= 2.500 (B-)
def- 13/6= 2.167 (C)
vote - prin