Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 (wins) Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
Lethal Lyricist League Week 9
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Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
your funeral have it your way.
Re: Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
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M-Var!o
your funeral have it your way.
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Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
wtf @ an ego. five no shows you been through's a laugh
you're seeded in the title bout.. but'll never grow into a champ.
the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
& you ain't from the vario. wouldn't be hard on your best day
how you gonna stomp a text battle? you can't even kill an essay
I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
I hate to leave you empty. but you ain't about to beat this.
see the bottom line is you're just an MV... without the P 'ness..
me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
I pull alotta chicks. you wish you were a swinger but you're little
& when you get a bitch's digits, it's just the two fingers in the middle
you wanna be king. well you won't. I'm here to nail you.
I'm the staple of this league, & you're the donkey I pin the tail to.
coward I rock. you can't compare my power is hot
I'm mauling you.. like I got 20 thousand & an hour to shop
extra extra, read all about it! you ain't fuckin with me.
here's a special bulletin, your brain for actin tough in the street.
don't try to step to me. if I was you I'd be ducking fights
now about face - never seen one so ugly in my fucking life
LMAO! this shit is hilarious.. there's no denying
I'd say we're laughing WITH you.. but I swear I just saw you crying
probably cuz your girl's never satisfied. I know it's not fair.
no worries.. this time I predict the bitch before you got there
even she knows you can't text. everything you bust sucks
I'm the best to date, but don't even buy dinner we just fuck
hey maybe you'll actually win. nothing's too impossible
& looking at my verse I've got to admit.. you to the hospital
Don't bother showing.
Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
thisll be kidnapping, torture, rape and murder if this verse goes to court spit
alot of areas so this could be a broadcase legally dealing with this bitch
good at teaching punchlines but all your drops are lame
ill putem to shame, show RB why coaches stay coaching and dont get in the game
swear im bury you, but since your the champ ill be sure to show respect
let you stand in your grave so we can add mire, until its covering ur face and neck
im the Cock in the hen house, if u dont care to lose tough shit
to stand out swallow ya pride cuz my other biches don't, Spit
first person to actually talk garbage so if i lose here i got robbed
seriously you spit that New, clear waste its the only way your verse was bomb
watch ya girl she got crazy stamina and is a freak
as soon as she batted her eyes i knew i wouldnt get a wink of sleep
your bars are basic,i feel everyone of your concepts are played
after seeing the style you berthed, we'll make sure to give it a way
i dont know what you heard but homie you need to get a clue
so when you come to your census you can count that as the total votes against you
ya girl loves sucking my head, damn sluts been been around
i swear she loves the cap size, explains why she's always going down
face it im smarter, there is no come back when i dont have to lie
bet you figured you could counter intelligence by becoming a spy
i waited for you to become champs so i could see you crash in defeat
im making sure to destroy everything you billed i hope you kept a receipt
i got hands like a WR, so your chances to win are gone
so imma have to catch the title since you will no longer hold the thrown
artist when it comes to sketching out lines of my victims no need to pay me
for spit i just drewLs, well it was abstract so pictures slobbering babies
cool how you got a thread for props, but i hope the ploy was see through
it was only posted to make it a bigger deal when i beat you
and to be honest you were opposed to this battle, i know things were said
but we both know giving me the run around is the only way u'll stay ahead
Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
wtf @ an ego. five no shows you been through's a laugh
you're seeded in the title bout.. but'll never grow into a champ.
too simple, seen this coming
the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
lol
& you ain't from the vario. wouldn't be hard on your best day
how you gonna stomp a text battle? you can't even kill an essay
decent
I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
I liked this
I hate to leave you empty. but you ain't about to beat this.
see the bottom line is you're just an MV... without the P 'ness..
rofl... dope shit!
me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
eh, decent at best... kinda corny
I pull alotta chicks. you wish you were a swinger but you're little
& when you get a bitch's digits, it's just the two fingers in the middle
ok, not too harsh though
you wanna be king. well you won't. I'm here to nail you.
