Yeah .. Ten Lines
Due Whenever
Good Luck dude
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Yeah .. Ten Lines
Due Whenever
Good Luck dude
I'm In... Hope these are the rules you wanted
thanks cuz....
ill drop now while i can.
rules are fine cuz.
You won't win, but I understand how writing ends desire
I treat your verses with intelligence, enlighten them on fire
Calling you wack is true. calling me wack is a sin to be fair
so I'll scalp this bitch .. & end his chances to win by a hair
he calls himself "Versatile" .. Dude you'll never be felt still...
I found it funny, you quoted yourself when nobody else will
this next lines got a homonym, your stalling is recent,
Man if I right a wrong - It'll be cuz I was calling you decent
So bitch in conclusion I'll basically give you fucking hell
Cuz your post said it all, And you wrote well... nothing well
[I][B]Ill Break Feebles Mind,As To Feeble?? Your Relevence Is Great,
But Why Did This Prick Join A Crew Whoms Intelligance Is Fake?,
Check Ya Elements Mate,As Ill Be Hooking Ya For Chanting,
But I Seriously See How Things Are Looking Up.......
From Where Your Standing!
But Seriously People,Ill Be Left Handing.....This Gurken,
But Are You Rap Battles Or A Right Bitch???...........
...................As Only The Second One Fits The Person!,
Ya Writs Aint Hurting!!! But You Think Im Scared Now???
Seriously,they Like Fake Tattoos Cuz,THEY WARE OUT!!
man had nothing....way shit goes i guess...peace.
lol at me forgetting the bold and italic shit....grr im pissed at myself...
Dope Verse Cuz.....Thanks For The Experience.
Nice battling you
id say this was a weak battle for both of u.. ive seen betta... imma vote for versatile... i jus think he edged feeble just a tab bit... nuthing to special in this battle.. seemed like jus a quick battle cuase yall was bored or suntin.. but anyway.. decent punches from the both and flow was iight on both sides.. but ima give it to ver for the fact his opener was better and ending.. thats about it tho.. stay up yall keep rhymin no hate no dr... check my sig u kno
vote versatile
funny thing is i cant vote.. jus my input :)
Alright Lol
Up
daym wish i could vote and get some in erre...lol 37 views and no legit voters =(
You won't win, but I understand how writing ends desire
I treat your verses with intelligence, enlighten them on fire
Calling you wack is true. calling me wack is a sin to be fair
so I'll scalp this bitch .. & end his chances to win by a hair
those were cool
Check Ya Elements Mate,As Ill Be Hooking Ya For Chanting,
But I Seriously See How Things Are Looking Up.......
From Where Your Standing!
coulda been dope.
wording eh..
vote Feeble.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=298632
and I just know youll get to this.
actually like them lines to lmao PZ
v.versatile
heres why:::ver..you was coming wit the punches,personals,and vocab..i liked the flow you had going on....alright mettas..and not bad multies..you need work on your strucure...hot drop...feeble...you came hard in mettas and multies..okay persoanls and punches..i felt that ver came harder in this one..with a more complex and steady verse..no hate..or beef..~1~