rules:
15 lines
5 votes
no d'riding ect.
lets go sign in
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rules:
15 lines
5 votes
no d'riding ect.
lets go sign in
i'm here fella u wan go first or wut
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matter fact i'll drop it now
I'm ready
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I'll battle this cat//Even tho it's obvious that,
His heart is where his adams apple is at,
In your sig it say who you wasted fuck what happened before,
In this battle i'm a Giant that's squashin a bug,
You'll never be on top you're tha coaster under tha coffe mug,
You like lunchables sittin there hopin and wishin(it's a commercial)
Sayin Mayhem really flows wit precision,
If your real records 4-0 heres a loss i'm opening sickened,
No jokin i'm illin it's been a minute,
This dude is way soft like dead in tha middle of a,
Honey bun or tha heart of a didler(didler=faggot)
My lyrics like a paddle that's spankin your posterior,
Thinkin that you beatin me really you ain't serious.
Go hard homie.
I done spit my verse and u ain't even check in yet
It's 1 eastern you got a hour homie.
Write your prewriteen and post it.
I'll be back in a few. 1
-He put “Mr” in his name, without it no one shows him “respect”-
-He wanted to “lead” the battle so he starts his verse with an “indent”-
-Why did you sign in to the thread, you wanted to battle, you can’t be serious-
-You suck, I’ll punch you in your gut until your mouth has a period-
-Call this a game, I win in poker, or relate this to black-jack but I don’t play with jokers-
-Hes a choker, I’ll freeze this “player” like “Nintendo” until he can’t “continue”-
-Let me see if your gonna recycle those lines, Give I want something new to me-
-He tries to run like a vet, He has balls?…shit he barely hit puberty-
-You’ve been battling here longer, but you still aint gainin’ a belt-
-it aint gonna help putting Mr. In your name to make a rep for ya’self-
no need to pre-wreite against you, don't try to sound hard, vote up, im going to vote on others rite now, ill be back
it usuually don't help startin and endin your verse tha same way
but we'll let tha votes tell sa tale lil man
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both of ya need tas shut the fuk up an jus let ur verse be voted on by the voters-"thats what we are here for"-now....
Mr.Mayhem-
your meti's where kinda dumb-no offense
flo was well-i dont kno where it was-lets put it that way
punches-i guess if ur callin people coasters under coffe mugs-thats not real hard is it.......
sickened-
wordplay-u had it but period line is really really played as was the nintendo-
flo-i'd have to say u had pretty decent flo thru-out the verse
and as for punches u hit a hella lot harder than coaster'boy...nice punches-i commend u on that....
overall i say sickened takes this one-
dont know how mayhem is 5-1...gues he finally battled sum one wit a slight amount of talent-
vote-sickened
a yo u entitled to your opinion
But don't cum thru my battles talkin bullshit bitch
I seen sum of your battles
You're in no position to down a nigga home boy
1-0 me, uppin, ^^^lol, no comment, but lets get my votes in real quick............................................. .......................
ayo- sickened- i forgot...if ur interested drop a try-out verse in the undefeatable tendencies crew forum....pc *1*
[u] c'mon uppin for this mo-f'n battle............................................ ...............................[/i]
Mr.Mayhem did really well against this newbie........better flow and punches although Sickend had better wordplay my vote goes to Mayhem
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=65697
lol ok, makes me wonder who is who though, lol, vote up poeple............................................ .....................................