I'm the staple of this league, & you're the donkey I pin the tail to.
nice flip
coward I rock. you can't compare my power is hot
I'm mauling you.. like I got 20 thousand & an hour to shop
good misdirection... not a hard hitter though
extra extra, read all about it! you ain't fuckin with me.
here's a special bulletin, your brain for actin tough in the street.
good
don't try to step to me. if I was you I'd be ducking fights
now about face - never seen one so ugly in my fucking life
seen about face concepts before... decent flip
LMAO! this shit is hilarious.. there's no denying
I'd say we're laughing WITH you.. but I swear I just saw you crying
eh... not feeling this one
probably cuz your girl's never satisfied. I know it's not fair.
no worries.. this time I predict the bitch before you got there
good wordplay, good hit
even she knows you can't text. everything you bust sucks
I'm the best to date, but don't even buy dinner we just fuck
simplish
hey maybe you'll actually win. nothing's too impossible
& looking at my verse I've got to admit.. you to the hospital
seems familiar but good flip
vs.
thisll be kidnapping, torture, rape and murder if this verse goes to court spit
alot of areas so this could be a broadcase legally dealing with this bitch
nice set up, decent delivery
good at teaching punchlines but all your drops are lame
ill putem to shame, show RB why coaches stay coaching and dont get in the game
eh, kinda filler material
swear im bury you, but since your the champ ill be sure to show respect
let you stand in your grave so we can add mire, until its covering ur face and neck
decent
im the Cock in the hen house, if u dont care to lose tough shit
to stand out swallow ya pride cuz my other biches don't, Spit
I like the concept, but feel something was lacking
first person to actually talk garbage so if i lose here i got robbed
seriously you spit that New, clear waste its the only way your verse was bomb
ok... could have been worded harsher
watch ya girl she got crazy stamina and is a freak
as soon as she batted her eyes i knew i wouldnt get a wink of sleep
not sure where this was headed
your bars are basic,i feel everyone of your concepts are played
after seeing the style you berthed, we'll make sure to give it a way
decent
i dont know what you heard but homie you need to get a clue
so when you come to your census you can count that as the total votes against you
decent, like the concept again, but wording was a little off
ya girl loves sucking my head, damn sluts been been around
i swear she loves the cap size, explains why she's always going down
good
face it im smarter, there is no come back when i dont have to lie
bet you figured you could counter intelligence by becoming a spy
not feeling this one, bro
i waited for you to become champs so i could see you crash in defeat
im making sure to destroy everything you billed i hope you kept a receipt
word play was decent, wording was way off though
i got hands like a WR, so your chances to win are gone
so imma have to catch the title since you will no longer hold the thrown
not feeling this one at all, bro
artist when it comes to sketching out lines of my victims no need to pay me
for spit i just drewLs, well it was abstract so pictures slobbering babies
kinda missed here, man
cool how you got a thread for props, but i hope the ploy was see through
it was only posted to make it a bigger deal when i beat you
statement-ish
and to be honest you were opposed to this battle, i know things were said
but we both know giving me the run around is the only way u'll stay ahead
set up and misdirection was cool, the flip was lacking, though
I've seen Vario drop 10x better than this, it's like he rushed it or something.
That being said, I think Spit took this with more direct punches and better
wording. Vario had some good concepts, but his wording failed him, imo.
Vote- Spit... again...
Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
I hate to leave you empty. but you ain't about to beat this.
see the bottom line is you're just an MV... without the P 'ness..
me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
extra extra, read all about it! you ain't fuckin with me.
here's a special bulletin, your brain for actin tough in the street.
LMAO! this shit is hilarious.. there's no denying
I'd say we're laughing WITH you.. but I swear I just saw you crying
probably cuz your girl's never satisfied. I know it's not fair.
no worries.. this time I predict the bitch before you got there
vs
swear im bury you, but since your the champ ill be sure to show respect
let you stand in your grave so we can add mire, until its covering ur face and neck
first person to actually talk garbage so if i lose here i got robbed
seriously you spit that New, clear waste its the only way your verse was bomb
i dont know what you heard but homie you need to get a clue
so when you come to your census you can count that as the total votes against you
ya girl loves sucking my head, damn sluts been been around
i swear she loves the cap size, explains why she's always going down
This battle was completely one sided.. the lines I quoted from $pit were dope.. while the lines I quoted from MV just had potential.. I just think you were out of your league here man.. your wording wasn't polished enough to carry you.. some of your concepts could have been fire if worded correctly.. but..
Vote: $pitacular
Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
you wanna be king. well you won't. I'm here to nail you.
