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The breadth of the universe is vast, millions of moons lay the land
How the fuck you gonna amount to anything, when you're a pebble on a spec of sand?
My shits sick, gets salt of the Earth chicks, moons a lickspittle prick
What I mean is, I enjoy it when his girl spits a little on my dick
Sucker spaces responsibilities, marches to the beat of his own drum
Ill drop his bitch ass like a bad habit, and he can continuum
Dudes a doormat, ill literally put on Martens and boot him in the cock
And walk all over him, in the same paradox moonrocks
Fucking effeminate, flaming fruit..we know fags float your boat daily
I get pussy dude, you try to touch every buoyancy his pee pee
ext? my bad I had shit come up last night I can drop after work today...
Well ya its cool...I just think it's funny when people need exts with a 24 he drop. Thats the reason for 24 hrs, in case of shit coming up. It was even more than 24 hrs from the initial agreement.
I wish you never showed up, cuz I'm really about to go nuts
Now if this was a race to shove THEM in ya mouth, you'd definitely win gold cup
Stop it, ur not hard you've always been fake
Convict? nonsense, at most ur a guard keepin them in mate
I wanted a worthy sparring partner, and that is NOT him
Mate has no bars, gate or door, anybody could drop-in
Ya girl is anti-nothing, she will do anything I say hoe
I smashed then showed my dogs the clip, now they call me Manti Te'o
You was bullied in school, stuffed in the lockers and kicked in the balls
Flipped and dipped in the stalls , but these days.... aint nothing different at all
Vote fuckers
Damn....open a month and not one vote
The breadth of the universe is vast, millions of moons lay the land
How the fuck you gonna amount to anything, when you're a pebble on a spec of sand?
this is simple in execution... really not saying much or creative...u should open with something strong
My shits sick, gets salt of the Earth chicks, moons a lickspittle prick
What I mean is, I enjoy it when his girl spits a little on my dick
same as above... ur not saying anything clever or creative
Sucker spaces responsibilities, marches to the beat of his own drum
Ill drop his bitch ass like a bad habit, and he can continuum
simple..bravado type shit
Dudes a doormat, ill literally put on Martens and boot him in the cock
And walk all over him, in the same paradox moonrocks
this is gay
Fucking effeminate, flaming fruit..we know fags float your boat daily
I get pussy dude, you try to touch every buoyancy his pee pee
buoyancy has been used to death, which wouldn't matter if u used it in a clever way or with a twist, but u didn't.. this is lazy...
BTW...in a 5 bar battle u had 4 references to the male anatomy ( pee pee, prick, dick, cock..) ponder on that a bit....
VS
wish you never showed up, cuz I'm really about to go nuts
Now if this was a race to shove THEM in ya mouth, you'd definitely win gold cup
this is gay
Stop it, ur not hard you've always been fake
Convict? nonsense, at most ur a guard keepin them in mate
this is simple...it passes as an attempt an a nameflip.... so its an Ok bar at best
I wanted a worthy sparring partner, and that is NOT him
Mate has no bars, gate or door, anybody could drop-in
terrible
Ya girl is anti-nothing, she will do anything I say hoe
I smashed then showed my dogs the clip, now they call me Manti Te'o
this is so bad, a manti Te'o line? the set up is filler...
You was bullied in school, stuffed in the lockers and kicked in the balls
Flipped and dipped in the stalls , but these days.... aint nothing different at all
bad closer..
IDK why both of u mention dick/balls so much.... this site is 99.99% males....simmer down pimpin..
this is a terrible battle... u both need to go to the drawing boards or take longer to drop bars... start by making a one week due date to battle and trying to come up with better materials...people like to vote on clever shit/ shit they wouldn't have thought of... nameflips, methaphors, observational humor.... etc...
V- Moonrocks for 1 bar attempt at nameflip.... Inmate u should watch some other battles and take some notes before jumping into 10 battles at once, people don't like to vote on bad battles....
Moonrock... same advice
Inmate didn’t really have anything harsh here... sum childish words and no real hard diss... you need to get personal bro and bring more clever material.
Thought moonrocks opener was decent and the name flip was an ok attempt but enough to take this
2-0 up for more votes here
The breadth of the universe is vast, millions of moons lay the land
How the fuck you gonna amount to anything, when you're a pebble on a spec of sand?
nice opener
My shits sick, gets salt of the Earth chicks, moons a lickspittle prick
What I mean is, I enjoy it when his girl spits a little on my dick
no
Sucker spaces responsibilities, marches to the beat of his own drum
Ill drop his bitch ass like a bad habit, and he can continuum
decent
Dudes a doormat, ill literally put on Martens and boot him in the cock
And walk all over him, in the same paradox moonrocks
okay
Fucking effeminate, flaming fruit..we know fags float your boat daily
I get pussy dude, you try to touch every buoyancy his pee pee
no
vs
I wish you never showed up, cuz I'm really about to go nuts
Now if this was a race to shove THEM in ya mouth, you'd definitely win gold cup
decent opener
Stop it, ur not hard you've always been fake
Convict? nonsense, at most ur a guard keepin them in mate
okay
I wanted a worthy sparring partner, and that is NOT him
Mate has no bars, gate or door, anybody could drop-in
nice
Ya girl is anti-nothing, she will do anything I say hoe
I smashed then showed my dogs the clip, now they call me Manti Te'o
no
You was bullied in school, stuffed in the lockers and kicked in the balls
Flipped and dipped in the stalls , but these days.... aint nothing different at all
decent
vote moon rock
Both verses were average at best.....
Vote: Moonrocks...
Nice expo anyways 3-0 close this up @Dia moonrock winsQuote:
Originally Posted by Killer Stylez
I wish you never showed up, cuz I'm really about to go nuts
Now if this was a race to shove THEM in ya mouth, you'd definitely win gold cup
Stop it, ur not hard you've always been fake
Convict? nonsense, at most ur a guard keepin them in mate
vs
nada
didn't really feel anything from inmate. could of flipped the name a little better. saw the concept attempts but none really landed. moonrocks connected a lot better with his punches. easy one call.
v. moon
@KnowP do you have access to closing these and efiting the polls if so seal this shit up ty
doneQuote:
Originally Posted by Joe Boston