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ite no feeding
no hate d/r votes
no dick riden
u spit first
8 lines min
10 max
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fifteen years old kid and your already looking to die/
you should study my profile next time before you Submit reply/
i'm faster than fulmanation thats lightning case you don't know/
murder was the case that they gave me adding your ass to death row/
i'm killing Mc's and thrilling herbs getting derb from ladies cause they love my Verb/
and thats fucking just like i'm fucking you up cause your stylo gets me perturbed/
i guess danbnas is out of luck i onno know what your name means man WTF?/
its not like i care you can still get stuck/
you hit me with hard personals i'll hit your ass up with knowledge/
only reason my record is so bad is cause i'm too preoccupied with college/
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yo,
i took a glimpse at 1.12's profile,and 8 mile is why this fake *hip hop's*
a waiter who bakes, cakes for the belaire family, while phil shouts *chip chop* (phil= carltons dad on fresh prince)
phils fat, you fat and so is your crew *phat pace*
your the rat, i'm the cat, i chase you, it's a *rat race*
dazed because i "choked ya", born n broke in *minesota,*
serve your head like "corna cova" your a joke like *smokka jokka* ( corna cova is a famous womens tennis player )
your the biggest fake, that it takes 112 verses to *beat me,*
they serve u up on a plate, ur a mistake, because you say, "they wont *eat me*"
i'm the punching king, in the boxing ring, i'm *lennox lewis*
trying to read Hebrew is tire-ring, my christianity aint for admiring *jewish*
sori bout the wait for this vese ive bin out!
ooooohhhhh,
ite dan got this his flow was better and he started of strong.close shit but verse ur shit didnt flow had no consintensy....................................... .pz
punches: dan
flow: verse
structure: verse
complexity: dan
creativity: dan
enjoyment: verse
personals: dan
vote: dan
tight battle
hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93322
peace
yo dogg repay da favor with an honest vote plz.......... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93690 ....................pz
yea fucking right this site is corrupt wait till i get 100 or more posts then mabye i'll win a battle
his shit was the worst i've ever heard what kind of Bs do you muthafuckers think is good that was so basic and terrible you don't shit about rap kids your from like fucking great britian so don't tell me my shit doesn't flow cause it does you just don't understand complexity
fuck it i'll go line by line and do this shit...
i took a glimpse at 1.12's profile,and 8 mile is why this fake *hip hop's*
a waiter who bakes, cakes for the belaire family, while phil shouts *chip chop*
WHERE IN THE FUCK did you ever think that weak ass line up?? I fucking hate 8 mile and eminem so nice try but just cause i'm white don't mean i idolize the guy....next
phils fat, you fat and so is your crew *phat pace*
your the rat, i'm the cat, i chase you, it's a *rat race
My crew is names phat pack not fast pace learn how to read dumbass....your the rat i'm the cat tough stuff there.
dazed because i "choked ya", born n broke in *minesota,*
serve your head like "corna cova" your a joke like *smokka jokka
OMG you wrote one good line still basic as fuck though..
your the biggest fake, that it takes 112 verses to *beat me,*
they serve u up on a plate, ur a mistake, because you say, "they wont *eat me*"
wow wtf kind of crack do you smoke can i have some?
i'm the punching king, in the boxing ring, i'm *lennox lewis*
trying to read Hebrew is tire-ring, my christianity aint for admiring *jewish
Wow wtf this doesn't even make sense you need to think about wtf your saying for anyone who votes for this kid including oli dog it's just to get a vote on your thread so fuck all you herb heads learn how to fuckin flow.
wtf u cnt evaluate my verse! i'm checking this shit out wid a mod!
cheating little fuck! wow 2 votes and your all ready shittin it! stop being a little bitch!sum 1 needs to sort this post hes practically free posted his own vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Verse definatley had better structre an flow.... but danbns grabs my vote winning every other catergory........ plz rturn the favor...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93904
thanx
uppin x3 pls dnt sleep on this we need sum vote pls jst vote! pz................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...