I'm the staple of this league, & you're the donkey I pin the tail to.
hey maybe you'll actually win. nothing's too impossible
& looking at my verse I've got to admit.. you to the hospital
vs
ya girl loves sucking my head, damn sluts been been around
i swear she loves the cap size, explains why she's always going down
This was far too one sided for a champ match.
Shameful.
v/$pit
Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
$pit- didn't like the spanking monkey and the middle digit flip is an old ass concept... i've used it myself... best to date was just ok... every other punch ranged from really good to dope...
Vario- definitely not your best showing if you were trying to prove why you had a champ match despite no shows... add mire flip was dope... other than that, wording ruined your punches... census one had potential but was worded awfully... rest of your verse just wasn't up to par...
vote $pit
Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
Spitacular
wtf @ an ego. five no shows you been through's a laugh
you're seeded in the title bout.. but'll never grow into a champ
man this was actually a good concept but the flow was so off. this kinda rhyme might work in audio, but didn't sound right here. either way, this was still decent.. just could've been nice
the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
lol
& you ain't from the vario. wouldn't be hard on your best day
how you gonna stomp a text battle? you can't even kill an essay
not feelin it
I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
ha
I hate to leave you empty. but you ain't about to beat this.
see the bottom line is you're just an MV... without the P 'ness..
lol, I'm liking the creativity here... this kinda creativity is almost a lost art now days. props
me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
I didn't like this as a punch... but made me laugh for corniness
I pull alotta chicks. you wish you were a swinger but you're little
& when you get a bitch's digits, it's just the two fingers in the middle
meh
you wanna be king. well you won't. I'm here to nail you.
I'm the staple of this league, & you're the donkey I pin the tail to.
lol, NICE
coward I rock. you can't compare my power is hot
I'm mauling you.. like I got 20 thousand & an hour to shop
haha, dope
extra extra, read all about it! you ain't fuckin with me.
here's a special bulletin, your brain for actin tough in the street.
cool wordplay
don't try to step to me. if I was you I'd be ducking fights
now about face - never seen one so ugly in my fucking life
not feelin
LMAO! this shit is hilarious.. there's no denying
I'd say we're laughing WITH you.. but I swear I just saw you crying
i like where you went with this one, cool
probably cuz your girl's never satisfied. I know it's not fair.
no worries.. this time I predict the bitch before you got there
blah
even she knows you can't text. everything you bust sucks
I'm the best to date, but don't even buy dinner we just fuck
aight
hey maybe you'll actually win. nothing's too impossible
& looking at my verse I've got to admit.. you to the hospital
cool closer
I see you still bringing the heat, keep it up homie
vs.
thisll be kidnapping, torture, rape and murder if this verse goes to court spit
alot of areas so this could be a broadcase legally dealing with this bitch
not feelin it, poor wording... lack of a punch
good at teaching punchlines but all your drops are lame
ill putem to shame, show RB why coaches stay coaching and dont get in the game
too simple
swear im bury you, but since your the champ ill be sure to show respect
let you stand in your grave so we can add mire, until its covering ur face and neck
there we go... never seen this wordplay.. nice
im the Cock in the hen house, if u dont care to lose tough shit
to stand out swallow ya pride cuz my other biches don't, Spit
more of a statement than a punch directly at spit
first person to actually talk garbage so if i lose here i got robbed
seriously you spit that New, clear waste its the only way your verse was bomb
felt this was a LITTLE bit forced, but still appreciate the creativity so this was decent
watch ya girl she got crazy stamina and is a freak
as soon as she batted her eyes i knew i wouldnt get a wink of sleep
blah
your bars are basic,i feel everyone of your concepts are played
after seeing the style you berthed, we'll make sure to give it a way
ok
i dont know what you heard but homie you need to get a clue
so when you come to your census you can count that as the total votes against you
lol, nice
ya girl loves sucking my head, damn sluts been been around
i swear she loves the cap size, explains why she's always going down
lol...cool
face it im smarter, there is no come back when i dont have to lie
bet you figured you could counter intelligence by becoming a spy
nah
i waited for you to become champs so i could see you crash in defeat
im making sure to destroy everything you billed i hope you kept a receipt
forced.. it would be past tense which would be built... thus ruining the wordplay
i got hands like a WR, so your chances to win are gone
so imma have to catch the title since you will no longer hold the thrown
forced man, sorry
artist when it comes to sketching out lines of my victims no need to pay me
for spit i just drewLs, well it was abstract so pictures slobbering babies
not good...
cool how you got a thread for props, but i hope the ploy was see through
it was only posted to make it a bigger deal when i beat you
too simple
and to be honest you were opposed to this battle, i know things were said
but we both know giving me the run around is the only way u'll stay ahead
blah
Feel like you have some good potential, not sure how much time you spent on this verse but there was a lot of filler. Which through me off because you had some good concepts and ideas, the execution could use some work. Anyways, keep ya head up.
