White-Virus vs. TREACH P

10 lines max
Spit at tha same time
Check in
No dickride, hate, crew, ect votes
deadline tonight...


this is my check in

heckin in about to spit.............................................. .................................................. ............................................

........it's time for war..........

Imma bout to "annilate" this newbie ripper, leave him "mortal-y" impaired in "Kombat"//
Your lyrical uzi to my pistol, I don't even have to top that//
I'll steal Treach's "Jewels" and still leave him sayin "Dipset"//
Thug on tha net, respect me?, your ill wit my "inject"//
Mr. Veteran, Please take it easy on this light weight//
18-8, am I intimidated?, nah, just usin you for bait//
I got bigger emcee's to take out, and fry off this site//
Please dog, clear ya throat don't choke on tha mic//
TP listen to me, lyrically, you just don't stand a "chance"//
I'll take you "around tha world", "no second shot", so this be tha final dance//


aight man...post

that was a nice flow white i think you could have came a little harder but it was still tight

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I write with agression, and i fight with expression,
All the hype that i'm stressins, like the nicest of lessons
Like a knife when it's left in, you'll get sliced to perfection
I'm the type to keep it tight, Cause my life is a blessin

Bored as all hell right now..........

got writers blcok

White virus? Thinkin he ill he must be havin a mid "teen" crysis,
Ure to wack to write this, Like the herb u are u prolly bite this,
He only started listenin to rap since he found out about b-rabbit,
Talkin bout dancin with me he must be a faggot,gets crushed like a maggot,
White virus it sounds racist, your never gunna elivate from a netcee =face it,
Ure wack ure bars were'nt worth reading, now u must pay BITCH start the bleeding,
Didnt even post but youre freepostin herbs have already swarmed,
How u gunna beat me when none of ure punches arnt even luke warm,

Both Came Weak.Punches Werent All That Great On Either Part.White-Virus Attempted Wordplay & Metas But That Was Too Weak Also.Treach P Takes This One Because Of Better Disses

Vote-Treach P

thanks uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...

All of the people that
voted for treach p is
dick rideing if I could
vote white virus you
will have my vote go
to front lines and look
at my battle.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>one>>>>>>>>>>>

Uppin this shit yall...let's get sum votes commin Drop a link witta honest vote......................................

Quote:

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Originally posted by Killjoy
All of the people that
voted for treach p is
dick rideing if I could
vote white virus you
will have my vote go
to front lines and look
at my battle.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>one>>>>>>>>>>>

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wtf ....... only one perosn voted for me dumbass

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vote treach p
he came out harder,... not a real good battle, but treach came out with betta punches and only for that reason, I'll have to go for him

could you return the favur and drop an honest vote here? thx
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=79460

Vote-Treach

This battle was pretty weak for 2 vets, I don't know if you were tiered or somthing. Teach came a little harder, he had the flow and punches to win. I really liked this one:

Didnt even post but youre freepostin herbs have already swarmed,
How u gunna beat me when none of ure punches arnt even luke warm,

That was one of your better punches.

White-Virus-You had a pretty good spit, not up to maximum standards but it was pretty good. Elevate and good luck in the future.:)

Sorry about that, I forgot to drop my link, please vote on it:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=79478

if i could vote, i would vote for treach P. why? he just had a consistent spit of disses. his flow was a little better, and white-virus kinda went soft after his third line, i was dissapointed after an opening like that. that third line though, in white virus's verse was killer though

I'll steal Treach's "Jewels" and still leave him sayin "Dipset"// - White Virus


Ayo drop by and give an honest vote for my battle with Syntext
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=79626