these eyes don't see color

hook
these eyes don't see color
if you cool i'm a love ya
black, porterican,...........................chinese, or white
if anybody call me racists they better be ready to fight

verse 1
hey ma i know people runnin they lip
they say i only like you cause you a black chick
like the hook says i don't see color
if you cool to hang out wit then i'm gone love ya
i put my foot in my mouth when i recorded black bitch
people runnin they mouth an it make me flat pissed
ma i want you to keep bein my girlfriend
i like you for you not the color of ya skin
but ma you gotta trust me
an always believe me
i don't care if you was the whitest chick in the world
.................i would be there askin you to be my girl
you be my beyonce an i'll be ya jay-z
cause i really want you to be my baby
these eyes don't see color

hook
these eyes don't see color
if you cool i'm a love ya
black, porterican,..........................chinese, or white
if anybody call me racists they better be ready to fight

verse 2
people say interracial relationships are wrong
but they dumb as hell...they don't know whats goin on
...............christions say that but i say fuck church
christions can take that for what the fuck it's worth
.........................an if i'm goin to hell for likin you
then i guess i'm goin to hell cause i really like you
i don't care about other people apinions
they just fake as hell they keep on pretendin
but i'm stressin this shit out so you'll believe me
cause if we don't talk about it you gone leave me
see i really like you
so baby what it do

hook
these eyes don't see color
if you cool i'm a love ya
black, porterican,.............................chines, or white
if anybody call me racists they better be ready to fight



just talkin
see i really do like you. i don't care if you was white,porterican, hispanic, latin what ever race you was i wouldn't care. i like you for you cause you cool to hang out wit. but now i wish i would've never recorded black bitch. thats just the way i feel but ma i really like you so we need straighten this shit out.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=269672
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=270065

meh, try n come with come with more complexity, this was ok but to basic..

werdz.

thanx dawg

i liked ur topic cuz u could tell it was ur xperiences dat brought it about--(of course ima like the puerto rican part) and ur hook was tyt
i agree^^^dat it was kinda basic structure and all but overall i like ur drop
keep postin and chk my OM "Letter From A Ryder" and return the favor.
Gracias!
-Mari

"Letter From A Ryder"
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=270190

aight thanx ma i'm a go check it out right now

Thnx & no problem papi

papi that means daddy right. oh well ya did ya thang on ya peice ma peace out

uppin

hmm this drop was alright, my opinion. it had kindergarten flow to it but the topic was nice .

Quote:

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don't care if you was the whitest chick in the world
.................i would be there askin you to be my girl
you be my beyonce an i'll be ya jay-z
cause i really want you to be my baby

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Come on now fat boy, you can do better then that.

Quote:

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christions say that but i say fuck church
christions can take that for what the fuck it's worth

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you mean christian? i get the point .

Overall this was not up to par, had nursery rhymes to it but i mean at least you tried right. The topic is the only thing that kept me interested and you came real on that maybe the next drop you have will be hot . maybe .

aight thanx j the next one i drop will be hot

uppin

big j i really liked readin this piece.. now even though there was room for improvement.. but what made me carry on readin this was tha topic.. & the way u wrote it.. i mean this shiit was straightforward & 2 tha point! which was great.. & yeah very slowly i can see slight improvement in ur text.. jus keep writin aiite hun..1

& oh i found ya verses in my pm's for our collab.. i'ma write my shiit asap then i'll post it in o.m aiite... stay up hun......1

aight ma thanx for the feed. i was gonna send the verses to you tonight, but since you found them i don't now but just pm me when they done aight ma peace out