Vote: Spitacular
Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
you wanna be king. well you won't. I'm here to nail you.
I'm the staple of this league, & you're the donkey I pin the tail to.
vs
nothing
Vote-Spit...this was completely lopsided....spit had a pretty good verse, with some consistently solid punches throughout. Vario just didn't really have much, and his wording really brought him down and made some concepts with potential not hit very hard.
Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
extra extra, read all about it! you ain't fuckin with me.
here's a special bulletin, your brain for actin tough in the street.
LMAO! this shit is hilarious.. there's no denying
I'd say we're laughing WITH you.. but I swear I just saw you crying
probably cuz your girl's never satisfied. I know it's not fair.
no worries.. this time I predict the bitch before you got there
vs
swear im bury you, but since your the champ ill be sure to show respect
let you stand in your grave so we can add mire, until its covering ur face and neck
Ok I have read this battle a few times and ment to break it down each time. I have gotten lazy each time I tried and since i waited until last minute I did this tye of break down. Spit was solid and consistent throughout the entire match with only a few off punches. M don't feel bad because you got to a champ match and was up against a good opponent so theres no shame in losing. But with that said dawg, you were way outdone here. I mean I think you got to a champ match before you was ready because your verse seemed really unpolished and the wording wasn't well. But keep writing man
v:Spit
Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
The whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
you wanna be king. well you won't. I'm here to nail you.
I'm the staple of this league, & you're the donkey I pin the tail to.
hey maybe you'll actually win. nothing's too impossible
& looking at my verse I've got to admit.. you to the hospital
Vs
Played, Bland, Wording Problems, or just misses.
Most one sided champ match I have ever seen I thought dude was gonna suprise people and show he needed and was here in this match for a reason, guess not....its the overall approach I think that just seems pretty 06 to me, and Spit was throwing a lot of punches P'ness line woulda been quotable but something seemed weird to me when I read it
V- Spit
Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0
the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cockyy
I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
I hate to leave you empty. but you ain't about to beat this.
see the bottom line is you're just an MV... without the P 'ness..
me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
you wanna be king. well you won't. I'm here to nail you.
I'm the staple of this league, & you're the donkey I pin the tail to.
coward I rock. you can't compare my power is hot
I'm mauling you.. like I got 20 thousand & an hour to shop
extra extra, read all about it! you ain't fuckin with me.
here's a special bulletin, your brain for actin tough in the street.
LMAO! this shit is hilarious.. there's no denying
I'd say we're laughing WITH you.. but I swear I just saw you crying
^seen this concept before, but the flip was fresh..
even she knows you can't text. everything you bust sucks
I'm the best to date, but don't even buy dinner we just fuck
vs.
swear im bury you, but since your the champ ill be sure to show respect
let you stand in your grave so we can add mire, until its covering ur face and neck
first person to actually talk garbage so if i lose here i got robbed
seriously you spit that New, clear waste its the only way your verse was bomb
i dont know what you heard but homie you need to get a clue
so when you come to your census you can count that as the total votes against you
ya girl loves sucking my head, damn sluts been been around
i swear she loves the cap size, explains why she's always going down
weak champ match, and not on $pit's part. $pit, all that i quoted from you was fire. way to bring the heat, even facing the underdog. a lot of times, some cats like to use some throw away lines because they THINK they can get away with the win, or get lazy(myself included) and drop subpar, but u've shown consistantly every week. major props on your verse this week. and Vario, you had some cool ideas and what i quoted, i was definitely feeling, but you have to come fresher, and drop the statement punches. especially the opener, really weak when battling someone like $pit. btw, ur "nuclear" line was a bit forced but i did see what you were trying to do with it, so i felt where you were coming from. other than that, weak my friend. but you've made it this far, nothing says it won't happen again.
v/ $pitacular
