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Aight Since You Takin Somethin So Little, So Personal
Callin Me Out Cuz I Said You Was Weak...
Here We Go...
::Rules::
You Spit First (You Called Me Out)
10 Lines
No Feeding
No Biteing
No Recycling
No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
NO D/R VOTES
No Freeposting
Drop Soon!!!
Poppin off from the Qwerty and use a keystyle to beat you/
Clear cut I'ma treat you, fuckin Diamond Mindz are see through/
5-0, I'ma streak through, like police coming after YOUR shit/
Put this bitch on Locke and knock ILLunatic into -=[oRbiiT]=-/
Poor bitch, wonder what scripts this whore bit, fuckin nuisance/
Call it Tha Remix when he's Coin*'n a phrase from Tu Cents/
Translucent and terrified, seein thoughts your mind'z makin/
Notice the sig and avy, that's twice that your ass was shakin/
45's leavin you mistaken, your chest is holey, but you ain't blessed/
I must confess, I cut him off at the waist to get a leg ahead of the rest/
Just so you don't come off with some bullshit trying to say that I prewrote, I'll give you till tomorrow at midnight to post your verse. Most of that came from your scrolling Crew List at the bottom. I didn't know you were gonna set this shit up while I was offline.
Aight.....................
Polls reset to 0-0................
You can drop now illunatic......................
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Today's the 5th....you ever gonna drop?.................................
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Sorry Lethargic
I've Been Really Busy...
I'll Drop Soon...
TODAY Tho....
My Bad Homie.....
But Yea...
It Will Be Up Today..
Seems you forgot to drop again............................................. .......
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Knall....
I Didnt' Forget....
Tha Site Was Down Last Night...
So I'll Post In A Few Minutes......
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You've been on a lot today. Just post your verse already. I'm not tryin to beef cuz we're straight now, but I think 5 days is plenty of time. Especially since I've seen you on for the past few hours. Just drop your verse.
Lethargic Is A Wannabe Textcee? I Laugh Then I Smack Him Wit Tha Mic
Please Kid Your Not On My Level In Text, So Drop The Mic Let's Fight
Murder Ya Wack Ass! Now Feel My Imbitions To Put Leth In Painfull Positions
Fuck Writtens! Now Whats It Feel Like To Barely Beat Newbies With Bittens
I'm Way Above This Kid, I Told Him He Was A Wack Emcee, He Didn't Attempt To Rebel
Stop Ya Thug Act, The Only Way You 'Die By The Gun' Is If You 'Kill Yourself'
Vets Frown Upon Ya Text, This Kids Thoughts May Be Hatching, So I Shoot-Down-His-Nest Wit Tecks
This Kid's Possessed, So I Send A 'White Flag' Through His Chest So He Can Die A 'Peaceful-Death'
I'll Hit U Up Wit Some Flows, You Battle Newbs So It's Like You Battle 'Amungst Ya Own'
Ya Fagness Is Showin, The Only Way Ya Punches Connect Is If Ya Rap Over A 'Mobile Phone'
Thank you...uppin for votes.
Few Explanations...when I dropped my verse he was in DM and had his crew members names scrolling on bottom. He also had that pic you see in his sig for his avatar. Just so you don't wonder where I'm gettin that shit from.
My Breakdown
Punches-Tie (both had sum played punches)
Flo-Lethargic
Structure-Lethagic
Wordplay- Tie
Multis-Tie
Creativity-Lethargic (Illunatic used to be wit DM and that shit you used with my crew members was dope)
Illunatic came too basic and nothing really stood out in his verse
Vote=Lethargic
What The Fuck???
Who Was On My Name And Dropped?
I've Been At The Hospital All Day.....
1 Of My Cousins Got Shot Yesterday
So I Couldn't Of Done That....
WTF???
iight heres the break down
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Lethargic Is A Wannabe Textcee? I Laugh Then I Smack Him Wit Tha Mic
Please Kid Your Not On My Level In Text, So Drop The Mic Let's Fight
------played line didnt hit to hard
Murder Ya Wack Ass! Now Feel My Imbitions To Put Leth In Painfull Positions
Fuck Writtens! Now Whats It Feel Like To Barely Beat Newbies With Bittens
-------this didnt hit to ard but i was feelin it
I'm Way Above This Kid, I Told Him He Was A Wack Emcee, He Didn't Attempt To Rebel
Stop Ya Thug Act, The Only Way You 'Die By The Gun' Is If You 'Kill Yourself'
--------played
Vets Frown Upon Ya Text, This Kids Thoughts May Be Hatching, So I Shoot-Down-His-Nest Wit Tecks
This Kid's Possessed, So I Send A 'White Flag' Through His Chest So He Can Die A 'Peaceful-Death'
-------GOOD SHYT...but streched
I'll Hit U Up Wit Some Flows, You Battle Newbs So It's Like You Battle 'Amungst Ya Own'
Ya Fagness Is Showin, The Only Way Ya Punches Connect Is If Ya Rap Over A 'Mobile Phone'
---------no...1st line was ok..the second ..no
overall i give this bout a 6.8/10
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Poppin off from the Qwerty and use a keystyle to beat you/
Clear cut I'ma treat you, fuckin Diamond Mindz are see through/
-----amazing punch rite here...greatness
5-0, I'ma streak through, like police coming after YOUR shit/
Put this bitch on Locke and knock ILLunatic into -=[oRbiiT]=-/
-----this was pretty goood, nice wordplay
Poor bitch, wonder what scripts this whore bit, fuckin nuisance/
Call it Tha Remix when he's Coin*'n a phrase from Tu Cents/
-----no..didnt like this...some peopel wont b able to get it
Translucent and terrified, seein thoughts your mind'z makin/
Notice the sig and avy, that's twice that your ass was shakin/
----LOL....nice..wordplay was key here n the whole shake thing was good.
45's leavin you mistaken, your chest is holey, but you ain't blessed/
I must confess, I cut him off at the waist to get a leg ahead of the rest/..........played closer....just worded differntly
ill give this a 8.4/10
vote- lethargic
WHAT THE FUCK
I DID NOT SPIT THAT SHIT
THIS SHOULD BE DELETED
OR CLEAN IT OUT
SO I CAN SPIT MY SHIT DOWN
DAMN....
Lethargic Took This With His Punches Alone..
It Sux If You Didn't Type That Shit..
But Leth TOok It
Vote - Lethargic
I Know I Cant Vote Yet, But We All Have Been
In This Situation.. I Took The Time To Hit This Up
So Please Return the Favor Here.. Thank U
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