Dangermanship vs. look$

this cat challenged me and cant even provide the credits

10 lines
standard rules
drop by midnight latest but the sooner the better

lol ok its fine will drop asap

check

check i guess :/

g'luck.....


ill make amends, and cut off ur life supply and now your dead end
cus der no wer ur gonna go with those raps its time to stop the pretend
to be honest i aint got time for you fam, but ill past this hour
and stomp on your face as i walk by the local clock tower
ur the type dats into incest sex, n ur moms dnt tire shes an exhaust fan
and your the type 2 cower, so u sholdnt take danger into account man
ill take ur ass 2 japan, den maybe u could c im treadin on a thin line
after i put your ass to the floor, and tread all over your weak spine
its already defined, you was born a loser you dumb fuck
u got the worst delivery, dats y u should spit with a garbage truck

Quote:

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Originally Posted by lOOk$

^^^ lol u clearly dont know wot ur talkin about but ill give u on wot u said about thw wording, i dnt really give a fuck n 20 mins is just enough for me 2 bring dis up. so let the votin come in den will talk on hopw wack I AM. (dats toward u dangermanship.)

10 LINES
DUE IN AN HOUR
HOUSE RULES
ILL PM DIS 2 U HOE

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Pasty smurfs shouldn’t battle, if you have doubts
Look$ in sad shape already – like he survived fall out.*
Your name and feedback both attest to your vanity,
Look$ more biased and misinformed than Sean Hannity.*
Ware preambles to scandal when opening your mandibles
I’ll cannibalize you and your verse like I’m Hannibal*
Fuck look$, you’d only drill a girl being a dentist
and bring heat only off the set of Apprentice
If Look$ Could Kill… it’d only be his MC appearance
Find a new profession to pay your severance.

*nuclear fall out
*Fox News need I say more
*Hannibal Lecter- famous villain-look’em up

ill take ur ass 2 japan, den maybe u could c im treadin on a thin line
after i put your ass to the floor, and tread all over your weak spine

vs

nothing.

i can tell you didnt put any work into your verse looks which couldve cost you this battle..but you had some ok lines...alot were played or just wait...you didnt come with any personals on this kid..which is why i wasnt feelin your verse..danger you came weak and had nothing..you tried a personal and failed...read other battles make sure that there vet battles and get a hang of what a punch or personal is...but this battle was meh...v/looks.

up.1

dj- ur feedback sucks- u describe every battle the same way - one punch versus nothing

uppin 1 - no more noobish breakdowns

if u dont get a bar pm me or look$

up.2 word i feel wot ur sayin dangerman

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=312328

hit that


ill make amends, and cut off ur life supply and now your dead end
cus der no wer ur gonna go with those raps its time to stop the pretend
^^meh
to be honest i aint got time for you fam, but ill past this hour
and stomp on your face as i walk by the local clock tower
^^lol
ur the type dats into incest sex, n ur moms dnt tire shes an exhaust fan
and your the type 2 cower, so u sholdnt take danger into account man
^^meh
ill take ur ass 2 japan, den maybe u could c im treadin on a thin line
after i put your ass to the floor, and tread all over your weak spine
^^iight
its already defined, you was born a loser you dumb fuck
u got the worst delivery, dats y u should spit with a garbage truck
^^nah



vs.



Pasty smurfs shouldn’t battle, if you have doubts
Look$ in sad shape already – like he survived fall out.*
^^meh
Your name and feedback both attest to your vanity,
Look$ more biased and misinformed than Sean Hannity.*
^^meh
Ware preambles to scandal when opening your mandibles
I’ll cannibalize you and your verse like I’m Hannibal*
^^meh
Fuck look$, you’d only drill a girl being a dentist
and bring heat only off the set of Apprentice
^^meh
If Look$ Could Kill… it’d only be his MC appearance
Find a new profession to pay your severance.
^^meh


ok now pen ANYTIME you have to explaine your punches ... they shouldn't have been used at all



V/looks

break down my verse too if u want to vote i dont think these cats gave my punches a second thought- really surprised at philly for not taking the time to appreciate the almost obvious (but not obvious enough apparently)

good battle look$

feedback edited in

up 3 thanks for the feed guys, ill hit the links soon

up 3