WK 2: Diso Vs Bahriman - Diso Wins

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@Diso @Bahriman

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@Diso @Bahriman
Bars due tonight

You ain't been decent in years, you're for sure a clown
Better shake the dust off... quicker than ya girls dildo after your around

Bahriman bar



I’ll on sight you. In daylight bullets take flight, you drop
Meaning soon as this surcease me turn the corner? Your life’ll stop

Got Bahriman winning with the surcease bar. Diso bro you rhymed & flowed well but it was playground insult-ish, just missing some wordplay.

Vote Bahriman

I won’t lie, surcease isn’t a word I was immediately familiar with and it took me completely out of the punchline here trying to read it a couple of times to make sense of the sentence. I kept reading it as “sir cease me turn a corner” but I guess he pronounces it “sir sees” maybe, it just doesn’t work in my accent unfortunately and feels unnatural to use.

I’ve got Diso here. Cleaner in concept and execution.

Didn’t like Diso bar. Felt like a last minute throwaway. I think Bah had the better attempt here easily.

V/Bah

didnt feel much of both but I got bahriman for a better execution attempt of a concept

diso was really basic and nothing happening there. need to add some more sting to it

v/Diso

Surcease was a nice word, i just feel like it you are going to use the world in this unbroken form it should also match with the sentence before you break it down into smaller phonetics. that's the only thing that spoiled an otherwise fire delivery. Diso's bar was funny,not really original, but i think it was solid all around with a good concept.

I got Bar here by a cunt hair.

I read Baron's vote and felt the same about the surcease word. I thought I was dumb for not knowing that word but shit's just weird and I'm not even sure how it's being used here lol. Diso's wasn't much of a punch but an attempt I felt did more for his bar than that wild ass wordplay Bahriman tried. Sometimes it pays off to take risks and sometimes it doesn't.

v/Diso

4-3 need a few more

Sir sees?
No
Why would you be calling him sir like that?
Just no

Diso had a light, simplistic ass concept
1 that should not have won, but it made sense

Vgt diso

Solid spar here - I got diso taking it, although it was a simpler concept I felt like it hit harder on first read. Good battle