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here are the rules
20 lines no more no less
no hate
no crew
no dickride
only explained
check in when u are ready to spit
deadline will be by monday at midnight or else DQ
voting as follows:
opener-
closer-
wordplay-
punches-
personals-
creativity-
overal-
come on u fool!!!!!!! check in already now this will make two battles so u dont got to worry no more
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FuKKa You gon meet that Thang That Match yo 'Status Quo'||
Tha Saddest though, tha '4-4' 'Droppin Clips' lika 'Bald-Ass-Hoe'||
You 'Stepped Up' like 'Trainloaders', So Get Sitted Just as Quick||
This BATTLE A Surprise To Me, Didn't Even Agree To This Shit|!|
I Bring 'Pain' Like A Dentist 'Suffrin Arcaleptic Seizures'||
I'll Fuckin Put You On 'Ice', I Call My Gats 'Body Freezers'||
I'm Surprised U Guys Read Dis...And NO IM NOT WHITE||
So FUCK ECLYPSE ONE23 I Call His Life 'Reachin Night'|!|
It Like Im 'Preachin A Knife' Im Typin, Frightnin Yo Heart||
Dont look for the Metas Herbal, U Aint That Fuckin Smart||
I'll Have Ya Parents Pushin' Ya Body Parts Up In A Cart||
Like 'Fat Boys Runnin Track', Its Lookin Grim From Da 'Start'|!|
My Last Quelude-I Spray Dude-'Get On Back' Lika 'Shirt', Clown||
You Gettin "Smoked Up" N U "Choked Up" N We 'Pass U Around'||
N How U Gon be IN Southern Cali And be "NotADamnThang??"||*
Sell 'Caine, Do somethin' Fuckin 'LOSER' its 'THE END' Of Yo Game!|
Response Pending........................................... ................................
^^ nice shit
But herbal got sum heat
an he gots a better record then u nun the less.good shit
2things
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89325
^^ both u cats hit this battle up an Gurantee ill be back for a honest vote to give to u guys
SECOND THIS ONLY REFERS TO HERBAL
HIT MY BATTLE up WIT NITEMARRE AN VOTE>>TRuST ME DO IT HONESTly
pc so ill be back
"we can go at it too dog"
"i think this nigga hitz is gonna bust a no show..."
posted by nitemarre on bitchslapped see u idiot u did accept
ill drop by tomaro midnite cuz i have a lot of homework to do.
peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89325
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HIT IT UP NITE MAREE AN HERBAL
ill be backto vote
could ya hit thisa up and a honest vote wilol be returned when herbal drops, thanx cos this battle been slept on..........
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hit this up.................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=p.stylez
What Herbal didn't drop?, don't blame him, thats some dope shit Nitemare be spittin........................................... ......................................
/\ dont fukin freepost!!! that shit pisses me off so ima just key up something real quick cuz i hate when people think ama no show! u fukin newbie
Herbal drops sick, Nite winning would be a mock-myth/
rhymin from ya “flamin ass” and you still aint got "hot shit"//
relaxin although you cant tell cuz my spits are non-stop action/
u cant flow…but ill make ya “Hip-Hop” like Bo Jackson//
I aint scared of no “nitemarre” kid you must be on some meth/
And Yo I never SLEEP…cuz sleep is da cousin of death*//
Holdin ya breath reading my verse hoping it was all a “bad dream”/
Makin a mad scene, cuz the shit u posted aint close to matching//
Now im laughin cuz I carry heavy burrdens wit homicidal thoughts/
After this thread this closed ill have as many Ws as u have lost!//
Im a boulder destructive & brain washed like an iraqui soldier/
as he “lays” I'd swing a 9 Iron & knock a “chip” off his shoulder//
Step on ya neck with metal cleats use ya arteries to floss my teeth/
Lash and cleave, my ass reeks use ya scalp to wipe my ass cheeks!//
My chest it grows ahead of da I rest I go even if u test my flow/
…Id leave u hangin low and sterile, like old tes-tic-les//
ure way behind but this aint no fukin tape so there’s no rewind/
I’ll shoot ure brains through ure mouth & u still coudnt speak ya mind/
Every line rhyme for rhyme is combined wit copious mellifluous enzymes/
I reign(rain)through a drought(writers block)no doubt it would be cloudy but id shyne//
aight battle
both had dif styles so it was a nice battle
breakdown=
punches=herbal
sustainment=herbal
metas=tie
flow=nite
structure=both
enjoyment=both
multis..lacked them
overall=herbal
def had harder punches...thats the speration
nice from nitemarre tho...i was impressed by both
MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT UP THE BATTLE IN MA SIG...PZ
I CAN SEE AT LEAST ONE OF YOU ARE ON SO HIT UP THE BATTLE IN MA SIG............................................... ..............PZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Vote Herbal
YOu had a alright verse, u killed him pretty much everywhere........nitemare you need some major elevation........
Quotables:
Step on ya neck with metal cleats use ya arteries to floss my teeth/
Lash and cleave, my ass reeks use ya scalp to wipe my ass cheeks!//
good battle, I'll break this down for ya:
opener-herb
closer-herb
wordplay-herb
punches-herb
personals-herb
creativity-herb
overal-herb
overall a better verse, altough other guy came strong
HIT THIS UP FOR ME< gettin slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=p.stylez
uppin this mug #1 although it should be 3-0 someone forgot to poll so its 2-0 nite i was surprised at ure drop you gave ure best effort kid not bad, not bad at all